||MY HORNY SISTER-IN-LAW (part 1)
||pretty well written and interesting too, got any more?
||Daddy to the Rescue
|| A little hard to read, but I found the stories plot to be pretty good until the downer at the end 8/10
||Visit with my cousins
|| great story man, I can remember fun with a couple cousins of mine too
||My Little Sister Sophie (Part 3)
||good story so far, you going to carry on? I have a thing for small breasted women too.
|| great story dude, any more in your account? 9/10
||A Neighborly Surprise
||very good story 9/10
||pretty good story dude,9/10
||Too Tight Tent
||good story again, but you should catch the little errors by rereading before posting. 8/10
||A bumpy ride to camp Crystal Lake
||so far this is a pretty good story, with a little proof reading it could be a great one, as it is it will score 8/10
||What Are Best Friends For?
||and they lived happily ever after....good story dude
||Running Man's Sister
|| great story dude, got any more?
||Vacation For Two - Friday
|| pretty good story. 8.5/10 Who the hell is Melanie though? You did fairly well keeping names straight until the last chapter, did you get tired of this story and start to write your next one?
||Daddy's girls branch out
||wheres the sister, and what about momma
||A Weekend To Remember Part 1
||not too bad for a virgin writer, I'd like to sample another chapter
||pretty good story, I'd like to see more 9/10
||Helping my Mom
||y'all don 't like it see if you can do better or shut up, 9/10
||The Awakening of Katie
||pretty good story, needs a little more editing though and make sure to keep the spell checker happy 9/10, could easily be a 10 with a little more work
||Cousin Fun at the Lake
||great story, would like to see more 10/10
||Naked daughter 2
||pretty good story dude, would like to see more, hopefully before next year