Comments from salmaklak

Date Story title Comment
2009-04-07 13:17:00 Not bad. Could have had more detail.
2009-04-12 07:15:24 MY FIRST SERIOUS AFFAIR - PART 1 Absolutely brilliant. Please send the next part soon!
2009-04-12 07:16:43 Young Girls Good story! More! more!
2009-04-12 07:22:53 MY FIRST SERIOUS AFFAIR - PART 1 The first story on this site which claims to be a true story, shich I actually believ!
2009-05-27 02:10:05 New Daughter, Chapter 8 This is a very well developed story. Your grammar is good, although there are a few small spelling /typo mistakes, but not as to curb the story in general. I find the last chapter a bit unrealistic: Kimmy just seems to be too knowledgable even though she had been submitted to all sorts, it's just a bit far fetched. I think you can do well in future and good luck.