||Crazy Mom and Aunt Redone
||Why didn't you bother to correct your spelling and grammar mistakes as long as you were taking the time to rewrite it? It's very distracting to read a story with so many errors in it.
||How I Got Back In TheGame
||I hope there's more coming. You are a very good writer. Keep the story going, even if you have to fictionalize the rest of it, because there's a lot of potential here.
||Vacations over moms blackmailed
||Very annoying to read with so many grammatical and spelling errors.
||The Adventure of Julie Grey - Schoolteacher
||Gave a negative rating because you stopped your story right in the middle of a hot sex scene. Quit playing games and finish what you start.
||My game at the game
||I agree. I think you really write well.
||Not so picture perfect
||I didn't like the way the first half of this ended because it left you totally confused as to what Judy had actually done. This half was a real tug at your emotions and a great love story with a truly happy ending after the first half being such a downer. The only complaint I have is the glaring inconsistency between the first half where Gary catches them in the motel and Judy's side of the story where she and Pete are caught in her own bed at home. Other than that, I really loved it, especially the way it ended. Keep writing because you really have a natural talent for it.
||Innocent Mother Seduces Son Ch. 1
||Spelling and grammar leave a lot to be desired, but all in all a good story, what there is of it.
||You also need to distinguish the difference between fiancee as a future spouse and finance as in money matters. You did get it right once though. Another word that you misuse frequently that bugs me is defiantly when you actually mean definitely. But other than that a great story even though it was somewhat long. Keep up the good work.
||My First Hotwife Experiance
||I would like to see the pictures. Please tell me how!