||Even though the Christmas holidays have passed, this brought it all back. I can almost here music playing and see the ballet dancer - naked, mind you. This was a real treat. Thank you for sharing.
||SEX FORMULA 69
||The original story by ahorsewithnoname is one of our favorites in the funny sex romp category. You kicked it up a notch here. We need to spend more time her so we get invited to participate.
||The Wolves of Paris.
||We obviously don't read enough. When we do, we tend to go for the romances, or the sexy funny stuff.
This one required a different mindset. Absolutely brilliant. A real contender for five points from us.
||Best Little Whorehouse on XNXX (includes gals from this site)
||This was great because we got to read about a lot of people we know and people we don't. You are a really good humorist, as well as a great erotic writer. Great job.
||Phantom: A Love Story.
||Hauntingly erotic. You are a fabulous writer. This is piece should be part of a novel. Extremely well done.
||CAW 10 *The Best Decision I Made*
||I like the characters. Very nicely constructed. Your editor did a very good job.
||CAW 10 - The Banger Sisters
||Nice job, could use some editing, but nicely told.
||You told a pretty good story. Good luck in the CAW.
||For My Woman's Love
||A nice change of pace from your poetry. Very well crafted and very well told. It deserves a higher rating.
||The Best for Society a Calling All Writers X story
||I wish you would take the time to proof-read and make corrections before you post. I seem to remember one story that you did that on and it was such a nice change. You tell a good story, man, but your mistakes are really distracting.
||Brandon's Secret Lover
||Another wonderful submission from a really wonderful author!
||Your writing always keeps us guessing. Another great story, wimmers.
||You did a great job of turning a fairy tale into an erotic story. Right amount of playfulness, right amount of sex.
||Mary Christmas Everybody
||It's writers like you that make us realize how much we have to learn. Very, very good English comedy.
||Pussies and Boots: A Piece of Fairy Tail
||In case no one has mentioned it - you are so very good at what you do. Great story, Jack.
||Through the looking glass
||Really well done piece.
||Emily Goes To Vegas
||Very, very hot and sexy.
||Contest entry: Bonds of youth
||You are a writer we will continue to follow. Wonderful story, packed with emotion. Please allow us to read more.
||NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN
||Without the errors, this would have been great. Nice beginning to what we hope will be a series.
||One of the best - a beautifully crafted piece.
||Vacation For Two - Saturday
||We read the entire series, but chose to post our comment here. There is a reason why you are the reputed king of erotic literature. You provided a complete story, not just a fuck fest. We appreciate your attention to detail, and your character development, in addition to your intimate scenes. Thank you so much for this.
||Sophie's Summer Holiday
||I don't think there is one emotion you didn't strike in me. Excellent job - and a short story that could easily translate to a novel.
||I guess I really DID need a vacation!
||You turned a tragic episode into an tender, erotic story. I really loved this and hope you continue with these characters.
||Adult humor at it's finest. A truly loving tale of Murphy's Law.
||Johns Last Summer
||This was a great story that was so true to life. Very fine writing.
||A lot of sex, but then it was about the porn industry. Tragic ending.
||And when she was good she was very very good, but when she was bad she was better. I certainly hope to see a second chapter to this story.
||Terrifying, but a really good story.
||How I spent my summer vaction
||A great first-time story. Thanks for sharing.
||A wonderful build-up to a surprise ending. Great writing.
||Teacher's Summer Vacation
||I don't ever remember being that brazen in high school. Great story.
||A Good Kind Of Trouble
||The truck driver was a knight in shining armor. This came across as autobiographical, so we're going to guess you are a true romantic. Great story.
||Sweet Little Lucy Likes My Wheelchair
||Another wonderful story from a really good writer. Thanks, JAT!
||You painted a beautiful picture of romance. Stunning vistas, believable characters. Just wonderful.
||The Vertical Smile - part 2
||It's nice to see that you continued your story. Keep writing, and we'll keep reading.
||Her Vertical Smile
||Your first story? Where have you been hiding? Very, very good.
||The Rabbit Died - Chapter 3
Yes, there are two of us and we each wrote portions of the story. It started off to be a humorous piece simply about an older woman's sexual rediscovery. We thought we would give it ago, so we passed it back and forth. We're glad you liked it.
||It wasn't a sex story. It was a beautifully woven tale of a special kind of love. Thank you.
||The Rabbit Died - Chapter 2
||Thanks for the vote of confidence, SSB. We're working on the final intallment, but work and holidays are getting in the way.
Erin & Steve
||Dear Sir, we have refrained from commenting on every chapter, but at this point, we have to. We are anticipating the end to this series, and yet we never want it to end. Is there anyone out there as creative and expressive as you? Not many. Please don't keep us in suspense.
||You never disappoint us. When we click on one of your stories we know it will be well-writtien, sensual, and actually have a plot with characters we can visualize and care about. Thank you again for another wonderful read.
||This was beautifully written, well constructed and an absolute joy. I look forward to reading more of your works.
||He Touches Me
You are a master. There is nothing else to say.
Like everything this woman writes, this poem is magical. So much said with so few words. We love you