||I Watched My Wife With An Older Man 5
||Well; I loved this story - very sexy.
||I Watched My Wife With An Older Man 2
||Don't yu just love anonymous sexual masochists? Why do you morons read these stories if it upsets you so much?
Great story btw - very sexy.
||My Neighbors Ch.3
||Well; I liked it - very, very maughty and well written
||My first time with a dog
||Wow...one of the best written stories I've read on here for a long time. More?
||My first breeding with Bull
||ah - don't you just love cowards who criticise FREE porn and hide behind anonymity? No? Me neither - retards. Sexy story btw
||Sexting Mom, Ch. 2
||loving these stories 10/10
||Strait-laced Schoolgirl, Secret Slut
||excellent story - well paced with really sexy action
||thanks Claret - I love putting little jokes into my stories....glad you spotted that one. Love and XXXs Amy
||I Did My Brother
||the odd leeters/number combo is because the font the story was posted in conflicted with NXX and you can't edit stories once they are posted. So there!
||My fingers have been a blur reading this - 10/10
||the woman saying ga-head really really turned me on; I love locallised words in stories. Great story - very well paced.
||Finally Fucking the Dog
||very well written and 'believable'.....very sexy too
||Wow...excellent.....but did you get your clothes back?
||My dirty slut wife
||very naughty and well written
||I find with stories like this I need to review/edit them 24hrs later.... but I have been writing for 10 years!
Excellent first effort though..
||My Neighbour wore nylons
||The story was told to me in all confidence and I believed it - why not? Are you jealous because you still haven't lost your virginity?
Yet again the biggest critics ALWAYS hide behind anonimity.
||Amish Girl: Raped By A Goat
||very sexy story - loved the fact that it was a goat and not a dog as usual. My only gripe - do Amish girls have pre-marital sex? I doubt that bit sorry
||Amish Girl: Raped By A Goat
||Very sexy story - different certainly. I'm not sure about the Amish connection though - do Amish girls have pre-marital sex?
Without that bit I loved the story.
||very very well written - loved it.
||My 'Peeping' Brother in Law
||I must remind people that the story was based 5 years previously - which is why the brother in law is 15; but 20 at the very beginning. If you MUST complain about these things at least read it first! Happy wanking to everyone else.
||Older Sister Is A Tease
||a very 'well written' story but it got silly in the second half....look forward to reading more from this writer.
||hi and thanks for the positive feedback. I can guarantee that I do proofread all of my stories before publishing - and get 2 online friends to do the same for me.
Sadly, in my haste to bring pleasure to people sometimes things slip through the net. I can only apologise if these mistakes and the vehicle faux pas spoilt your masturbatory fun.
||thanks for the high mark and the generally positive feedback.
The 'ass to mouth' bit which has upset people was specifically added for a regular reader.
||Julie the Schooly and the Emo Kids
||What if 'Sash' was really called Liam? Then it wouldn't be a mistake - HAH! Thanks for the kind words I'm glad someone appreciates my writing. Amy x
||certainly not boring - I liked it; very well written
||Oh dear! If you don't like my stories DON'T read them...it only causes you to get upset darling. I'm sorry if my narratives confuse you; but I don't write 'Gonzo' stories...mine have a beginning a middle and an ending; because they are 'stories'.
Perhaps you should continue just looking at pictures and leave proper stories for the big boys. love and kisses Amy
||Betty Boop on Webcam pt2
||I'm glad you liked the story...it was a 'pleasure' to write :)
||Betty Boop on Webcam pt1
||Sadly I'm not Betty - she's a figment of my imagination. Glad you liked it though.
||re: 'U talk 2 much about stuff thats not needed like u go on n on about crap! '
I can only apologise for writing a 'story' - something with a beginning, a middle and an ending with a bit of a back story for readers with a brain!
I'm glad everyone else appears to have liked it though. Thanks everyone else.