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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2008-12-20 12:44:39 |
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Please continue writing stories like these the goddess would be honored. |
| 2008-12-04 22:05:12 |
Popscotch [part 1] |
Quite simply: does it even need a part two? I'm not sure how that could possibly be topped. |
| 2008-11-23 00:05:07 |
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Goddess bless me! This has now become my most favorite of posts on the entire site.
Beautifully written, Aphrodite would be honored. |
| 2008-11-15 23:51:26 |
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If only all men could understand the way you do, Phrentic. Wonderfully written like all of your stories. |
| 2008-11-15 23:15:26 |
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" that is truly how most women want a man to feel and you captured that extremely well"
That he does, you can see it in all of his stories, but this one is expressly unique in that he's written it with only us in mind as the readers. I would be highly surprised if there are many other males who after reading this understand it beyond the basic sense. |
| 2008-11-12 23:48:03 |
The Deep of Night |
It's fixed now.
So what does everyone think of the story? |
| 2008-11-12 23:46:05 |
My Story |
Definitely not you ... but nice .. poem/reply :) |
| 2008-11-10 20:18:15 |
The Deep of Night |
I'm hoping it will be fixed soon as it's ruined the story |
| 2008-11-10 15:28:14 |
The Handyman |
Exquisitely Descriptive and deliciously sensual. |
| 2008-11-08 16:26:35 |
She Reclines |
Hauntingly beautiful... |
| 2008-11-08 16:24:55 |
Butterscotch |
A beautiful beginning... |
| 2008-11-08 15:57:43 |
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Simply beautiful, and truly love doesn't believe in age differences. |
| 2008-10-31 00:18:16 |
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Phrenetic, as always a most wonderful tale... it doesn't need anything more.. as always you seem to know just how much is perfection... where to much would just ruin the story. |
| 2008-10-26 00:47:19 |
Dirty Lesson |
Definitely not to everyone's tastes but for those that know of the fetish and have experience with it, this is an awesomely written and very accurate tale.
Kuddos! For braving the WWW and sharing the story with us.
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| 2008-10-26 00:26:15 |
One amazing night |
This was awesome, my heart is still beating a mile a minute.
Keep writing, I loved it! |
| 2008-10-24 22:17:30 |
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Oh sweet lord, How i wish you'd been my teacher ... instead of the two forceful brutes that forced themselves on me . |
| 2008-10-24 21:25:01 |
A Thorough Distraction |
Glad everyone enjoys it |
| 2008-10-20 22:48:21 |
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Very touching, and very sweet. |
| 2008-10-20 22:14:47 |
Josh and Davis Part 1 |
definitely more!! pretty please |
| 2008-10-20 22:07:54 |
Long Road Home |
Wonderfully short and detailed... sometimes quickies aren't meant to be long involved and detailed
Keep writing cuz you're good
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| 2008-10-19 23:00:24 |
Summer Help |
Definitely would love to read a sequel if there is one. |
| 2008-10-19 22:34:27 |
Uncle Mike |
Definitely hot!! loved it... and can't wait to see if there will be a part two..
Oh to be a fly on the wall at Uncle Mikes.. ;) |
| 2008-10-17 21:04:18 |
One Night of... |
They are, and it's rare that I ever attempt them but that day in class this one practically wrote it self. I'm glad it did though as I like how it flows and captures the images that I'd been thinking about at the time. |
| 2008-10-12 18:22:45 |
Jay and Chris at the Wedding |
Definitely a spicy way of livening things up ;) |
| 2008-10-12 01:01:12 |
Mistress J Part Two |
Ignore him/her / it.. they can't be all that creative if that's all they have to say.. |
| 2008-10-11 20:12:05 |
Mother's seduction |
Very well written and love the progression of though he goes through as he watches.
For the uneducated louts below me, It's highly rare that a woman at age 50 is capable of bearing children, whether through the natural course of aging or having chosen to no longer be able to. I'm quite glad to see that there is no sequel as I'd much prefer the story as it is.
If anything the only continuation that a story of this quality would warrant, in my eyes, is him warning his frienIF mom lets him.. but that if he ever started bragging he'd get his ass kicked. |
| 2008-10-11 18:40:19 |
A young guy. An older woman |
Loved it, and would love to see the second part!
Certainly know the feeling of being an older woman with thoughts about someone younger. |
| 2008-10-10 23:41:47 |
Mistress J Part Two |
Jealousy is it's own form of flattery.
Well written... and very HOT!!! |
| 2008-10-04 00:39:00 |
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I think the reader below me blew a fuse in their excitement. lol
Phrenetic you're definitely a master story teller and I think we are all blessed that you choose to use your talents this way. |
| 2008-10-02 22:54:30 |
Daddy's Tease - Part Two |
Beautifully written and very detailed. Keep writing!!
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| 2008-09-30 20:17:48 |
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As always beautifully creative, and very true of anything similarly monotone ( not the right word but you get the idea, where you're listening but your mind tends to wander. )
Seems the readers missed my similar effort in my poem "One Night of..." Which is posted here on the site too. |
| 2008-09-29 18:08:06 |
One Night of... |
2008-09-29 14:47:27 To Reader
You might want to know a person before you make assumptions. I've you look at the writers bio it's not the first time I've written. I happen to be a published poet for over 15 years.
As for the tag "First time" It is the first time, since the point of the poem is a woman's fantasy of a man she barely knows.
Thus the notes at the end combined with the actual poem itself.
Dan-o, no follow through yet, but the semesters just begun. |
| 2008-09-28 13:34:26 |
Jordan and I |
Good story but i think it could do with a little more in the way of details: taste, touch, scent, the emotional feel, etc.
As a fan of this genre of story I say it was very well written as a beginning piece. |
| 2008-09-28 11:24:25 |
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Bit short in the telling.. but definitely a good read.. any chance there's a follow up of the remaining days they had of just the two girls and him alone? |
| 2008-09-28 09:08:26 |
One Night of... |
Interesting how one can vote something negative, yet not be willing to voice why they didn't like it...
Feedback is always welcomed.. |
| 2008-09-23 20:20:23 |
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Wonderfully beautiful |
| 2008-09-20 23:32:56 |
A Thorough Distraction |
Thank you everyone for your opinions and appreciation for the piece.
Stay tuned though as in the coming weeks I will be attempting another piece similar to this but where I explore both his and her perspectives. |
| 2008-09-20 23:25:54 |
Welcome Home |
I know it could have been better but as "a quicky" and only my second ever effort at writing out a coherent sex story it's more a stepping stone. |
| 2008-09-05 22:12:15 |
Jane |
Oh If only all us ladies were as lucky as her :) |
| 2008-08-27 12:00:47 |
A Thorough Distraction |
Feedback and votes welcomed. |