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| 2013-02-18 04:27:28 |
My Aunt. The final chapter. |
Thank you for the feedback. I'll keep it in mind in my next stories. I agree 46 is a little old but possible adn not completely uncommon.
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| 2012-10-01 14:24:16 |
Sexting Mom, Ch. 4 |
Definitely one of the best stories, if not THE best story I've ever read. Insanely hot, well written, great plot, great suspense. 10/10! |
| 2012-09-13 17:05:09 |
My Aunt. The spoiled housewife's story. Ch. X. FINAL PART |
Dear commenters:
Thanks for your reviews so far (at least for the constructive ones ;) . I noticed them and in large parts agree with them. This is not the end the story deserved. I've had it rest for a while and today started writing again.
I would like to have some people read through my first draft to get some early feedback.
If anyone is interested please pm me. First ten people to ask get the sneak peek.
Thanks for reading and keep on commenting on the stories you read. Those two minutes of effort are the fuel that keeps us writers running. Thanks a whole lot for that! |
| 2012-02-27 16:03:16 |
My Aunt. The spoiled housewife's story. Ch. X. FINAL PART |
Thanks for the comments so far. I agree. As I said I am not happy with the result myself. But somehow I didn't know how to get the plot around and to be honest I was just glad to get it finished somehow to start something new.
If somebody has suggestions where this plot might have gone please feel free to publish an alternative ending to it or pm me. |
| 2012-02-15 18:28:44 |
My Aunt. The spoiled housewife's story. Ch. VI |
Thanks for the suggestion. "cooed" is a way better word, I agree with you. I'll keep it in mind next time. I'm not a native speaker, so my vocab has its limits. I always welcome suggestions on that part. |
| 2012-02-11 05:27:52 |
My Aunt. The spoiled housewife's story. Ch. IX |
Thank you guys very much for the constructive critizism and suggestions. That's the fuel that keeps me running. I'll see what I can/want to incorporate. There is going to be one last chapter coming up sometime next week hopefully. And hopefully this one time I'll keep my deadline;)
Also I already started gathering ideas for a new series, any suggestions or ideas are VERY welcome. |
| 2012-02-07 09:18:20 |
My Aunt. The spoiled housewife's story. Ch. V |
no it is pure fantasy. nothing about this story is real whatsoever. |
| 2012-02-07 09:14:16 |
My Aunt. The spoiled housewife's story. Ch. VI |
dear anonymus. this is fantasy as indicated by the tags. if you're not down with it, so be it. but please keep your critizism fair and at least put in some effort on your spelling. |
| 2011-08-25 18:34:07 |
Loss and Gain: Chapter Four |
Great work Captius. Really enjoyed reading it! |
| 2011-08-25 08:28:46 |
My Aunt. The spoiled housewife's story. Chapters I-III |
Thanks for the compliments and criticism. Sadly English is not my native language, but as my native tongue is not really popular in this forum i decided to write in english. If you have any suggestions as to grammar feel free to write me a pm. |
| 2011-08-25 08:11:45 |
My Aunt. The spoiled housewife's story. Chapters I-III |
Thanks for the compliments and criticism. Sadly English is not my native language, but as my native tongue is not really popular in this forum i decided to write in english. If you have any suggestions as to grammar feel free to write me a pm. |