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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-07-18 00:19:59 |
Kari's first tender time |
If Digimon is "your life", you're either too young for this site or you have serious problems. |
| 2010-05-06 05:02:46 |
Davis dies the hardway |
'This wasn't horrible as a story, but as writing, it was. You need to build up your skills. You'd be amazing if you did. 5/10.'
I have improved tons over the years of studying english (which is my third language) but have not updated these old submittions.
'what the fuck were you thinking when you wrote this shit? this is the fucking sickest shit i have ever read. i hope that one day somebody kidnaps you and does all this shit to you. then youll be like a normal fucking person, who is scared of getting tortured, not someone who likes sucking and chewing on peoples eyeballs. noone would care if you just went and killed yourself, you sick fucking peice of shit. you are a fucking waste of life. i hope you fucking die and so does everyone else who comes into contact with you. freak.'
I don't think I've ever said I do enjoy chewing on people's eyeballs. Last time I checked, I wasn't a professional killer girl If I would be girl, I'd be too busy stuffing water melons in my pussy to |
| 2010-05-06 04:58:29 |
I shall fuck your corpse tonight! |
I enjoy Flaming People: 'blah blah blah'
Avoiding dictionary? I kept looking at it all the time!
Reader: 'you are a sick bastard
you are going to to hell you little pedo cunt
iam going to seriously fuck you up if you write anymore sick shit like this.'
How? I don't think we know each other and last time I checked. Are you coming on to me suddenly? *tee hee*
'U R 1 SIK PUPPY!!
UR A DIRTY ROTTEN DOGG I HOPE U GET LOCKED UP ND RAPED BY A BIG HARD BLACK COCK EVERYDAY...
I BET UR LIKE A 50 YR OLD PEDO WHO GETS OFF ON WRRITING THESE STORYS'
Actually, I am 25 years old. And I saw nightmares after writing this story! I am so sensitive.
' HATE YOU YOU FUCKING SICKO
GO SNAP YUR HEAD OF IF I EVER FIND OUT WHOWROTE THIS I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU SLOWLY'
Sadly my dear friend, I don't know how to snap my own neck, can you demonstrate with yourself so I can learn? |
| 2010-05-06 04:50:26 |
Man with bright green umbrella |
"i don't know what its doing on this site"
Nothing, it can't think. *comedic drum* |
| 2010-05-06 04:49:37 |
Hell on Earth |
Big Willy, those things could not have worked albeit there was that eye trauma you were asking for in the form of tear duct rupturing, something I don't think is very common but is quite messy. |
| 2010-05-06 04:46:13 |
Kari's first tender time |
Introduction: Don't read the epilogue unless you have strong stomach, it's fucked up.
Don't blame me if you did not believe me. |
| 2010-05-06 04:44:41 |
Hangover Crap |
Dear reader; why do you read a story in scatology section if you do not like such activities? Are you moron?
Sincerely,
MISTER BIG T |
| 2008-11-07 04:50:49 |
Paybacks are hell |
"Mr. Big T;
I liked it, but I think if Mary would have been a man it would be better. "
That would have ruined huge portion of the storyline though not to mention it wouldn't have really fit as well.....
"that coercion and non consensual not rape"
That's not what the judge said to me!!! :( |
| 2008-11-07 04:45:59 |
Clown! |
"rape sucks bad story tacky"
Yup, it's one of my worst, if not the worst. |
| 2008-11-07 04:44:41 |
I shall fuck your corpse tonight! |
"fucked up people who write this deserve to die
how is that even slightly sexually arousing you sick fucks"
I wasn't sexually aroused by this, writing this story gave me nightmares!! I'm not sick for writing things like this, you are if you read them and want someone to die based on a text you read, despite not knowing anything about the said person. |
| 2008-11-07 04:43:14 |
I shall fuck your corpse tonight! |
"Ok, i think this is truely sick, but please dont judge me on that, i want someone to explain what is nice in anyway about this . . . is this supposed to be sexy? are you supposed to wank over this? Because if you do, this is not me trying to take the piss out of you but get sexual help. People who get pleasure from this must be the sick people who rape little children. my aunt is one of the leading dutch sexual helpers and even she doesnt understand this kind of sick stuff, no one normal could understand how anyone gets pleasure from this . . at all. Its vile, people who like this should literally be killed in my opinion becuase you have a fucked up head and cant be cured. Its just plain sicko freak shit. Dont get pleasure from normal sex? So lets cut up girls and fuck their insides . . .
SICK FREAKS, DIE."
You say people who think of killing other people are sick. Yet, you say people who think so should die. I guess that makes you not only sick as you said, but also a hypocrite |
| 2008-11-07 04:39:20 |
Hangover Crap |
The sequel is called "Everyone loves Enemas." It's been up for some time and involves enemas as the name suggests and filling up a kiddie pool with ass products.
I'm working on sequel for that. |
| 2008-11-07 04:37:53 |
Hell on Earth |
"i'm not sure what to say..... this has got to be one of the most stupid stories i have ever read....its completely idiotic and i feel you should be shot....in the head "
If stupidity should be enough for death penalty, this post would earn you "the chair" many times.
"I think are a deeply disturbing person. Seek help. Or just die. That works also probably better."
Or just die, haha. Thanks from that.
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I read only the last 20 or so lines...but please....this is probably the worst thing ever produced by a human(?) mind.
I just want to make clear that stuff like that is NOT acceptable...every story were u cant decide what was worst (when the choice is betwen pedophilia, necrophilia, snuff....) should be banned!!!"
Oh yes, let's ban ALL the things someone doesn't like.I don't like lesbian porn, so let's ban it!! Different strokes for different people, as I always say and this is meant to be extreme. Of course said concept is probably too much to wrap around your brain. |