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| 2012-05-25 11:32:56 |
DAD'S TAPES |
A good follow up could be to have Daddy catch them with their pants down and give them both a good reaming! Very good story, I can't believe how low of a score your stories get. |
| 2011-09-04 14:46:19 |
Broken Bliss CH 6 |
This is a Hot series! I look forward to "Caught Sister Stripping". One idea for this series, Have Faith and Lisa get together and have Faith go kick the shit out of the guys that hurt Lisa!
Now on to Caught Sister Stripping |
| 2011-05-15 10:40:08 |
Deep Sleeper Ch. 01 |
A really hot story! 10 out of 10 for sure. Just one question,,, Who the hell was Cousin Matt? Just an 'ah shit' I suppose? Still one good story, keep up the good work, and Thanks for all you do! |
| 2011-02-04 04:15:14 |
I'm Not Alone, Final Part |
One of the best stories on this site. 10/10 for sure.
Thanks for all that you do! |
| 2011-01-22 05:01:23 |
I'm Not Alone, Part VI |
So sorry about the last few posts, but they were needed to push an asshole to the next page! |
| 2011-01-22 04:44:22 |
I'm Not Alone, Part VI |
aaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooole |
| 2011-01-22 04:44:15 |
I'm Not Alone, Part VI |
aaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooole |
| 2011-01-22 04:43:32 |
I'm Not Alone, Part VI |
sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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| 2011-01-22 04:42:40 |
I'm Not Alone, Part VI |
some people are real assholes! |
| 2011-01-02 11:37:06 |
The Artist's Apprentice |
Very well written! You have no problem writing from a woman's perspective. Keep up the good work, |
| 2010-12-21 14:43:09 |
Daddy and I |
I loved the story and look forward to part 2.
And I hate to b a nit picker, but one word kept jumping out at me. "Threw" is the past tense of throw. The word you meant to use was Through.
But still a wonderful story! |
| 2010-12-20 20:07:24 |
Away with Anna |
That was a wonderful story! A 12 out of 10! Sweet loving as opposed to raw sex. Sad ending. They should have rode off into the sunset! |
| 2010-12-20 20:07:18 |
Away with Anna |
That was a wonderful story! A 12 out of 10! Sweet loving as opposed to raw sex. Sad ending. They should have rode off into the sunset! |
| 2010-12-20 20:02:32 |
Away with Anna |
That was a beautiful story! 12/10! The ending was sad, but the loving as opposed to raw sex was a pleasant change. |
| 2010-10-26 20:42:50 |
Suprise package Chapter three |
anonymous reader
2010-10-02 01:39:16
Is this supposed to be part 2 instead of part 3? There doesn\'t seem to be anything missing from the time line. You might want to correct the title if so to help avoid confusion. Not quite as good as part 1, but define tally a good story that can get even better with part 4 (3?). I\'m looking forward to the next chapter
You weren\'t paying attention! There was a pt. it was midways down in part 1
Very good story, keep up the good work! |
| 2010-09-24 08:09:31 |
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The only bad part of this story was the yellow line at the bottom! God I love your stories, Keep up the good work! 10 by 10 for sure! |
| 2010-09-20 03:49:21 |
What Daddy Needs 4 |
Dear anonymous reader, 2010-09-15 17:11:53
Please forgive my earlier stuttering comment, I didn't realize that you could push an asshole onto the next page! Thanks for the learning experience!
Humbly Yours,
Wood B. Hungwell |
| 2010-09-16 16:27:57 |
What Daddy Needs 4 |
lets get him off then, lets get him off then, lets get him off then....
Somebody have a stuttering problem? LOL |
| 2010-09-14 17:20:58 |
What Daddy Needs 4 |
anonymous reader
2010-09-13 00:20:40
Is an ASSHOLE OF THE WORST KIND! "IT'S" post ruined the story for everyone! |
| 2010-09-12 18:33:21 |
I Had No Choice 3 |
I agree with the other posters, it's a great start, but has endless possibility for sequels. Get Becky and Rachel into the next threesome.
A great story, 10/10 |
| 2010-09-11 12:30:07 |
I Had No Choice |
What a story! 10/10 I may be wrong, but I feel he is being set up to get Becky pregnant? I guess I will have to read on to find out.
Great Story! Keep up the good work! |
| 2010-08-29 18:24:22 |
A Road Trip with My Grand Daughter-Part III |
That was hotter than a $3 dollar pistol! The only thing I hated about this story was seeing the yellow bar at the bottom! I can't wait for pops to bone her tight little hole! But the suspense is part of what makes it so great! 10 out of 10 for sure! |
| 2010-08-29 00:40:00 |
Brief College Encounter |
Another really great story! 10/10 A sad, but believable ending! |
| 2010-08-28 20:52:09 |
Ladies Circle part 2 |
Not bad for a "Carpet Muncher" story, 8.5/10. But what happened to Chapter 3? |
| 2010-08-27 23:14:48 |
My Life 04 - me and my young sister |
arizona1664, Keep up the good work! I plan on reading every thing you have on this site Evacuee was a kick ass story and this one is following in it's footsteps! 10/10!
And Congrats to Lucky Poster:
anonymous reader 2010-06-05 10:18:39
That 2 inch growth spurt? Even over 5 years I still have to call a BULLSHIT! |
| 2010-08-19 20:39:30 |
Young Passion - Part 8 |
This has been a pretty good series, and I gave everyone of them a positive rating. But an Alabama lawyer telling a true story? Yeah bull-fucking shit!!! I doubt it is even really written by a female! |
| 2010-08-19 20:37:19 |
Young Passion - Part 8 |
This has been a pretty good series, and I gave everyone of them a positive rating. But an Alabama lawyer telling a true story? Yeah bull-fucking shit!!! I doubt it is even really written by a female! |
| 2010-08-07 22:55:13 |
Buying the Family Next Door |
Very good story, A little long, maybe could have been broken up into a couple of chapters? But it was worth the time spent reading it. It will stick in the memory for a right good while!
10/10 |
| 2009-10-01 01:07:18 |
Getting Addison Graduated |
I agree with some of the other post. A lot of mistakes that were spelled right but needed a d or an s to make it fit. It needs to be proofread. PM me and I would be glad to proof your next story. |
| 2009-06-22 13:12:46 |
An American Nanny in England |
I agree don't ever BITE a clit, Nibble, hum real hard, skin it back and suck on it, but I never bite one! Wonderful story! Keep writing! |