| Date |
Story title |
Comment |
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| 2010-04-24 13:59:06 |
A Short Love Affair |
Excellent storytelling. I look forward to reading the rest of your work |
| 2009-06-25 20:35:09 |
Bow down to the one you serve Ch2. |
Excellant...will be watching for the next segment |
| 2009-06-25 20:21:16 |
Bow down to the one you serve |
very good |
| 2009-05-24 08:09:14 |
Stormy Night: Little Sis Comes to My Bed |
My friend, as always it is a real pleasure to read your work...I just love your style and flow...another top notch work... |
| 2009-05-06 22:13:41 |
The Smell of Sweet Little Jasmine |
My god...what a read... |
| 2009-05-01 21:25:43 |
The Captain Chooses Rachel Ch. 2 |
Excellent...please continue |
| 2009-04-28 21:48:49 |
Abduction |
Very good...go ahead and finish it |
| 2009-03-15 22:17:27 |
Hotel Gang Bang |
Sweet... |
| 2009-03-15 18:04:50 |
School of Hard Cocks |
Good story, perfect training...and to the reader below...just because it isnt to your taste doesnt make being either a master or slave shit...my master makes me feel things and takes me to heights of pleasure that no non-dominant man can ever bring forth with their tepid "lovemaking" |
| 2009-03-14 19:45:19 |
Office Visit |
Good start...go ahead and finish it... |
| 2009-03-13 21:13:44 |
Love Slave |
Very good...extremely well told and hot as hell... |
| 2009-03-11 20:52:02 |
wolves in the forrest part 1 |
excellent writing...you have a definite talent for catching and holding the reader's attention. Catch the stuff like staying in first person, and spelling during the proofread, and you will be perfect... |
| 2009-03-11 19:29:23 |
Fae sex |
Not a bad storyline, but you really need to stay in one tense when you write instead of switching back and forth between past tense and present tense |
| 2009-03-10 19:22:20 |
Love Honor and Obey - REVISED |
Lucky woman to have found her true master...and lucky you to have your true slave... |
| 2009-03-08 21:37:14 |
Serious Mistake Going Sailing |
Excellant story. Will there be a follow up with the new master? |
| 2009-02-28 23:16:41 |
Space Farm |
good...definitely holds the attention |
| 2009-02-28 07:44:46 |
Bless me Father (for I have sinned) |
Excellent as always |
| 2009-02-24 20:27:30 |
The Neighborhood MILF |
Not bad, but if you stretch it out a bit with more descriptives and more foreplay it would be about perfect. |
| 2009-02-11 23:17:10 |
Home Alone |
As always excellent |
| 2009-02-11 21:19:46 |
How it started |
Great story, you have a definite descriptive ability m'dear |
| 2009-02-08 12:38:15 |
Cadbury in Service |
another excellent read...good work styxx |
| 2009-02-08 12:21:58 |
Trinity |
Always enjoy your writing...keep it up |
| 2009-02-06 21:53:24 |
Jane's Safari |
excellant |
| 2009-02-06 19:18:38 |
The Stray |
Very hot story |
| 2009-02-04 21:53:17 |
Never going back....The Festival |
Love it...my kind of fantasy |
| 2009-02-04 20:35:04 |
kidnapped and enslaved pt one |
good start, flows nicely |
| 2009-02-03 19:33:46 |
Rachel - The Babysitter |
Excellent...perfect just the way it is. |
| 2009-01-31 22:36:49 |
The Tiger and the Kitten |
Very nice, just the right touch |
| 2009-01-31 21:22:38 |
Helen's Fall Into Depravity |
Excellant...leave it right where you did. |
| 2009-01-31 21:03:59 |
my mistake |
Good story, carries you right along |
| 2009-01-29 22:31:12 |
Syphrice Don Vladimir's Chronicles pt. 3 |
Very good, especially like the way you did the hypnotic sequence. |
| 2009-01-29 14:23:12 |
Syphrice Don Vladimir's Chronicals pt. 1 |
The story is good, just watch your syntax and tenses |
| 2009-01-28 21:32:36 |
Taking it under the Pier |
very nice..a good sweet read |
| 2009-01-28 21:23:52 |
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Story is good, but the child is just too young |
| 2009-01-19 20:18:36 |
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Thoroughly enjoyable, both satisfying and stimulating...I'm hooked. |