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| 2012-07-30 15:11:11 |
Rachel - The Babysitter |
Thanks for the comments guys! I appreciate all the constructive criticism as well. As far as the ignorant ass that was so brave that you posted anonymously that this was a stolen story, mine was posted here on Jan 27, 2009. If you are computer literate enough (which I doubt), maybe YOU can put a link here to this story where it was posted ANYWHERE on the internet prior to that date. I'm sure that you can not, and also positive that you will slink your little troll ass back into whatever hole you came from, and that we will (thankfully) never hear from you again... |
| 2012-07-30 15:05:03 |
Jennifer, the Neighbor's Daughter |
Thanks for the comments guys! |
| 2012-07-30 15:04:20 |
The Chronicles of Amy |
Thanks for the comments guys! |
| 2012-07-30 15:03:25 |
Julie Gets a Handy Man |
Thanks for the comments! As far as using the same phrase, I didn't realize that until after I posted them, but honestly these stories were written over a period of years, not all at once, so my apologies for being redundant. Other than that, I hope you enjoyed them! |
| 2012-07-30 15:03:02 |
Julie Gets a Handy Man |
Thanks for the comments! As far as using the same phrase, I didn't realize that until after I posted them, but honestly these stories were written over a period of years, not all at once, so my apologies for being redundant. Other than that, I hope you enjoyed them! |
| 2012-07-30 15:01:55 |
Camping With Katie |
Thanks for the comments guys! As far as using the same phrase, I didnt realize that until after I posted them, but honestly these stories were written over a period of years, not all at once, so my apologies for being redundant. |
| 2009-12-02 16:43:59 |
Rachel - The Babysitter |
I appreciate everyone's enjoyment of my stories and wanting more, but I realize that I am just that...a story writer. I have no designs on being a novelist. I really enjoy writing about sexual discovery and first time experiences. No offense, but there are tons of stories on here about sex. I just enjoy writing short stories that capture a moment of discovery or awakening. After that...it's just sex, and I'll leave those stories to the many great writers on here. Thank you for your kind comments and appreciation! - jl317 |
| 2009-12-02 16:43:19 |
The Chronicles of Amy |
I appreciate everyone's enjoyment of my stories and wanting more, but I realize that I am just that...a story writer. I have no designs on being a novelist. I really enjoy writing about sexual discovery and first time experiences. No offense, but there are tons of stories on here about sex. I just enjoy writing short stories that capture a moment of discovery or awakening. After that...it's just sex, and I'll leave those stories to the many great writers on here. Thank you for your kind comments and appreciation! - jl317 |
| 2009-12-02 16:42:40 |
Camping With Katie |
I appreciate everyone's enjoyment of my stories and wanting more, but I realize that I am just that...a story writer. I have no designs on being a novelist. I really enjoy writing about sexual discovery and first time experiences. No offense, but there are tons of stories on here about sex. I just enjoy writing short stories that capture a moment of discovery or awakening. After that...it's just sex, and I'll leave those stories to the many great writers on here. Thank you for your kind comments and appreciation! - jl317 |
| 2009-12-02 16:41:19 |
Jennifer, the Neighbor's Daughter |
Thank you, psychotic pessimist for your understanding. I also appreciate everyone's enjoyment of my stories and wanting more, but I realize that I am just that...a story writer. I have no designs on being a novelist. I really enjoy writing about sexual discovery and first time experiences. No offense, but there are tons of stories on here about sex. I just enjoy writing short stories that capture a moment of discovery or awakening. After that...it's just sex, and I'll leave those stories to the many great writers on here. Thank you for your kind comments and appreciation! - jl317 |
| 2009-11-04 15:12:52 |
My Brother's Wife |
Nice plagerism....btw, that means copying someone else's story and posting it as your own, but I'm sure you wouldn't know about that. It just happens that you copied MY story. What a loser! |
| 2009-05-27 11:38:08 |
Rachel - The Babysitter |
Thank you to the guy who thinks I go to high school with him! I'd LOVE to be 15 again, but unfortunately, that age is long gone. He's yanking your chain big time! Besides, you just proved that 15 year olds can't write anything without using the phrases "dude" and "like..." LMAO!!! |
| 2009-04-08 12:50:57 |
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Parts II and III already posted...search by author. |
| 2009-04-02 14:46:15 |
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As mentioned earlier, I took this story down long enough to fix the spacing and margin problems. Sorry for the hassle!
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| 2009-03-24 07:53:08 |
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I took this story down long enough to fix the spacing and margin problems. Sorry it was so hard to read before. Thank you for your patience! - jl317 |
| 2009-01-13 15:56:32 |
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Thanks again for all the criticisms, both positive and negative. Again, I apologize for the spacing and paragraph problem, and as stated way back in some of the comments, it was not like that on my end originally, but was caused when I uploaded it. Apparently I was using a font this site didn't like! ;o). |
| 2008-12-13 09:33:53 |
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"...Also, I'm guessing you want me to put my name down for you so if I were an author, you could use your cheating and give any of my stories about a hundred and fifty negative votes a day for the next two weeks." - Unknown Ass
No, actually, I probably wouldn't bother, not being able to get past the first paragraph of one of your stories, as you obviously can't string together two consecutive intelligent sentences without falsely acusing someone... |
| 2008-12-12 16:19:10 |
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"Amount of votes to amount of reads ratio is over 250% the average for recent stories on this site. If you're going to cheat to make yourself feel better, don't make it so stupidly obvious."---Quote from "unknown reader"
The only thing that's stupidly obvious is that you are an ignorant ass. Also, you're so brave to leave your comments under "unknown reader" rather than logging in with your real username. You're a real stud. |
| 2008-12-09 07:55:28 |
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Once again, I apologize for the spacing. I didn't realize that when pasting a story from a word doc to this format, that it would delete all my spaces and tabs. i discovered this after i submitted my first batch of stories, and now I cant edit them. Will do better next time! |
| 2008-12-08 07:17:07 |
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Thanks for all the constructive criticism! As for the format, please know that this was my first time posting here. I had already typed the story, WITH PARAGRAPH SPACING AND INDENTIONS, and it is properly punctuated on my copy. However, I didn't notice that copying and pasting it in this format ELIMINATED all my tabbed paragraph indents. I'll try and do better next time. |