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Comments from del fuego

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Date Story title Comment
2009-09-06 23:46:26 The First Night in the Cabin LOVED THE INTRO.

You called it.

ROFLOL
2009-09-06 23:52:52 bonding with daddy VINCE, DRASTIC IMPROVEMENT IN YOUR WRITING.

Very good and erotic. keep up the good work.

Hot !!!
2009-09-07 00:02:02 me and jess Excellent for a first try. 7/10

keep going, develop the characters as people and their feelings for each other. Just because its incest doesn't mean it should short circuit the normal man/woman love and desire. Flesh out the story, add detail,

eagerly waiting for chapter 2

POSITIVE
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