||A Short Love Affair
||Excellent storytelling. I look forward to reading the rest of your work
||Bow down to the one you serve Ch2.
||Excellant...will be watching for the next segment
||Bow down to the one you serve
||Stormy Night: Little Sis Comes to My Bed
||My friend, as always it is a real pleasure to read your work...I just love your style and flow...another top notch work...
||The Smell of Sweet Little Jasmine
||My god...what a read...
||The Captain Chooses Rachel Ch. 2
||Very good...go ahead and finish it
||Hotel Gang Bang
||School of Hard Cocks
||Good story, perfect training...and to the reader below...just because it isnt to your taste doesnt make being either a master or slave shit...my master makes me feel things and takes me to heights of pleasure that no non-dominant man can ever bring forth with their tepid "lovemaking"
||Good start...go ahead and finish it...
||Very good...extremely well told and hot as hell...
||wolves in the forrest part 1
||excellent writing...you have a definite talent for catching and holding the reader's attention. Catch the stuff like staying in first person, and spelling during the proofread, and you will be perfect...
||Not a bad storyline, but you really need to stay in one tense when you write instead of switching back and forth between past tense and present tense
||Love Honor and Obey - REVISED
||Lucky woman to have found her true master...and lucky you to have your true slave...
||Serious Mistake Going Sailing
||Excellant story. Will there be a follow up with the new master?
||good...definitely holds the attention
||Bless me Father (for I have sinned)
||Excellent as always
||The Neighborhood MILF
||Not bad, but if you stretch it out a bit with more descriptives and more foreplay it would be about perfect.
||As always excellent
||How it started
||Great story, you have a definite descriptive ability m'dear
||Cadbury in Service
||another excellent read...good work styxx
||Always enjoy your writing...keep it up
||Very hot story
||Never going back....The Festival
||Love it...my kind of fantasy
||kidnapped and enslaved pt one
||good start, flows nicely
||Rachel - The Babysitter
||Excellent...perfect just the way it is.
||The Tiger and the Kitten
||Very nice, just the right touch
||Helen's Fall Into Depravity
||Excellant...leave it right where you did.
||Good story, carries you right along
||Syphrice Don Vladimir's Chronicles pt. 3
||Very good, especially like the way you did the hypnotic sequence.
||Syphrice Don Vladimir's Chronicals pt. 1
||The story is good, just watch your syntax and tenses
||Taking it under the Pier
||very nice..a good sweet read
||Story is good, but the child is just too young
||Thoroughly enjoyable, both satisfying and stimulating...I'm hooked.