Comments from salmaklak
|2009-04-07 13:17:00||Not bad. Could have had more detail.|
|2009-04-12 07:15:24||MY FIRST SERIOUS AFFAIR - PART 1||Absolutely brilliant. Please send the next part soon!|
|2009-04-12 07:16:43||Young Girls||Good story! More! more!|
|2009-04-12 07:22:53||MY FIRST SERIOUS AFFAIR - PART 1||The first story on this site which claims to be a true story, shich I actually believ!|
|2009-05-27 02:10:05||New Daughter, Chapter 8||This is a very well developed story. Your grammar is good, although there are a few small spelling /typo mistakes, but not as to curb the story in general. I find the last chapter a bit unrealistic: Kimmy just seems to be too knowledgable even though she had been submitted to all sorts, it's just a bit far fetched. I think you can do well in future and good luck.