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| 2010-04-20 19:35:17 |
An Unusual Hotel.... |
A wonderful piece of literature. Yes, its porn but its also literature. It was very Twilight Zone, and I loved the ending. Very well done.
-ejls |
| 2010-04-10 18:53:34 |
A Very Difficult Daughter |
I don't know why I waited so long to read this. An amazing love story. Thank you. |
| 2010-04-05 05:03:23 |
Mental and Physical Asylum |
You have a great imagination, but you really need help in proof reading and paragraph structures. This is the second story I've read, and I'm very impressed with this future fantasy world you have created. I feel you need to explain and describe that world more. Not a bad job from a new writer. |
| 2010-04-04 09:11:36 |
Backyard Princess, Chapter 5 |
I got up very early this morning and read this series in one sitting. You never cease to amaze me with your talent. this is another example of why you are considered one of the premier writers on this site.
-ejls |
| 2010-03-31 18:44:16 |
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Good story, good imagination, great descriptions. Watch your points of view. Nice job, SS. |
| 2010-03-31 18:20:53 |
The Rabbit Died - Chapter 3 |
This was fun, funny, warm, loving and everything a mature romance should be. It was also sexy as all hell. Thank you for a great ending. |
| 2010-03-26 04:58:39 |
Just one girl..... |
Nice to see your writing cherry has been popped. The first comment was correct - expand on your idea. You have the powers of description in place; now seduce us. |
| 2010-03-22 21:12:47 |
No Escape |
Holy crap, Mark. That was unbelievably hot and romantic. Extemely well done. |
| 2009-12-06 20:11:50 |
The Cowboy and the Schoolgirl |
That was a wonderful story, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Wonder, sensitive and sexy as all hell. |
| 2009-12-06 19:51:57 |
The Unauthorized Sex Story of Jack Schitt |
The integration of story and joke was brilliant. Great writing. |
| 2009-12-02 18:19:58 |
My Neighbor's Incest Part XV |
I do take issue with something you said in your own comment. Sir, you ARE a writer. Well done again, my friend. |
| 2009-11-22 08:31:44 |
My Neighbor's Incest Part XIV |
With each chapter, you become a more accomplished writer. It's been a joy watching you grow. I expect to read great things from you, my friend. |
| 2009-11-09 06:06:19 |
My Neighbor's Incest Part XIII |
No reason to vote negatively here, BiStander. You hit another one out of the ballpark. |
| 2009-11-06 22:21:15 |
The Rabbit Died - Chapter 2 |
Lovely, sexy and well-written. Great job. Please continue. |
| 2009-11-01 18:31:25 |
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You told her story beautifully, exactly as she would have liked. You were able to make us see a different side of child abuse. It was written in such a way that only you could have done it justice. Thank you for bringing this story to us. |
| 2009-11-01 17:25:39 |
My Neighbor's Incest Part XII |
Your writing improves with each installment. Well done, my friend. |
| 2009-11-01 00:01:37 |
The Rabbit Died - Chapter 1 |
This was your first story? I laughed my butt off on the first section, and have fallen in love with this couple. Great first effort. I can't wait to read Chapter 2. |
| 2009-10-25 16:27:53 |
My Neighbor's Incest Part XI |
Great job and a good read. The growth shown from the first installment to this is one is amazing. Keep writing. |
| 2009-10-09 05:38:14 |
The Chalkline |
What a tease! Please, let them cross the line and tell us what happens! You are a wonderful writer - thank you. |
| 2009-10-09 05:36:52 |
The Restaurant |
A beautifully written story about fantasies coming true for a couple in love. I look forward to more from you. |
| 2009-08-28 06:48:15 |
Nora |
For those who requested another chapter, I submitted it last night. I hope it will be validated by Sunday. I've never attempted a second chapter before. I hope you enjoy it as much as the first. |
| 2009-08-04 22:47:21 |
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Still crying. Still wanting more. |
| 2009-07-29 19:49:45 |
Nora |
I apologize for the spacing in this submission. I transferred between two different word programs, and did not know this error would occur.
-ejls |
| 2009-07-25 10:14:47 |
Football Fantasy Part 1 |
Bistander called it. Spacing would make this much easier to read. For a first attempt, I thought it was good. Reread what you've written and see what you can add to make the characters more real. Description is essential. |
| 2009-07-19 17:49:11 |
A Family Secret or a Family Full of Secrets |
This was a well-written descriptive story. You chose not to go into a great deal of description, allowing me to visualize things myself. I like a piece where I can fantasize. Thank you for a good read. |
| 2009-06-21 19:31:49 |
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A perfectly executed story. Impeccable in every sense of the word. Disturbing, and yet compelling. Considering the content, it was a joy to read. |
| 2009-06-19 22:03:16 |
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This is by far your best work. I can't speak enough on your writing ability. Your talent is wasted here, my friend. FNFH |
| 2009-06-12 22:54:38 |
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The first time I ever pm'd a writer was to you - on the Stuart and little Annie series. You know I am a huge fan. This rework is amazing. I am in love with the characters, and the way you tied in Canon in D. I am so interested to see where you take this story. You are an excellent writer, presenting quality work. Thank you. |
| 2009-06-03 20:30:37 |
Doing My Mom's Friend Doris |
Thank you from a mature woman, who is less than perky. I smiled the whole way through. It was great. - ejls |
| 2009-05-25 12:51:03 |
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Well written, easy to read. What I liked best was that I felt you were sitting here talking to me. So descriptive, yet leaving enough to the readers imagination. I am looking forward to reading your other works. |
| 2009-05-24 17:47:01 |
THE WAITRESS' HOT, WET TIP |
A well-written erotic story. I loved the characters, and the joy they both took in the sex. Keep them coming. I want more from you. |
| 2009-05-10 10:14:32 |
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A wonderful read. Great technique. I like that a sex story can be well-written instead of just going for the cum scene. I am looking at your other submissions and will be doing a lot of reading. |
| 2008-11-03 21:18:59 |
Grown up stepdaughter |
Sooooo hot. |
| 2008-10-28 19:06:49 |
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I wish I was Millie. |
| 2008-10-23 15:45:32 |
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There had better be a part 2! Too hot to let it stop there! |
| 2008-10-23 15:42:55 |
Chocolate Fun! part 2 |
Are you having anyone read these before you submit? A second opinion might save you from the slamming you are getting in comments. Better than the first, but still a disappointment. |
| 2008-10-23 15:37:48 |
Me and my sister.PT 1 |
Looking forward to Part 2. Slow it down a little and make more of an effort with your descriptions. |
| 2008-10-23 15:30:31 |
Shower Surprize |
Excellent! |
| 2008-10-23 15:27:29 |
Boys Locker Room to My Room |
Good story, but instead of writing "He says, I reply, I tell him", please use quotes, and write it as a conversation. It will make for an easier read. |