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| 2013-03-14 04:50:23 |
Gina and her horsies... |
okay that was odd but not the weirdest thing I have read on this site. First off you should have proof read your story then done a little editing. Second a 36 inch cock would have seriously injured a 4'10" woman. so before you post a part two to this story if you intend to do so, I suggest you take some time to edit and refine your story.
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| 2012-12-18 21:07:04 |
The Sexcraft Chronicles - Book 1 - Caroline's Quest - Chapter 2 - Alpha |
when is part 3 coming out? |
| 2012-11-20 22:23:20 |
Fun With Alchemy Day 1 |
the question marks only appear when you first view your stories from the your stories link. if you go to your profile page and then click on your story the question marks will not be there. of course you should re-read your work and edit before posting it makes it a bit easier. |
| 2012-11-20 21:59:46 |
Little Red Riding Hood |
pretty good however you failed to mention one key thing about a wolf's reproductive organ. his knot, canines only orgasm after knotting their bitch and afterwards they are stuck for about 10 to 15 mins depending on the breed. also wolves mate for six hours at a time to insure pregnancy. but other then a few misspelled words it was a good read I hope to see more of your work in the future. |
| 2012-10-14 05:55:40 |
My very first time with an animal |
um... WTF? As open minded as I am that was just fucked up. also you need to learn how to use spell check. |
| 2012-09-07 23:44:18 |
R.P.G.R Episode 2 |
I think my friend just wanted to add some odd elements to her character, while her friend went along with it. I'm not sure what the two where trying to do but just keep an open mind that they meant this to be a sexual rp with some story scenes. |
| 2012-09-06 15:02:02 |
R.P.G.R Episode 2 |
I would like to point out that R.P.G.R stands for Roleplay game R rated. This is a sexual roleplay. |
| 2012-06-07 02:35:30 |
Medieval Torture |
What the fuck......? Okay obviously there are several problems with this story. First it is one paragraph. Second you are missing several words in each sentence. Third you don't capital the letter I at all. Fourth you can't spell worth shit.
If you ever consider writing another story ever again, use a DICTIONARY, read your story once you finish writing it, edit it and then get a friend or family member to proof read it!
In conclusion your stories are horrible and insult the world of literature!
Yes I'm being mean but I have to be to get my point across. And as for Ravnet dhanoa you are fucking insane to think this shit it INTERESTING, and you're full of shit with that job offer!
Now while my stories have some errors I at least admit that they do and try to correct them. Unfortunately I have little time to post the corrected versions. |
| 2012-06-05 05:06:01 |
The Sexcraft Chronicles - Book 1 - Caroline's Quest - Chapter 2 - Alpha |
You better write another chapter else your fans will be pissed |
| 2012-06-04 01:00:59 |
the demon emperor's prize |
Hmm... I enjoyed this story and wish to read a part 2 should you decide to make one. I must say you remind me of a friend of mine, she also has or rather had a mind for demonic fantasy. Keep up the writing I shall read more of your work, and perhaps they will be just if not more enjoyable. |
| 2012-04-06 00:12:35 |
The Change |
Already working on the second part |
| 2012-01-29 23:02:18 |
Mantis II |
That was interesting doing a third? |
| 2012-01-29 22:22:33 |
3 Evil Sisters-Part 4 |
Bravo like all the others this one was great. Can't wait for part 6. Oh and for your side project a harem theme might be more entertaining, but since you are the wither it's up to you. |
| 2011-12-01 23:42:13 |
First time with my cousin Part 6 |
okay this shit is happening way too fast |
| 2011-08-31 20:31:09 |
Sex Between Friends (Full version) |
I will ask if my friend has done more. |
| 2011-08-31 01:59:13 |
Sex Between Friends (Full version) |
Don't comment if you're only going to troll I fucking hate that shit. |
| 2011-08-30 01:24:18 |
Sex Between Friends |
There will be more to com if my friend sends me more of this role play |
| 2011-08-29 17:13:07 |
Sex Between Friends |
Remember not my story I merely posted it. |
| 2011-08-18 21:43:16 |
Your tansgender girlfriend |
Dusk to Dawn Would it not be better to have both?
And yes there should be a part 2 |
| 2011-07-20 16:33:34 |
Virus Surge Part 2 |
Does no one else want to comment? really? Is there anything I could to do make this series better? Come on talk to me people. |
| 2011-07-18 00:06:02 |
Different Daughters Different Dads - Chapter 3 |
Agreed with the last to comments |
| 2011-07-17 00:12:08 |
My Adopted Daughter 4 |
Next one have mark kick his buddies out of the house and have him give his daughter a lecture on what she can and can't do sexually. Then maybe you could have the mother walk in on him and Shanon going at. Just a thought. |
| 2011-07-13 23:42:10 |
a night in the woods |
haven't read this yet but gonna give you some advice Paragraphs! please just one single thing really fucks with the eyes. |
| 2011-07-13 23:24:35 |
Kelly's Magical Saterday |
um okay. well for one rather short and too fast paced. second you should have separated what was happening to both women. and one more thing this reminds me of Kelly's plant and the symbiotic sex plant. not too bad though. |
| 2011-07-02 18:20:29 |
I have a Dick and a Pussy |
Okay then well not too bad I've read worse. But seriously I'm trying to be nice here. Look over this story and do a little editing, your grammer needs some improvement. Also add more detail to your paragraphs, and stop using ( ) with " " marks it just looks stupid. Not a bad plot for a story bt please think about rewriting this. |
| 2011-06-28 22:53:19 |
Primal Urge Pt 2 |
Another job well done. Please continue writing you have talent. |
| 2011-06-28 22:44:51 |
Primal Urge |
Well done very well done. I Applaud you |
| 2011-06-24 01:59:23 |
Virus Surge part 2 teaser |
I hope my readers have enjoyed this teaser, I'm sorry to say that the full version is still a work in progress since there are a few things that need to be fully played out before I can post it. also the chapter name will be slightly different after the intro to help tell what might occur in the story.
Finally I beg for your patients as this will be a longer chapter then my previous ones. Thank you and enjoy this site. |
| 2011-06-06 01:30:34 |
Virus Surge Part 1 |
My dear readers part two is taking longer then expected, due to work and other matters. please be patient just a little longer. |
| 2011-05-26 22:50:30 |
Omg it's sisterly love pt 2 |
Well that is a harsh cliffhanger you better hurry up and post the next chapter. |
| 2011-05-26 22:01:49 |
Omg it's sisterly love |
Pretty good but there were a few spelling errors here and there. Also was a little short but all in all a good story |
| 2011-03-17 23:55:34 |
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Write another please! *begs on hands and knees* |
| 2010-06-02 16:11:42 |
Virus Surge Part 1 |
I apologize for the long and painful wait. But due to some certain and unfortunate problems my computer has crashed, and I am very sorry to say that your wait will be much longer than first expected. |
| 2010-05-01 00:54:56 |
Virus Surge Part 1 |
My dear readers please be a little more patient. I am doing my best to make the next chapter more entertaining. |
| 2009-09-14 03:40:40 |
Dude we totally did it |
First off WHAT THE FUCK? WHAT KIND OF PUNK ASS LITTLE BITCH THINKS HE SO DAMN GREAT THAT NO ONE CAN KICK HIS ASS? FUCK IF I KNEW SOME STUCK UP COCK SUCKER LIKE THAT I WOULD FUCKING DROP HIM. TORTURE HIS ASS TIL HE BEGGED ME TO KILL HIM. FUCK THIS STORY FUCKING SUCKED! |
| 2009-01-19 22:19:17 |
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A great story indeed. Keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter. |