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| 2012-07-03 06:49:33 |
Today is the first day of the rest of your life |
Who says the ending always has to please the reader? I particularly enjoy it when I ruin a perfectly good horny moment of a man. Perhaps that's the sadist in me... |
| 2012-05-25 13:49:01 |
5ft6, 115lbs, 16yearsold, unspoilt... Sold. - Part I |
Thank you sir / ma'am :) I do enjoy reading comments from those who are acquainted with the full scale of my work. I'm very flattered by your comment. Yes, it is more sinister. I suppose it reflects my emotions in a certain period.
Actually I'm rather amused that this story has issues gaining a high rating. Perhaps too dark for most of the readers. But hey, De Sade didn't get any credit for '120 Days of Sodom' while living either, now did he? |
| 2012-05-11 07:37:24 |
5ft6, 115lbs, 16yearsold, unspoilt... Sold. - Part I |
Can all the jerk-offs stop commercializing their penises below my story before I castrate you all? Thank you. |
| 2012-01-31 05:46:59 |
Basement Rituals - Part III |
Thanks for the kind words folks! im done writing part 1 of 2 of a brand new story, exploring some boundaries on slavery and incest. However, Im a perfectionist and its not to my satisfaction just yet. Ill post it when its to my liking ;) Im also in the progress of creating a plot for a sequel to.... Surprise :) xx tash |
| 2011-11-10 14:11:16 |
It's Not A Handicap part 1 |
Although the story is not really what I personally prefer (rape turns into voluntary and repeatable sex again? The women in the stories nowadays are such pussies. Pun intended.) I admit I really like that you touch upon a topic that many people tend to forget; handicaps and physical disabilities. Your story is the first one I came across which introduces the topic and eroticizes a woman with a physical disability. A very refreshing change from the usual blond 18 year olds. |
| 2011-08-11 08:00:32 |
Getting rid of the whore. |
I really enjoyed your story, especially the way you focus on cruelty and humiliation.
A word of advice: dont let your enthusiasm and creativity get in the way of the quality of your writing. I tend to do the same, got so many sick twisted wonderful thoughts that I rather keep writing instead of rereading and editing a story. But it is, in my eyes, a necessity, e.g. punctuation and reference words. We know youre a sick kitten (like myself), now show us the talented writer in full glory too. |
| 2011-07-26 10:10:26 |
What comes around, goes around... |
He always drank his coffee black. It's a symbolic way of showing he is raw and dark purely by nature but only discovered it through dominating Alex.
He mentioned 'next time' because Alex had teased him the last time by adding sugar to his coffee. He simply made clear that from now on, he is the boss and he makes the decisions, for both him AND for her. Whether it is how he drinks his coffee or.... Stay tuned for part 2, coming soon. |
| 2011-07-26 09:32:46 |
Basement Rituals - Part III |
I'm working on a sequel as we speak! I can give a small hint; Ryan foumd himself to enjoy inflicting!harm upon little Alex more than he thought... Stay tuned. |
| 2011-03-16 05:08:00 |
Fucking Mr. Scone |
Still one of my absolute favourites since I joined here. Arcutus is a true embodiment of dominance! More men should take him for an example... ;) |
| 2011-03-14 08:32:31 |
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I really enjoyed your story. It was short but powerful and very well written. Thank you for the pleasurable read. |
| 2011-03-11 06:49:12 |
Ellie part one |
What made me like this story the most was the rural setting. Many of the stories I read have an urban setting. I also like the idea of a father having a flash-back causing him to project his unfaithful wife onto his daughter as a motivation to rape.
However, what was somewhat dissapointing is the way you started the story very detailed and building up tension, only to finish the sexual encounter between Ellie and her father in record time. You should rewrite it from the moment her father walks in on the two young lovers and take more time to describe the sexual acts and the way both Ellie and her 'paw' experience this encounter. |
| 2011-03-11 06:44:06 |
Mean Street |
I was very impressed by your work. Not so much for the 'turn-me-on' factor, which did not quite catch me, but because you created an immense sympathy for the main character.
I'd almost call it a psychological drama instead of a simple sex story, because the content reaches far beyond a simple 'fuck'.
Well done! |
| 2010-12-14 15:12:42 |
Megan and Her Mom |
A brilliant story, as I've said before. Keep up the good work, Mr. C! |
| 2010-07-03 19:29:14 |
My sister, the Bitch (was taken down i found it) |
Thank you SO MUCH for adding this story again! I read so many on here and this was always one of my favourites, however I couldn't it anymore. I'm so glad to have found it again! |
| 2010-07-03 17:50:55 |
Basement Rituals - Part III |
Who knows, I might write a sequel. I'm working on two other stories at the moment, but after that it's a whole wide world of possibilities. Stay tuned :) |
| 2010-04-24 18:50:35 |
Hot Nurse's punishment |
Loved this story, you took your time on all the action which definitely added to this story. The beginning wasn't bothering me at all, it gave me the time to get into the story and to feel for the character undergoing the harsh treatment. Only thing which seemed inconsistent was that Ruby enjoyed the oral sex with Dr. Hartley after the assault from previous night. You'd figure she'd severely hate him for it. At least for a day. Good story though!! |
| 2010-04-24 18:07:28 |
Vampire slave |
The story has potential, I loved the dominant element from the vampire. But I agree that you have to improve your spelling and grammar. After all, a good story is not just the plot.... it's also how well it is written. Work on that (spelling checker ftw?), take your time on describing the sexual acts and your next story should be much better :) |
| 2010-04-24 17:51:50 |
Michelle's forgotten physical |
Liked it. However, I would have liked to see the sexual acts being a little bit longer and more descriptive. And (but this is me whining ;) ) less Angie. Her name was all over the story non-stop.
You picked a good theme for you, you seem to know your terminology and procedures to write stories doe medical fetishists. Keep that up for sure! |
| 2010-04-11 17:30:13 |
Basement Rituals - Part II |
I'm working on two new stories, but it will definitely take some time. If you enjoyed 'Basement Rituals', I can recommend you 'What Comes Around.... Goes Around' which was my first work. Thank you for your kind words! |
| 2010-04-10 09:07:32 |
Basement Rituals - Part II |
Thank you!
Just a small apology from my side: Part II lacks themes, I forgot to add them in my enthusiasm to get them online. I messaged Lemark for this issue so this should -hopefully- be fixed fast. |
| 2009-12-06 13:23:54 |
What comes around, goes around... |
I'm 21, I still am someone's beloved daughter. Sick? Maybe a little. But I speak for every rape-writer on here if I say that we express our fetish in a healthy and harmless way. Don't like the theme? Don't read it. |
| 2009-11-03 10:44:19 |
my new submissive family |
Interesting, I'm looking forward to the sequel(s). Take your time on the sexscenes though, build up the tension some more to intensify things. And rough em up a bit... but that's just a little something of mine ;) |
| 2009-11-02 08:38:32 |
What comes around, goes around... |
Thank you all for the praising comments! I'm glad to inform you all that I'm working on a new story as we speak, so keep an eye on my profile for those interested.
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| 2009-10-17 17:37:00 |
My Friends Sister - A Schoolgirls first time. |
' Me and tim have been friends for a while now, and I never really thought much of his sister. She was 3 years younger than me, so I never had any real interest. This was until, she came back from summer camp in early september. She was 15 years old at the time (I was 20),'
Watch the (calculation) mistakes mate, made me lose interest so soon already... |
| 2009-10-10 10:02:22 |
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Don, women can write these stories, dont you worry about that :) Great story Suzette! The descriptions in the beginning set a good scenery and made his situation much livelier. Not much to complain about actually, just keep doing what you're doing (but I tend to agree with some others that the victims should be a little older...) |
| 2009-10-01 09:17:52 |
What comes around, goes around... |
Thank you for the replies. Indeed, it might have been better to cut it into pieces... But I guess I'm allowed to make at least one beginners mistake ;) I'll make sure to edit this one. |
| 2009-07-27 16:44:25 |
Josh teaches his sister a lesson |
I didnt mind the violence at all, it keeps the adrenaline flowing indeed. Great story! But that's a matter of personal taste of course.
Also I liked the fact you kept it very realistic, using the music to make sure no one hears them, not coming inside her because there is uncertainty whether she's on birthcontrol... love the details.
Small sidenote, use capital letters next time to give it that last true shine of as excellent story. Didn't bother me too badly though :) |
| 2009-07-26 17:42:40 |
End of the Game |
Loved it. Nailed the dominance feeling very well... and then end was surprising! Keep writing. |
| 2009-07-26 16:49:58 |
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Hmm, I missed alot of struggle though, the struggle was there but not very realistic. Plus her mood switched from reluctant to willing in no time... shame. But I guess that's personal taste.
Also, what made me laugh is you nailed me with the story. I'm Natasha, green-eyed brunette with D-cup. How did you manage that?? lol.
Otherwise, good story, nice action! |