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| 2011-04-19 01:40:47 |
How Bobby Became Gay-Chapter 1 |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:39:46 |
How Bobby Became Gay-Chapter 2 |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:39:31 |
How Bobby Became Gay-Chapter 3 |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:38:59 |
How Bobby Became Gay-Chapter 4 |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:38:34 |
How Bobby Became Gay-Chapter 5 |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:37:43 |
Gas Station Rape 1: Perveted Discoveries |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:36:40 |
Gas Station Rape 2: Sammy Gets an Oil Change |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:34:51 |
Gas Station Rape 3 |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:)
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| 2011-04-19 01:34:30 |
Gas Station Rape 4: A Daughter's Humiliation |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:)
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| 2011-04-19 01:33:53 |
Gas Station Rape 5: Return To The Station |
For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:30:10 |
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For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:29:19 |
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For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:28:12 |
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For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:27:34 |
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For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2011-04-19 01:25:17 |
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It's the perverseness that turns people on. Most people are drawn to fantasies they consider dirty or wrong. It's a natural human desire to be naughty or bad. Everybody has limits though, some are more vanilla than others. Mine happen to not exist in fantasy.
P. S. For those of you who prefer a higher age limit, I have started a new universe called "Aitworld" that will involve stories of adults only(on this site anyway). I have one story completed already and will start posting after the next few are completed.
For those still interested in my underaged stories I will no longer be posting them on this site as per the recent change in rules. However, feel free to drop me a PM or email if you want to know where to find my future uncensored chapters. I am almost ready to post 5 more chapters in my "Amative City" universe. As soon as I finish up chapter 6 in "The Park", they will be posted. Thank you everyone:) |
| 2010-12-02 09:35:27 |
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Glad you liked it:) Yah I try to give people fair warning but some idiots don't read the beginning comments and themes like they should lol.
Sometimes I think some of the negative comments are from people who actually went looking for this type of story and then feel bad that they got off on it, so they yell about how evil it is to ease their conscience or something.
Even if that isn't the case I still enjoy comments. Even the psycho hateful ones. They can be kinda funny sometimes. One guy even threatened to kill me, but then realized I wasn't going to tell him where I lived so he gave up on it:) |
| 2010-12-02 09:35:08 |
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Glad you liked it:) Yah I try to give people fair warning but some idiots don't read the beginning comments and themes like they should lol.
Sometimes I think some of the negative comments are from people who actually went looking for this type of story and then feel bad that they got off on it, so they yell about how evil it is to ease their conscience or something.
Even if that isn't the case I still enjoy comments. Even the psycho hateful ones. They can be kinda funny sometimes. One guy even threatened to kill me, but then realized I wasn't going to tell him where I lived so he gave up on it:) |
| 2010-08-01 02:55:06 |
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Sex with children is indeed evil and anyone who engages in such action should have their life ended in the most prolonged and painful way imaginable. But I hold that fiction should be considered in a completely different light. |
| 2010-08-01 01:59:29 |
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Sex with children is indeed evil and anyone who engages in such action should have their life ended in the most prolonged and painful way imaginable. But I hold that fiction should be considered in a completely different light. |
| 2010-07-17 14:25:34 |
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Lol you "skipped 90% of it" and say you were bored....yah that would make you a fucking retard. If you don't actually read the story don't offer an opinion on it. |
| 2010-07-15 20:24:17 |
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Ok to be clear, I welcome any and all comments and critisisms both good and bad. Even the hateful ones. That being said, after watching the comments on this story I just have to ask.
You clicked "read" on a story with the descriptions:
Anal, Bestiality, Bi-sexual, Blowjob, Boy, Boy / Boy, Cannibalism, Cock & ball torture, Coercion, Cruelty, Cum Swallowing, Death, Domination/submission, Drug, Exhibitionism, Extreme, Female Domination, Gay, Group Sex, Horror, Humiliation, Male Domination, Masturbation, Mature, Murder, Necrophilia, Non-consensual sex, Oral Sex, Prostitution, Rape, Reluctance, Sado-Masochism, Snuff, Torture, Violence, Voyeurism, Water Sports/Pissing, Young, Ass to mouth, Stockholm Syndrome,
....what the fuck were you expecting? |
| 2010-07-07 20:14:44 |
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To READER
2010-07-07 08:37:36
Funny. You would kill someone because they said something that you didn't like......I can think of a few places where that has been put into practice before. |
| 2010-06-30 06:28:17 |
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Thank you. The upcoming chapters get even sicker:) |
| 2010-06-11 01:55:17 |
Poem - Casual Observer |
Other than a typo here and there it's fine. And I've seen plenty of poets avoid puncuation and capitol letters. I don't get why they do it but it is a practise. And Big Willy is an idiot when he says there's no rythm. He's problably one of those readers who reads a poem and trips over the words in his own head and blames the poet for his own clumsiness. |
| 2010-04-06 08:28:04 |
Gas Station Rape 5: Return To The Station |
Yah my initial ideas tend to be more thought out and fresh but I do like the whole story. You're right though the earlier chapters are the best. As for not giving more time to the "breaking in" I write from a purely fantasy, stroke story point of view. If it appeals to me it gets put in there. I don't really pay much attention to making it realistic. As for grammar, I correct most of the mistakes with spell and grammar check on wordpad but there's always a few that slip thru.
Thanks for the critic. Always apreciated. |
| 2010-03-31 08:25:38 |
Gas Station Rape 5: Return To The Station |
I do stories in increments of five chapters so this one is done but i am working on another five for Bobby and another five that will also link with the other two called The Park. It takes place in the downtown of Amative City and is much much harsher and more perverted. |
| 2010-03-31 08:21:46 |
Gas Station Rape 5: Return To The Station |
Thank u younger for being the first one to notice that I linked my two series together lol. |
| 2010-03-29 12:22:18 |
Gas Station Rape 5: Return To The Station |
To: READER
2010-03-29 03:03:19
Thank u. I understand that alot of perversions are not everone's taste. Thank u for being cordial about it. I figured the baby thing would draw some heat and the ratings so far confirm that. However I don't write stories for a fan base I write because I enjoy it. And i post for those few who share my tastes in stories. I like to write stories that go as far against my own personal morals as possible. I like to shock even myself. I realize that many people get off thru different avenues, thus the warning at the beginning. Again thank u for being straight forward and thank u to those few who like my stories. |
| 2010-03-21 07:03:28 |
Gas Station Rape 4: A Daughter's Humiliation |
"who cares" Well if you did that then you would die a very painful and prolonged death.
The difference is that this is a story and your suggesting actuall pedophilia. I have always been up front about my stance on actual verses fiction. You can do anything you want in a story but if you cross over to the acual stuff you no longer have my support. And if you tried to do anything to my kids. You would beg for hell by the time I was done with you.
Oh and Eva666, the next chapter will have one or two things more "depraved" in it, but will not go as far as other stories I'm working on. I've got another in the works called "The Park" that will be more extreme than anything I've submited so far. |
| 2010-03-20 03:57:01 |
Gas Station Rape 4: A Daughter's Humiliation |
There is one more chapter to this one. I may add more to the story later on but it won't be called Gas Station Rape. Chapter 5 is almost done I'm just trying to finish up the ending.
I have other stories where the kids are younger but I haven't finished them yet. And yes I like to push the limit. This is actually one of my milder stories. I like to break as many boundaries in my stories as possible. |
| 2010-03-20 03:34:45 |
Gas Station Rape 4: A Daughter's Humiliation |
There is one more chapter to this one. I may add more to the story later on but it won't be called Gas Station Rape. Chapter 5 is almost done I'm just trying to finish up the ending.
I have other stories where the kids are younger but I haven't finished them yet. And yes I like to push the limit. This is actually one of my milder stories. I like to break as many boundaries in my stories as possible. |
| 2010-03-12 09:28:53 |
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Don't listen to poster "READER 2009-10-27 20:51:32". If they are adjusting their style just to please their readers then they aren't being true to themselves. Write what you like. If you're looking to make a book deal then yah yer in the wrong place anyway. If people don't like yer stuff then they can read something else.
Personally I loved it. Course I'm in favor of extreme stories as long as they stay stories. It was a good read. keep writing. |
| 2009-01-20 20:21:00 |
How Bobby Became Gay-Chapter 1 |
Yah I didn't think about it till a few chapters in. I should have made him older. There's alot of things in this series that aren't very realistic. Just let your imagination compensate for the less realistic stuff. |
| 2009-01-20 01:22:27 |
How Bobby Became Gay-Chapter 2 |
I know the title says gay but I'm bi leaning towards girls. So this story will be mostly boy/boy but with a girl tossed in now and then. And as for the last commentor you're not offended by a 6 yo fucking with an 87 year old but throw in the word nigger and that turns you off? Weird. Glad you guys liked it though. Thanks! |