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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-01-30 14:40:06 |
Mum took my cherry! |
Not enuf story, it is exciting to me, but there should have been more of a tension build. More sexual feelings described, and definitely more description of what you were feeling.
Next time, try writing from her viewpoint. |
| 2011-01-15 14:54:42 |
My sister Lauren in the bathroom |
I agree w/anonymous reader, very well written tease but a tease all the same. Almost started playing w/myself, |
| 2011-01-11 19:06:29 |
Diary of Billy Bob Chapter 8 (Our Daughter) |
Perhaps if children were 'home schooled in love their may be a lot less problems. E.g. school shootings, rape, etc.
Write more this was very titillating, and you're doing a great job. |
| 2010-12-30 11:36:10 |
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Tell 'anonymoous' to kiss your butt, very well written, esp. the latter part after daddy, who didn't cum in her pussy like he should have, Hell's bells dad, take another Viagra and then poke her in the bum. |
| 2010-12-19 14:16:47 |
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That story was hot enuf that I got a nut, when stroking the high, hard one. |
| 2010-12-15 16:03:17 |
WHAT WONDERS WEED WORKS ON MOM |
The first time I made love to my wife when stoned, my trird eye went to my penis, and I could see what was happening in her vagina and bob it made it even better, I could actually see the head of my cock snaking its way into her recesses, and WOW.!! What a climax. |
| 2010-12-15 16:02:36 |
WHAT WONDERS WEED WORKS ON MOM |
The first time I made love to my wife when stoned, my trird eye went to my penis, and I could see what was happening in her vagina and bob it made it even better, I could actually see the head of my cock snaking its way into her recesses, and WOW.!! What a climax. |
| 2010-12-06 20:51:05 |
Our new neighbors |
WATCH THE FUCKING VIDEO!!!! hOT FUCKING STORY |
| 2010-12-05 00:47:40 |
A Mother-In-Law's Fuck Fantstasy |
I think it would be a hotter story if you had brought your wife in on the activity, you would have them both in the/ your bed. |
| 2010-12-03 21:59:14 |
Key West |
Loved the story, i came when everyone in the story did, |
| 2010-12-03 21:24:41 |
Grandpa and the twins |
You can't stop now I wuz just gettin' excited, please continue a nicely perverted story. |
| 2010-11-19 14:41:12 |
My Buddy's Wife 1 |
I gave you a neg rating b/c (although you had me) of the last statement in your story. Get real dude, that's bullying, she obviously wants you, treat her right.
As someone told me once, don't be an asshole... asshole. |
| 2010-04-30 10:53:31 |
study at my place |
I know men are easy, but dude. I probably would have loved her also, but I like to think I'd make her work a little harder for it. Probably not, I'da done what you did, only faster.
Damn good story, well written, horny as hell, and made me want to jack it. A couple of misspells or wrongly written words, volcano ology is vulcanology, and one other I can't find. too much grey in front of my eyes. |
| 2010-04-09 12:27:25 |
Rachel Babysits the Naughty Little Boys |
Damn, a fine story, loved the way you wrote and added all the details. |
| 2010-04-01 18:17:02 |
A Boy No Longer |
If dad doesn't know they are fucking, he'll never figure it out after that one. |
| 2009-11-29 14:17:42 |
HAVING SEX WITH GRANNY |
Reads like you had goood time there kid. THere aint nothin like sex, and there never will be. |
| 2009-05-31 14:21:27 |
Mum! Mum???? |
Got a good wank out of that one. Yuv gotta 10 |
| 2009-05-26 12:18:52 |
My Neighor's Incest IV |
You might be able to turn this into an incest story if you let him tell Susan, about this adventure. I am waiting for the next chapter. |
| 2009-03-25 12:27:35 |
The Stronger Bond |
I didn't read or vote on this story because you do not know the use of the English language. : A. the wrong to, it should have been too, meaning also. : B, There are four different forms of "there" : a.. posessive, 'their' : b. "they're" ,meaning 'they' are doing something, c. 'their',meaning 'they' own something, and, d. There' , a place.
Take an English class, learn the proper use of English words and rewrite your story, I'm sure it will be mucy more interesting. |
| 2009-03-22 13:12:16 |
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Good exciting story, but you must feel such a bastard. On the other hand, maybe girls should learn about sex from their daddies, and boys should learn from their mothers. It is certainly a turn-on to think about.
Oh, and check your spelling, either that or dial back your excitement level when writing. |
| 2009-02-06 17:59:38 |
My first cock experience |
Hey Spunklover, cum tastes better than it feels on your skin and I know it feels good there also. Write about gettiting it up your bum. |
| 2008-11-08 11:04:40 |
My nephew's first time |
gave me an excellent wank also |
| 2008-10-30 17:22:38 |
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It is a half hot story, phren, got me stiff and all, and the mental imagery I developed was disturbed by my not being able to keep straight the caracters, Who is who, is Kathy your wife and Jaquelyn the babysitter, or is it vice-versa?
In addition you need more juice, (read that, more descriptions of bodily responses), good idea, but sort of blackmailish.
Rud |
| 2008-10-27 13:40:21 |
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I noticed she gained two years of age while in bed w/him, interesting. Maybe I missed something in the story, (too excited), and it made me sp.
Excellent read.
Rudjustcum one |
| 2008-10-26 16:30:01 |
Sins of A Father Part 2 |
Good thing this is an anonymous publishing site, while exciting sexuallly, you, you asshole, are a child molester and should be in the deepest, darkest, part of the jail where it's always 'your turn in the barrel' |
| 2008-10-21 17:00:02 |
Lunch-break Liasions |
you guys should get into a circle suck, or suck one and be fucked by the other. good story though, excited me |
| 2008-10-16 13:12:00 |
Brett and Ben |
Good loving story, tell us more, like when you let him up your hole. by the way, the word is course in the grammar you were using not coarse, whidh iis rough, sometimes foul. |
| 2008-10-16 13:04:45 |
First Lesbian Sex |
Sounds like you were used as a sex toy, I could do that lol too mechanical, a little more juice for a better written story, |
| 2008-10-12 12:52:25 |
Smut: C01 |
Extremely horny story mister, made me a woody just reading it. I read the 2nd chapter under another title. Is the point of this, the father's seduction by the little 11 yo nymphet, or the daughters sexual education by both her mother and father? I can understand the couple having sex with their daughter in bed w/them, but the 2nd act confused me to the extent that I didn't understand the why of it. Exciting for sure, but maybe thru the girls sleep she unconsciously heard what was going on, and as her eyes fkyttered ub REM she started a dream about it. Her and her father having sex.
Good story,
Rudy |
| 2008-09-01 14:14:54 |
"Sweaty" Part 2 & Part 3 |
Excellent story so sexy it made me cum. (with a little stimulation of course). If they had the old numbering system, i'd give you a 20; 10/10
rud just cum one |
| 2008-09-01 13:53:02 |
"Sweaty" Part 1 |
I am going str8 to Ch 2 as soon as I get done typing this, It's got me stiff already.
rudstill hard one |
| 2008-08-29 12:08:58 |
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No rating for this story, as its beginning premise was wrong. I believe in seduction not rape. However you did manage to turn it into a loving story, but still no rating. |
| 2008-08-29 11:53:45 |
Weekends with my Daughter |
make me hard will you? thank you very much for a sensitive, caring story, I 'm pretty sure she is going to boing you, so write us another story. You can use the practice, which, by the way, wasn't too bad. Spelling needs work
rudstillhard one |
| 2008-07-27 14:26:21 |
Little sis, Big sis, and Me |
A little wordy but horny as hell. I've gotten two cums out ot this story.
rudharddick |
| 2008-07-12 17:12:15 |
Uncle Mike |
OH YEAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT A HOT FUCKING STORY, AN EXCELLENT BUILD TO REAL ACTION, IT'S ALMOST A LOVE STORY. CERTAINLY ACT S AS A REAL 'GAY' SERIAL STORY. KEEP WRITING, YOU ARE DOING VERY WELL. MAKIN' ME ERECT, AND i'M EFFIN STR8.
rudstillhard one |