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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2008-10-16 17:27:51 |
Seven Fair Maidens Part One |
I noticed I screwed up in a few places, my bad, just ignore them... the story wasn't originally told from Kurtz's point of view |
| 2008-09-22 18:36:47 |
World of Warcraft Fantasy: Elvish graces. |
I liked it, but unfortunately I'm more of a horde man myself but still Night Elves are very sexy |
| 2008-08-30 17:39:40 |
A Kind Stranger |
cute, I dig it |
| 2008-08-30 16:36:13 |
nawty lil kelly |
now this is a good story, you did have a couple errors, but so do most of my stories. And maybe next time space your paragraphs a little more, it kind of sucks to read things on this website, the blue background and all. But keep 'em coming and I'll be sure to keep reading. |
| 2008-08-26 18:19:22 |
A Tale of 2 Nerds - Chapter 2 |
good job my man, it made me hard. Can't wait till 3 |
| 2008-08-25 22:56:47 |
Vampire Jesse |
not bad, not bad at all, though it does have some of the spelling/grammar errors my first story had, but don't worry about it, just keep writing bro |
| 2008-08-23 14:50:34 |
DAUGHTERS HORNY URGES |
by god that was good! it was a long read but totally worth it |
| 2008-08-21 23:29:46 |
A Tale of 2 Nerds |
I rather liked it actually. I got confused by a couple of things but no big deal. But you should of read my first story, it was not perfect I'll tell you that |
| 2008-08-21 23:15:18 |
Good Morning Dad |
uhm... there was like no story line. I can understand spelling and grammar errors because just about every one of my stories has them, but yeah need to work on your writing buddy |
| 2008-08-17 09:13:43 |
Seven Fair Maidens Part Two |
lol I didn't believe you about the paragraph thing but I just read it and I did! I can't believe I did that, whoops, lool |
| 2008-08-13 21:06:06 |
SFM Alternate Ending: Alice |
yes I'm one of those loser writers who comments his own stuff. Usually just to post news for readers. Anyway the story was doing... bloody awful, but it seems to be picking up slightly, if it keeps going and makes it to at least 80% I'll post another |
| 2008-08-13 18:18:22 |
SFM Alternate Ending: Alice |
really? That bad?... you all make me dissapointed in myself |
| 2008-08-10 19:01:08 |
Inn and Out |
interesting story. Not a big Necro fan though |
| 2008-07-26 14:15:12 |
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nice, really nice |
| 2008-07-25 22:32:09 |
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not bad, not bad at all. I prefer just bobby and tiffany fucking then the parents joining in but it was still enjoyable. |
| 2008-07-25 20:46:06 |
Megan At Last |
good job, I hope there's a part two |
| 2008-07-25 20:21:46 |
Coming of Age |
bravo I give it a two thumbs up |