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| 2011-11-23 04:39:33 |
Ramadan. |
Fantastic, treuly fantastic story! If this is your own story (and I only question it because the story is so good), then you are a true artist. This is a masterfully created story, as rich as the Arabian story teling tradition to which it adheres. As others have commented, you bring to life the scenes in a way few people can. Not to mention that it tickles and teases some of my (and I predict many men's) deepest fantacies. Beautiful. |
| 2011-08-31 01:33:37 |
First Experience With Analingous |
Thanks for the comments. Glad you enjoyed it enough to want it to be longer. This story began as a forum posting that got a little too long. Hence it isn't as long and doesn't have as much background detail as I would typically like in a story. I may work on a more complete version, but alternatively I may just try and complete some of the other fictional stories I am working on. |
| 2011-08-27 03:10:53 |
The Handsome Rapist |
That last comment was from me - I somehow got logged out between pressing the "Post a comment" button and my comment being posted. |
| 2011-08-27 02:39:22 |
Asian Wives Club |
I like where this is headed and look forward to the next installment! |
| 2011-08-27 01:57:34 |
Harry Potter and the Spellbook of Desires - Chapter 33 - Seeing Double |
Fantastic story, but I wish Padma had licked Parvarti's ass. Maybe in another chapter? |
| 2011-08-27 01:43:45 |
Parking Lot Escapade |
Mai I've come back to read this for a second time it was so good. And it is going in my favourites list! This story is really hot, as are your others, but your writing in this one is far better. Putting in more background, descriptions, and working on punctuation and the like really make a big difference. It's a quality story and very hot! Would love to be in Alan's position.
I notice you haven't written a new story for a while. I know life can get in the way, but please please please come back and write another story! XX |
| 2011-08-27 01:29:41 |
CALL GIRL CHRONICLES PART 8 -- WORKING IT OUT |
Ahh, I was somehow logged out - that's why it wasn't working. In the favourites list now! |
| 2011-08-27 01:27:44 |
CALL GIRL CHRONICLES - PROLOGUE |
This series probably has to be my favourite on here. |
| 2011-08-27 00:48:56 |
Forbidden Desires |
I wish I had a teacher like Miss Hashitani when I was in school, or like you, for that matter, Kimi. I can't believe people would think this is wrong in any way. What teenage boy wouldn't love to be taught about sex by Miss Hashitani. |
| 2011-08-27 00:19:22 |
A Wild Night |
I had to come bakc and read this one for a second time. As with all your stories I've read so far, this gets a positive rating from me. |
| 2011-08-26 23:56:50 |
All for Mr. Redman Chapter 6 |
Sorry about the double post - my bad. Anyway, I continue....
As Im sure has been said before; if any man ever treats you poorly or you are looking for some lovin, feel free to contact me! We could go to bed and.... read stories together! Heheh.. Id have to get my girlfriends approval first though, but Im sure shell love you! She is bi, at least, so the possibilitys there. |
| 2011-08-26 23:55:14 |
All for Mr. Redman Chapter 6 |
Wow, Jade! Another fantastic story! I'm so impressed you can continue to interest, surprise and arouse me with this same series. I should be bored by now. :) I know how you do it though; with your amazing talent!
I love the depth you bring to your stories, all the funny and often sexy circumstances you bring to life; I love the characters, I love Sochiko's strength and independence; and the sex is nothing short of mind blowing (and ball blowing as well)!
I love your taste in sex. Sometimes I'm not sure if you've somehow read my fantasies and are writing them down just for me. In any case, you give me hope that there is people out there with similar preferences. Even the events in this chapter I found guiltily sexy. My girlfriend and I are going through a similar situation, although I'm trying to introduce her more slowly than Peter did to Sachiko. :) I feel your description of what it must be like for a woman to go through such an experience is vividly accurate.
As Im sure ha |
| 2011-08-26 12:26:01 |
Asian Fascination |
Not a bad start. It's very brief, and lacks some description, as you mentioned yourself. These are things to work on for your next story. The scene is very smutty and sexy and the girl sounds hot. Could have done with a better ending, but that's something that can be worked on later. Also, I can understand why you might just say the pddress is 111 Fake Street, but adding in random but believable detail really adds depth to the story. It helps the reader imagine they are really there with the character. So I would advise using not so obviously fake details in the future. I look forward to reading your next story. |
| 2009-11-09 06:39:00 |
The Continued Adventures of Ric and Aly. (2) |
Nice storry... again! Aly is hot! Loved the thong! But when is he going to take her in her sexy ass? Give us some hot Aly anal! :) |