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| 2011-08-02 11:57:21 |
MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 2 DINNER |
lol. yeah i have to admit that your mother is pretty naive |
| 2011-08-02 11:55:15 |
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well anonymous reader there is another one now ;) |
| 2011-08-02 11:42:42 |
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kk thanks klaxx, i will see that through
yeah sorry, it's my microsoft word. :P it doesn't know how to format shit right ;) |
| 2011-07-28 15:13:29 |
MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 4 SWIMMING (missing pussy eating paragraph) |
lol hahaha i'm glad you fixed that part. i didn't even notice |
| 2011-05-28 04:48:17 |
Detention 9 |
well according to comments you are not affiliated with Michael Booker,,,, however i will give you some credit for completing his story. it takes a lot of time to create the other half of another story. i am interested to see what he comes up with though... good job for the attempt. it takes some serious creativity to do this. |
| 2011-05-28 04:43:34 |
Detention 9 |
well according to comments you are not affiliated with Michael Booker,,,, however i will give you some credit for completing his story. it takes a lot of time to create the other half of another story. i am interested to see what he comes up with though... good job for the attempt. it takes some serious creativity to do this. |
| 2011-05-28 04:33:50 |
Ejaculation Problem |
wow this story does have terrible grammar.... :P |
| 2011-05-08 02:24:09 |
Body Of A Man, Mind Of A Machine: Part 1 and Part 2 |
i'm really quite curious why the grade is not higher. i guess people rather have their brains working down below than up on top. lol. well anyways your freudian rubic cubes are fun to play with. they give me brain gasms.
and your style of writing is unique that i can say is definitely true. |
| 2011-05-08 02:11:32 |
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oh sweet disappointment i think i should reserve all writing and literacy to the professionals. views like these make me think "You are a pathetic waste of time, find a better hobby"
if you are viewing any bit of this story thanks for at least looking. |
| 2011-05-08 02:04:55 |
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why thank you. i'll make sure to spend more time smoking that dope.
anyways. i'm beginning to think i do have an illiteracy issue because it seems i get this sort of comment a lot on many of the stories that i produce. with the exception of stories that are spent being polished. like my current Sara and Angie series (although their scores aren't great either.). this one was an off task story. and while it hurts to have crushing criticism on my work i do agree with you and respect your opinion. i don't agree with the negative statements that were included. They are illogical and only cause harm. i feel your main points are valid, and i'll be sure to see these points through and produce better stories in the future. |
| 2011-04-18 22:02:27 |
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lol glad you think that way. but since you are anonymous can't help you in fulfilling that need ;) |
| 2011-04-18 22:01:48 |
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thanks glad you like it :) i'll be sure to post more. i've already finished in writing the 2nd to last part of the book so it will be exciting |
| 2011-04-10 14:26:23 |
DREAM A LITTLE DREAM OF ME |
that was the most interesting story ever. definitely a style that is new to me :) :) hahahaha love it very funny. |
| 2010-07-10 23:01:07 |
Sweet, Sweet Love. |
that was so legit. i wish i could remember all that to tell someone. |
| 2010-07-10 22:51:41 |
Taxi Home |
that was really funny |
| 2009-02-05 02:13:30 |
"My Friend Kyle" |
I do agree that it was alittle fast for me but I'm a fast reader so it's all good |
| 2009-02-05 02:10:20 |
"My Friend Kyle" |
Hahaha I like that. Write more!!! You are definitely better about imaginating this shit than I am!!! Gr8 I loved it! |
| 2008-11-17 02:16:11 |
Aunt had no idea ch 3 - busted |
!@#$ DUDE THT WAS AWESOME! READ ALL CHPTERS!!! KEEP WRITING |
| 2008-11-11 03:09:18 |
A swinging lifestyle, chapter 3 |
interesting... jajaja! thx writ prt 2 |
| 2008-11-11 02:46:50 |
A Swinging Lifestyle, Chapter 1 |
alright, fair not the best but good... |