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| 2009-09-17 01:46:36 |
A Night With Maria |
Loved it. Your stories are always so hot. `coldcase 187 |
| 2009-08-16 18:52:01 |
A Night With Kari (an Homage to Jeff) |
Loved it. Thought the murder scene was really hot. -coldcase187 |
| 2009-08-16 18:46:44 |
Hitching a Ride to Murder |
Loved it! -coldcase187 |
| 2009-07-15 22:02:18 |
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It was a little hard to get into...even for a fantasy story, some elements (the sex scenes, the pain, rape, etc.) should be realistic in my opinion. But, keep writing and do not let the insulting 'freak' comments put you off. -coldcase187 |
| 2009-06-28 18:18:09 |
Emo Girl |
Hi Sweetcandy. Hmmm.... a story around Fucktard, eh? Well fortunately (or, unfortunately for me) Fucktard Steve, is a real guy, so I can even send you a picture of him to go along with it (bending over his Porche/sex-toy perhaps?)! :D Let me think of some fictional adventure I could put him through.... I'm sure I could think of something. By the way.... loving your latest stories.
For anyone here who doesn't know.... check out Sweetcandy's work... it's easy to find, look for the (deservedly!) top rated stories in this section -her stories rock! :-) :-) |
| 2009-06-27 20:24:03 |
Transcendent |
Oh special-reader.... you crack me up. I LOVE that your rant went on so long that you ran out of room. Oh no, you're not obsessed. Not at all. LOL!! As for someone "tracking me down" ooooo I'm scared. I think YOU are the one who is taking this whole thing a little too seriously, pal. My stories are just for sexual entertainment. If they're not getting you off, I suggest you take my earlier advice and just move along. No need to keep coming back to tell me you are no longer reading my stories. I heard you the first (few) times. Oh... and good luck on that boycott. You might want to man-up and post your user name first so people know who's leading it. :D
---Thanks for the entertainment. |
| 2009-06-26 02:45:54 |
Transcendent |
To my special fan.... since hooksforhands wrote his stories AFTER this one, I would think it would be difficult for me to steal his ideas (unless you're implying that I read his mind and drew out his future thoughts?). As for Jeff... his work is great and he's also a good guy, which is why we host our stories TOGETHER on my Asstr site. We're not competing. We get along just fine and enjoy each other's work. And you're an idiot. Get over your obsession with me and move along now. |
| 2009-06-10 00:20:06 |
Transcendent |
READER - 2009-06-09 00:04:26 - I am always open to feedback, both positive and negative, and if you look over the comments I've made I think you'll see I never attack people. The fact is, someone visited each of my stories in one day and left comments like SHIT on every one. To me, that was not constructive feedback, it was trolling. I know that trolls come with the territory, but it doesn't mean that I'm not going to call them out.
As for your comments, my response is; thank you for taking the time to read my story and provide your thoughts. I'll keep them in mind as I move forward. I hope you'll stick with me and let me know how you like the next story. :-)
Coldcase187 |
| 2009-06-08 10:29:00 |
Night Rider |
Great first story. I look forward to reading more. :-) -Coldcase187 |
| 2009-06-08 10:10:53 |
Transcendent |
READER 2009-06-06 19:13:47 - Ha ha ha.... you again? You just enjoy leaving me these little love notes don't you? How much time have you spent going over all of my stories and forum posts since I did whatever it was I did to piss you off so much? LOL You know what is fun? Knowing you feel miserable right now. :-) -Coldcase187 |
| 2009-06-08 10:05:17 |
Emo Girl |
Hi. READER 2009-06-06 19:11:11 - Saw your comment on my other story as well. Gee.... I've done something to offend you haven't I? Get over it, pal. -Coldcase187 |
| 2009-06-08 10:02:32 |
Me at 15 -group-sex, lesbo, coming-of-age story. |
Reader - 19:20:58- Such anger.... are you sure you're not my mom? In any event... Who is the other snuff writer with the identical series of stories about a female serial killer? I'd love to read the series. I'm not sure why you think I'm jealous (I've corresponded with several of the other snuff writers here and like them all), or who you are (but from the tenor and severity of your comments it sounds like we chatted directly and perhaps I hurt your feelings), but if you'd rather not read my material, that's perfectly OK. Now... as for whatever is really bothering you about me, I'd suggest you let it go. |
| 2009-06-01 10:20:40 |
Me at 15 -group-sex, lesbo, coming-of-age story. |
Comment from Coldcase187:
This story isn't as happy-go-lucky as some of my others...probably because I put a little more of my real life into it, but hopefully it's still nice and sexy and you will all enjoy it. :-)
This is the first in a series of stand alone stories I hope to write covering the life of a fictional, female sexual serial killer, so comments and feedback are really appreciated. |
| 2009-05-29 01:07:14 |
The Van |
Awesome story. Very hot. Loved it. I can't wait to read more of your stories. I hope your young movie director is able to get some more "experience" ;-) - Coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-28 21:48:47 |
Concert Pickup |
Wow.... That was so hot! Love the discovery of her age. And the ending! You've outdone yourself. I'm completely turned on. -coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-28 02:49:54 |
New Daughter, Chapter 8 |
Great story. This usually isn't really my genre, but I enjoyed it quite a bit. |
| 2009-05-27 16:34:25 |
Transcendent |
Thanks to everyone who has read my story. If you enjoyed it, please take the time to give it a positive rating, as I have been getting slammed pretty regularly with negatives from the "morality police".
As always, all comments -either positive or negative- are welcome.
-Coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-27 16:31:59 |
Emo Girl |
Thanks to everyone who has read my story. If you like it, please take the time to give it a positive rating, as I get slammed pretty regularly with negatives from the "morality police".
As always, all comments -either positive or negative- on the story are greatly appreciated and carefully considered. :-)
Coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-25 23:59:40 |
My Childhood Training PT1 |
Wow, Sweetcandy...another wonderful story from you. You've got me totally hooked on this couple now and I can't wait for more. :) I'm a big fan. Coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-18 11:44:24 |
The Boys Get Lucky |
Loved it. Very hot. Can't wait to read the other stories you posted here. -coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-18 11:38:59 |
Girl on Girl Crime |
Fun. I liked it. My only suggestion would be to draw out the girl's suffering more. -coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-14 00:23:24 |
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Strange... the site wasn't putting my user name next to comments yesterday... but that was me who said I loved the part where both characters are going at the girl at the same time. Very hot. Great story. Loved it. -coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-14 00:18:17 |
Sibling Games |
Great story all the way through. Thus far, every story you've written has been fun to read (not to mention hot!). -Coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-13 21:30:16 |
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Sweetcandy -your stories are great (and hot), keep writing. ignore the haters. ;) -coldcase187 |
| 2009-05-13 00:40:00 |
Summer in California |
Great story. Very hot and I loved the ending. Awesome. Just awesome. |
| 2009-05-13 00:12:31 |
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Wild story. I liked it. Can't wait to see your next one. |
| 2009-05-12 23:59:34 |
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Great story. Love the part where you are both going at her together. Very hot. |
| 2009-05-06 23:34:17 |
Sibling Games |
Great first story and very hot. I hope you post more. |
| 2009-04-21 11:35:03 |
The Murder of Dawn Priestly |
Great story. Love the way it unfolds. I hope you post more stories here. |
| 2009-04-07 21:02:44 |
Baxter and Rosella's Glorious Weekend |
Comments and feedback welcome. :) |
| 2009-03-09 22:23:58 |
Her Last Breath |
This is one of my favorites. I just read it again and it turns me on every time. The part where he is telling her to die is very sexy. |
| 2009-02-15 18:13:43 |
Transcendent |
This is the first story I have posted on XNXX. Please comment. Feedback welcome. |
| 2009-02-11 19:26:25 |
I will do anything to belong vii |
Hot. I got off on it for sure. Nice. |
| 2009-02-11 19:15:37 |
I will do anything to belong iii |
Wow... that was so hot, now I have to go back and read the rest of the series. :-) |
| 2009-02-10 17:14:11 |
A night with Nicole |
Great story and very hot. |
| 2009-02-10 17:11:59 |
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Wonderful. Very enjoyable. What makes Jeffs work stand out for me is his ability mix in a bit of humor without ever tripping up the pace or letting go of the erotic feel of the story. I recommend his entire series. (And I agree with everyone who said that if you don't like stories with these themes, you shouldn't click on the links. He tagged the story correctly. People know what they're getting into when the click on the link.) |
| 2009-02-10 17:07:56 |
A Night with Megan |
Loved it. His entire series of stories is great, but this is one of my favorites. |
| 2009-02-10 10:58:06 |
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Very entertaining and hot. I really enjoyed this one. |
| 2009-02-09 23:29:14 |
Uncontrollable Hunger |
Very enjoyable and well written. |