|2009-10-03 09:04:53||Have to agree, some of the comments are creepy!!!
Not into incest, but a fantastic story. Very well written and paragraphed and all. Wonderful flow and just keeps you reading. Definitely a 10/10
But to the creepy comments and ppl who want to do it now after reading this story... u gotta be kidding. ITS A STORY. A FANTASY.