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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2008-11-07 10:40:18 |
Close Your Eyes Little Girly Boy |
I appreciate the constructive feedback. :) |
| 2008-11-04 19:24:50 |
Goth Boy - Fairy Boy - Bad Boy - Used Boy |
Happy to please. |
| 2008-11-04 19:23:26 |
Close Your Eyes Little Girly Boy |
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had to stretch the truth for that part to make it more story like (nevermind that I hardly remember what's been said some twelve years ago), so I'm happy to hear that it worked. Try to save your energy for another story! |
| 2008-11-04 12:07:12 |
Goth Boy - Fairy Boy - Bad Boy - Used Boy |
Whoever fixed my title, thank you! |
| 2008-10-30 20:11:30 |
A Boys Dream, A Brothers Expectation |
Interesting observation. I think that's why I hold back on the emotional element since I've been trying this out. This is especially true in my personal stories-turned-porn (which goes to the extreme in an account I wrote that's not validated yet...I didn't write about any emotions at all or any of what was going on in my life in the background because it was too much, too sensitive. I ended up making those involved merely bodies...sort of like how I sometimes felt during really confusing and fucked up situations, just like a body). With incest, real or imaginary, there's just way too much baggage and that's not what people on a porn site want to read. They want to beat off to incest that's somehow acceptable to the characters, not be like, "whoa, that's fucked up," unless they're looking for a rape story. That's just something I've been thinking about. These issues are not topics I've ever been able to confess to a therapist. This place has been the only one I can let it out. |
| 2008-10-30 08:46:36 |
Close Your Eyes Little Girly Boy |
The subject matter by it's very nature is not believable. In fact, I would say that of almost all "true story" incest accounts posted here are fake unless they involve rape or something similar. I can't do anything to assert that mine is otherwise in this kind of medium. Without knowing myself or my brother, not even pictures would do the trick, I'm sure. I'm not here to try to sell that the story is true, though. I don't need to do that. What I like for the reader, particularly if they're male as I doubt many men are reading porn without a purpose, is for them to be able to insert themselves into the story, whether its as one person or the other. This is true whether I have a fiction or non-fiction story.
As for my immediate destiny, possibly not. But as for my past? It has been. It'd be worrying if everyone agreed that I was a good writer. No one is ever entirely liked even if they are successful. |
| 2008-10-28 17:54:18 |
Close Your Eyes Little Girly Boy |
Sure! |
| 2008-10-28 07:33:40 |
Big Dog Jake |
Eek, poor kid! Good story! |
| 2008-10-27 21:55:59 |
My Life as a Slave 2 |
Very well written, like reading published erotica. So refreshing and arousing! |
| 2008-10-27 20:45:51 |
Close Your Eyes Little Girly Boy |
Hope you didn't get someone in the eye!
I have written professionally, but haven't pursued it recently. Writing porn, erotica, sexual subjects is sort of like my time out from the real world right now (being able to tell events from my screwed up life without the heavy emotional baggage that comes with the crazy details is cathartic, I've discovered). I've never looked into trying to publish something along the line of erotica or porn, though. Not sure where you go for that aside from self-publishing avenues. |
| 2008-10-27 20:15:32 |
Close Your Eyes Little Girly Boy |
Darling, best climax in the story or for you? Writing what you know tends to work best even though I'm an avid encourager of new ideas. Anyway, proud to please. |
| 2008-10-27 18:19:12 |
Getting to Know Sean |
Oh, one thing I did notice was you wrote "stale" several times when you should have had "stall." Just letting you know for future reference since it was repeated. (the first comment is mine) |
| 2008-10-27 18:16:39 |
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Really, *really* enjoyed this story although I am not one for the whole watersports thing. Also wasn't interested so much in the kids other than Cameron, but that's just probably my gayness speaking. It just seemed like the other kids weren't necessary to keep the story interesting or hot. I also didn't think Cameron, at least, was too knowledgeable. He came off to me as innocent, but then I was a pretty messed up kid. |
| 2008-10-27 17:42:56 |
Our HIke |
Wow, that's one hell of a fucking! |
| 2008-10-27 17:21:24 |
A Boys Dream, A Brothers Expectation |
To be honest, the story kind of took a life of its own and turned into some kind of morality tale (of what, I'm not sure...guess concerning some of my own demons). I'll keep the comments in mind though for the next fiction stories I'll write. Thanks for the feedback! |
| 2008-10-27 17:15:55 |
Close Your Eyes Little Girly Boy |
Even though I'm all grown up now? ;) Glad you enjoyed it. |
| 2008-10-09 09:13:14 |
The Slave Trainers |
Excellent writing! I enjoy reading your work. |