||Thank you so much for the helpful comment; I'll try to give much more description in future stories, and see if they're more well received.
||How disappointing; it looks like this is yet another one of my stories that is a flop. I wish somebody would tell me what is wrong with my stories, so that I could try to improve. I don't mind you rating them down if you think that they're bad enough, but I just don't know how to improve my writing.
||A motel to remember
||Well I do try to write what men like. If people write nasty things about them, i'll not bother any more.
||Newly weds love nest
||The last person to comment, has made an error in saying that my story is true; if you check again, you'll see that it's not listed as true at all.
I can tell readers though, that the very beginnings are based on my true experience, and it's where I got the idea for the story.
My husband and I did in fact, when first married, move into a house where our neighbour was an old pervert just like Tony in this story. I was quite aware that he used to look out for me, and take every oppotrunity to talk to me whenever my husband was not at home. He used to use a lot of suggestive innuendo when talking to me, but that's as far as it ever went.
||Naked in the night
||I do wish that people woundn't be so nasty to each other, and say such horrible things, I really don't like it.
If one person says horrible things about me or my writing, it is no reason why others should react in a similar way in response. It's all so nasty, and it upsets me to see it; please don't. I know that my stories might be silly in parts, but I try my best to write what I think will make you feel sexy and excited..
||I've completely misinterpreted what men are looking for in this type of story. Perhaps some other women might like reading of treating men in the way that Sophie does here. Anyhow, I've asked the site controller to remove the story. Perhaps I'll tackle it again from a different perspective at some later date.
||Well what a failure this story has turned out to be - 5 out of the first 10 don't like it. I think that I'll abandon my idea of writing on the various themes listed in the story index. Sorry that I couldn't have done better for you all.
||Used and abused in my first foursome.
||Thank you to the last commentor, for your very kind comments.
My last story, a failure at humour, was personally judged by the moderator, and, seemingly because he didn't like it, he kept it off the 'new stories' list even though he included about 15 or more stories from the one author, and my story rated higher than many of the others listed.
In annoyance, I asked for all of my stories to be deleted, and I destroyed a long, three part story which I had ready for submission. I'm not posting stories here when I get treated like that.
I don't mind readers commenting negatively, but the moderators should treat every story equally.
As you see, they ignored my request to have my stories deleted.
||Fucked to death - a murder mystery
|| I'm glad that someone liked my story. I don't think the moderators did - it took ages before it was published and has been kept off the "latest stories" list on the home page.
Anyhow, it's really "snuff" in name only, and is just meant to be a silly bit of humour.
||Flogged senseless - for sadists only.
It's myself that I write of, so your comment makes me feel sort of funny.
Surely not many readers would want me to go so far.
||For sadists only - My second torture session
||I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading of my torment.
I will write a third episode, but realistically it would be several weeks before it would appear on your screen.
||For Sadists only - My first time with the lash.
||Hello 'Reader' and 'Miss 23',
Thank you so much for taking the trouble to give me some feedback.
Re. the first comment: I see that my story achieved it's aims.
Yes, I will write a continuation.
Re. the second comment: I did introduce my story for "Sadists only". I can see that it definitely would be a turn off for anyone not enjoying such violence.