| Date |
Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-07-21 16:45:49 |
Best Little Whorehouse on XNXX (includes gals from this site) |
Great story - I'm insanely jealous not to be in it ;)
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| 2011-06-20 15:29:20 |
Still Life. |
Wow, that was incredible! I'm almost lost for words. Amazing, absolutely amazing xx |
| 2011-04-05 09:47:19 |
Mistress Hazel |
Wow some nasty remarks there. Again, note the tag 'written by women' - unless hoping that Mistress Hazel 'ripping of your cock' was aimed at one of the other delightfully erudite coments |
| 2011-03-31 12:50:01 |
Mistress Hazel |
Where can I start on the comment below. Let's see - fucknuts? You obviously haven't taken the time to check that I am female - ditto for having balls and being a dick. You could have worked that out just from checking the tags - ie 'written by women'. To anyone else thinking this comment was written by wantsomefun - very early on I got a comment from him on the forum that was complimentary and positive, and he has posted countless timesthat he doesn't leave comments on stories.
Cijababe |
| 2011-03-08 16:15:02 |
Mistress Hazel |
Thanks to Wimmers for burying a spam post that made the story unreadable xx |
| 2011-03-08 04:16:32 |
Sweet Melody |
Nice work, enjoyed it xx |
| 2011-03-08 03:16:25 |
Disaster at Antonio's |
I loved it! The spacing threw me a little but not enough to stop reading or to spoil my enjoyment. The sentences were a little short and choppy but that added to the style, and it was highly entertaining. Good writing, interesting plot, incest handled in a way that kept me reading,. Top marks from me!
Cija |
| 2011-03-05 16:03:01 |
More Than He Bargained For |
Thanks for the comments. I do have a part two in progress, but it won't be finished for a while. |
| 2010-10-02 18:06:03 |
A Time To Come. |
Very different and unusual - I kind of knew the ending was coming, I didn't want to read that part :( |
| 2010-08-12 05:07:52 |
The Beach |
Anonymous, I appreciate constructive critiscism. A pity I can't understand what the heck you mean..... |
| 2010-08-01 10:17:41 |
If Only. |
Very dark and unpleasant, the characters were deeply unlikeable but horribly believeable. A difficult topic and well written. |
| 2010-08-01 10:14:15 |
ONENAUGHTYGIRL. |
Interesting but it didn't engage me, I found the characters hard to beleive in..... |
| 2010-08-01 07:20:25 |
NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN |
You need a good proofreader - did you rush it for the deadline? |
| 2010-08-01 07:18:47 |
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Nice work - good luck in the voting
Cijababe xx |
| 2010-08-01 07:17:14 |
Vacation For Two - Saturday |
Masterly work. I'm not a fan of incest, but this drew me in nicely. Superb, I can't fault it at all and definately one I will have to consider as a contender for my vote
Cijababe xx |
| 2010-08-01 07:15:35 |
Sophie's Summer Holiday |
I enjoyed this Jayney, I like how your stories aren't all the same. Good luck with the voting!
Cijababe xx |
| 2010-08-01 07:12:55 |
Johns Last Summer |
I enjoyed this, it was a sweet story, but the formatting needed some work, it made it difficult to read. Voted positive xx
Cijababe |
| 2010-08-01 07:04:45 |
Summer Tease |
Love the ending, definately a contender....you make my choice difficult.
Cijababe xx |
| 2010-08-01 07:03:31 |
Sweet Little Lucy Likes My Wheelchair |
I really like your writing style, it's superb and I have a lot to learn, but the subject matter jars with me. I did warm to the characters, just couldn't quite suspend disbeleif. I wish you well in the voting - and thanks so mcuh for the comment xx
Cijababe
Cijababe |
| 2010-08-01 07:00:06 |
Emily Goes To Vegas |
Em, I did read your story, or tried to, to be fair and unbiased when I vote on the competition. I had to skim it, I'm sorry. Not my style, vital statistics are a real turn off for me, I like to leave a little to the imagination. But I'm glad that others like it and you have a loyal following. Good luck with the voting
Cijababe |
| 2010-08-01 06:49:59 |
SUMMER'S END |
I had to think long and hard about it, but then it deals with something controversial and that can't be easy. Glad you have some positive comments
Cijababe |
| 2010-07-28 19:00:18 |
Contest entry: Bonds of youth |
A teen story with a difference, I love it! So much emotion and conflict - and a happy ending too, what more could you ask for? |
| 2010-07-27 13:39:44 |
I guess I really DID need a vacation! |
Really liked it - it suited my mood - nice to read something that didn't involve teens or incest. |
| 2010-07-27 06:28:55 |
Second Honeymoon |
LOL - loved it, how refreshing - no underage, no teens, no incest - and humour!! Loved it to bits xx
Cijababe |
| 2010-07-26 08:53:44 |
Teacher's Summer Vacation |
Really great but some errors, you switched tenses - a but more proofreading next time. Loved it anyway.......
Cijababe |
| 2010-07-24 04:27:35 |
Alexis Season 1 (Parts 1-5) |
Loved it - great work sweetie
Cijababe |
| 2010-07-11 16:20:42 |
Remember That Night |
Beautiful, Jayney xx |
| 2010-06-22 17:59:51 |
Moving On |
Thankyou - I'm working on a stand alone piece for the next writer's competition, but will return to this one when I can. The 'inspiration' for the previous character dropped out of the picture, hence Cija having to toughen up..... |
| 2010-06-18 02:17:37 |
Late Arival |
NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR
Apologies for the typo in the title - and for not telling folks to read my previous two so that it makes more sense. Thanks to all for your kind comments on this and the others. |
| 2010-06-17 04:49:40 |
First Saturdays |
Absolutely stunning - you were so lucky to find someone like that. And so beautifully written. I will be keeping an eye on your work
Cijababe |
| 2010-06-04 12:30:27 |
VAGINAFEST - Chapter 1 |
I'm really sorry that the title actually put me off reading this story. I enjoyed it, but you skimmed over a lot - I would have preferred a more detailed description of a shorter period of time. Still very nice overall. |
| 2009-07-13 08:51:53 |
Across the Way 2 |
I don't usually enjoy FFM, but that was wonderful...... |
| 2009-06-16 07:31:00 |
The Chair |
Amazing!!! Loved it... |
| 2009-06-09 13:40:17 |
The Restaurant |
Veeery nice, loved it. |