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| 2013-05-21 09:45:18 |
winters end |
while the writing is of a high school dropout the stories do hold promise . |
| 2013-05-20 08:27:09 |
The Sergeant's Affair - Chapter 2 |
i hope it does continue . would like to see her pussy taken a good pounding . |
| 2013-04-23 19:35:20 |
Midnight Bite |
are you sure you are only 18 years old ? you have written a very good story . can i expect more to cum ? |
| 2013-04-22 13:22:38 |
Sara's Awakening Part 1 |
IMO you show more promise than a lot of established writers here .
i am looking forward to more stories from you . that is if you decide to do mor writing . |
| 2013-04-11 11:41:18 |
I Met Her at a Christmas Party / Chapter 2 |
very erotic . wife and i are starting enemas and exploring other erotic delights . |
| 2013-04-07 17:22:51 |
First memory of sex addict |
not bad at all . ready for another story from you . |
| 2013-03-26 12:15:50 |
Morning in AZ Desert |
i too live in a "high desert" of Northern Az. like to hike nude . |
| 2013-02-21 15:39:18 |
Amanda's Dad at the Gloryhole |
you had better have a follow up story on this or you will get your nuts crushed. i enjoyed it all to hell ! |
| 2013-02-03 12:22:46 |
mummy whore part 1 |
IMO she treated her mother how the mother wanted to be treated . we all have fetishes of our own and should not look down on others about theirs
tame my case for instance . i am the dominant one with my wife but at times i play to be her bitch . |
| 2012-12-31 19:24:40 |
Panties for Sale? Chapter 8 |
i have read all the chapters before making my comment . a very outstanding story . only other comment is that it should be continued with a fleshed out plot . also that i am looking for more stories to come forth ! K? |
| 2012-07-02 14:38:46 |
A married guys guide to makeing your wife an anal whore PT 2 |
my wife loves it up her ass . now she wants to get a dildo and try it in my ass .maybe! |
| 2012-05-24 14:14:21 |
Team Mother, Part 1 |
if she had said that she wants some cock ,then the boys would get rowdy . this way sha has made friends with all the boys . friends that she will rely on in the future to feed her cocks and fill he mouth with cum . |
| 2012-04-26 18:21:09 |
Natural Born Cocksucker Part 1 |
the story says it right . i have met a lot of females who just loveto have a cock in their mouth . they are natural born cocksuckers . and bless each and everyone of them . |
| 2012-04-25 17:20:19 |
My Two Wives (Part 1) Carol |
If he had any balls at all he should have kicked her as clear up to hr shoulders . a man he ain't ! |
| 2012-04-24 21:23:10 |
Rough |
your best story yet ! that is how i would expect you to suck my cock . |
| 2012-04-22 09:30:37 |
A Teenager's Revenge Part 9 |
WOW ! good series . IMO , there is no need for Samantha and Kelly to carry any further . i am enjoying all your stories . thank you . |
| 2012-04-21 18:28:12 |
The Awakening of a Slut: Samantha |
only one etime did i meet a true slut . she was repulsive with her demands , her langage was made for the gutter . there is no joy to be with a true slut . she is not human . she is a thing . a thing to be pitied . |
| 2012-04-21 14:52:41 |
A Teenager's Revenge Part 1 |
first story i read by you . good story and will give review when done reading all of them . |
| 2012-03-31 20:03:57 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 01 |
what a story ! almost dumped a load in my pants . |
| 2012-03-25 14:43:59 |
it happenedon vacation (and continued at home) pt 5 |
story line keeps getting better and better . |
| 2012-03-12 14:22:27 |
Money is Power (conclusion) |
i think . no, i don't think you did a good job . i think you did an outstanding job . i read all the chapters and was impressed . can we look forward of maybe continuing with same good story ? |
| 2012-03-08 20:54:47 |
Naughty School Girl |
excilirating to read a story with some semblence of understanding the English language .
helps too that i got a hardon and will be looking forward for mere good reading . |
| 2012-01-09 21:52:28 |
Caught You Looking |
enjoyed your story . you have a knack of involving your readers so that they feel part of it . keep on writing stories . they are hot !! |
| 2012-01-01 16:09:58 |
Boy+Boy = Ass+Mouth |
something seriously wrong ? should have stayed in school cause he is not ready to enter the world . maybe as McChucksup . |
| 2011-12-07 17:26:31 |
mm anal |
if you all can write better , then do so ! as for myself i'd like to meet the little ass slut and fuck her in the ass . |
| 2011-11-19 14:16:59 |
My Sister In Law Beth. Chapter 16-18 |
have Jen dump Jeff for Rainee . |
| 2011-10-30 12:55:01 |
Discovering myself |
very well written story . i hope you continue to write more stories . |
| 2011-10-30 12:55:00 |
Discovering myself |
very well written story . i hope you continue to write more stories . |
| 2011-09-17 21:59:11 |
Revenge on Katelyn |
typical teenage fantasy . how droll !! |
| 2011-05-13 00:18:55 |
All because of one F'n party |
not bad for the gist of the story . spelling threw me a few times . |
| 2011-01-10 19:44:13 |
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Briteney , you write some darn good stories . |
| 2010-12-22 21:03:41 |
ONE WONDERFUL SUNDAY IN SUBURBIA |
get mom knocked up ! |
| 2010-12-12 15:10:11 |
The Intruder |
what a novel idea for a rape . is there a sequel coming ? sure hope so . |
| 2010-12-03 15:25:57 |
MY YOUNGER SISTER BLOWS MY MIND !! |
i am ready for a hot and wet pussy in need of a good fuck . |
| 2010-12-03 15:24:38 |
MY YOUNGER SISTER BLOWS MY MIND !! |
for sure i would fuck any pussy now . i can just smell a wet and hot cunt . |
| 2010-11-08 19:28:38 |
A MASTER TO MY MOM, SISTER, AND THE CHEERLEADING TEAM |
a whole bunch of words that don\'t make no sense . |
| 2010-11-07 06:02:47 |
First Dick I Sucked |
i liked your story . as you write more you will improve . myself i have never had the chance to get a blow job through a glory hole and would love to have one from you . |
| 2010-09-23 08:20:03 |
My Sister was always on my mind |
a great story about horny young fuckers . |
| 2010-09-21 07:32:12 |
The Opportunity |
i liked the story . very much of what happened to me one time . |
| 2010-09-19 23:40:01 |
Mom/Son - I can't believe we did it |
a very good story . for some strange reason i was deeply affected by it . i |
| 2010-08-19 18:13:05 |
My Sisters Confusion |
a very good story . made me feel that i was part of the story line . |
| 2010-08-14 18:18:27 |
Jackie's First Anal |
Damn !! that was good ! my wife also loves anal and i oblige her . she loves when i am balls deep in her ass . she likes when my balls slap her cunt . |
| 2010-08-14 16:02:42 |
A FLASH OF MOM'S FLESH (ch#4 & 5) |
all this fucking going on i'd like to see some sweet young thing get knocked up . |
| 2010-08-07 16:07:39 |
The Homeless Peeper |
Tracy is my kind of a women . had a women like her that liked to suck cock and call her a cocksucker . |
| 2010-07-20 11:58:53 |
Island For Three, Chapter 6 |
you can be more help for me. keep writing good stories like you have . |
| 2010-07-18 12:25:07 |
Double Headed Dildo |
my wife and i want to try fucking each other in the ass with a double headed dildo . she loves getting fucked in the ass and i have been wanting to have her fuck me , she said that after that i would be her bitch |
| 2010-07-10 08:27:16 |
A series of co-incidences, part 2 |
i like how you write a story . unlike a lot of stories that if they put in a lot of fuck, suck words they think that makes for a story . i am looking forward for more . K! |
| 2010-07-05 09:09:39 |
MRS. PRIM 2 |
a damn good story . mistakes and all . need more of same . |
| 2010-06-13 09:51:18 |
Your wife and daughter are whores..............now watch! |
just my opinion , But a lot of dirty words strung together do not make for a good story . |
| 2010-06-11 08:29:08 |
Fuck Daddy 1 |
a good read , fucking both mother and daughter. |
| 2010-06-04 19:18:01 |
The Deal - Pt. 1 |
let the story commence as written . no need for name calling . |
| 2010-05-31 12:02:40 |
Jessica's Torment |
i have always loved little titties on a woman and this story was something i liked . |
| 2010-05-31 11:41:59 |
Sylvia's Night at Starbucks |
while i have never come across that , not sure how i would react . maybe i might try that out once or twice . |
| 2010-05-25 12:19:47 |
Kathy Becomes a Human Breeding Slave P.1 |
i am ready for another part . soon i hope . a very good story . |
| 2010-04-06 09:53:41 |
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a good story . i was so involved that i wished i'd had a mother like that . |
| 2010-03-11 19:03:17 |
When I Met Kyle |
not my cup of tea , but a well written story . |
| 2010-03-11 18:49:21 |
My daughter Cindy Part # 3 |
a good thing that keeps getting better and better . my first wife used to wake me up with a blow job . |
| 2010-03-11 18:46:47 |
My Daughter Cindy Part # 1 |
i think chapter#2 is in order . |
| 2010-03-11 18:43:55 |
My Daughter Cindy |
a promising story . |
| 2009-12-05 21:00:48 |
FemDom Training Club |
i think that i might be interested in a femdom setup . for a while anyway . |
| 2009-11-07 09:16:21 |
Buddy Returns |
a beautiful story full of human compasion |
| 2009-11-06 15:48:32 |
Marilyn's Surprise II |
stories keep getting better and better ! |
| 2009-11-06 15:44:23 |
Marilyn's Surprise |
a superb story . i liked how the story was setup and the conclusion . more ? please ! |
| 2009-10-28 17:08:49 |
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now there is a lady after my own heart . i would like her giving me a blow job . |
| 2009-10-07 18:53:14 |
Bigger isn't always better !! |
this story is good . to make it even better chapter two is needed . |
| 2009-10-04 13:02:53 |
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i did not finish reading the whole story . i must be wired different as it did not appeal to me . not even in fantasy . |
| 2009-08-19 21:17:46 |
my surprising step daughter |
keep it up . the story . twas good and we are looking forward for more of the little cocksucker . |
| 2009-08-15 19:59:26 |
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the way i see your story is that you were trolling to find like minded pervs to hook up with . |
| 2009-08-12 20:48:24 |
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i hope the fuck this story is not true . if it is true then i hope the SOB burns in hell . |
| 2009-08-12 11:08:36 |
What mom doesn't know. |
very , very good . iam anticipating more of your stories . |
| 2009-07-25 19:55:29 |
Abby and her Daughters pt 1 |
good ! now on to part two . |
| 2009-07-23 20:24:35 |
My Anus |
very aptly described . |
| 2009-07-21 13:11:40 |
How I Got My Job Part 1 |
sure wish you were giving me a blow job.you sound like you really like to suck cock . keep up the stories . they are very good . |
| 2009-07-10 22:04:06 |
The Shipwreck Pt. 1 |
let the fucking begin ! i love to read about mother fuckers . |
| 2009-06-21 15:10:20 |
The Pregnant Coworker |
i have met a few Pattis in my life and have given them support and thus i can relate to the story .more ???? |
| 2009-06-21 10:05:07 |
Watching Little Casey Next Door |
very good story and writing . keep it up (writing ). more ?? |
| 2009-05-17 20:49:27 |
Post Graduate Slut |
HOT !!! more ??? |
| 2009-05-17 20:42:01 |
The detention |
very erotic reading . hard to believe it is only a story . it is , isn't it ? i would love to have a slut like you to fulfill my dreams . |
| 2009-04-29 13:11:42 |
A Mother's Disire part 1 |
i enjoyed it and would like to see part 2 . |
| 2009-04-25 17:55:52 |
Skipper Licked Me, Daddy |
and you are going to hell too for reading this . i liked the story line . |
| 2009-04-19 12:58:08 |
Debbie Gets Pumped - part-2 |
better than part 1??? sicker than part 1. i have known sick , but this goes way beyond sick . |
| 2009-04-18 20:32:35 |
I answered a Craig's List ad... |
now i can see why my ex wife loves pussy . |
| 2009-04-18 15:14:09 |
Debbie Gets Pumped (Part I) |
a little more than sick . |
| 2009-04-16 20:26:52 |
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a nice story . |
| 2009-04-16 16:18:58 |
Granddaughters like to play #4 |
i sure would love to fullfil a few willing ladies here who yearn for an older man to satisfy their fantasies . lov to have a young one , but legal .any takers ? |
| 2009-04-16 16:02:18 |
Perverted Deeds - Part 1 |
MORE !!!! |
| 2009-04-01 20:24:22 |
my first time with daddy |
nice to have a daughter like that . i prefer them older than that though . |
| 2009-03-30 18:06:41 |
Tony's Dick: A Girl's First Blow Job |
reads like the "all American " fuck . reminds me of many fond blow jobs i had . |
| 2009-03-30 17:55:20 |
IN MY FRIEND'S HOUSE WITH MY WIFE |
as far as the story goes it was pretty good . what threw me for a loop was that for a 48 year old author the spelling was horrible . all in all i can overlook that as the story plot was good . |
| 2009-03-28 15:15:22 |
My Beautiful Step Daughter |
a good story . more ?? |
| 2009-03-22 20:15:29 |
The story of me becoming a slut |
enjoyed your story . good plot . |
| 2009-03-22 12:51:43 |
Mommy's Needs |
WOW !! mama knows best as to what the son needs and gives it to him . i am looking forward to readng more . want to see them start a family . |
| 2009-03-22 12:38:09 |
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i love all the author stories . very wel written . |
| 2009-03-21 23:39:00 |
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a very good story by a 18 year old . in the long run the age matters not . th talentis what counts . would like to meet the author of these various tales . |
| 2009-03-21 16:47:38 |
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AAA+MORE ? |
| 2009-03-21 16:35:18 |
How I became a slave, part I |
story is not to my liking but for a change of pace it WAS riveting to read . maybe to see what other peoples tastes are . |
| 2009-03-14 20:07:55 |
Wife's dog one |
the dog fucking is not my cup of tea , but it was well written and i enjoyed it . |
| 2009-03-14 14:36:04 |
Puppy Slut |
more to the story than what it reads . a sequel ? |
| 2009-03-13 15:57:09 |
Caught in the rain |
loved the story . i can really relate to the situation . |
| 2009-02-27 20:22:54 |
Accidents Happen pt 1 |
very good story . had a sis that i used to play around with when i was around 13 . i had never heard that it was wrong until laer on in my teen years . we sill are pretty close , but no playing around with . |
| 2009-02-27 14:13:21 |
Becoming My Mothers Lover |
now that is one lucky "mother fucker" . sure it was me in his place . |
| 2009-02-27 07:38:03 |
My girlfriends mom |
WOW ! more ?l |
| 2009-01-21 15:14:56 |
Servicing the Client |
well written and plausible story . i would like to read any and all sequals . |
| 2009-01-20 22:58:21 |
My ex-wife, part 1 |
a tad from my liking , but then whatever des the trick for them . could have had a bitt moe extensive plot . |
| 2008-12-04 17:57:13 |
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i like !!! reminds me of this lady i have on the side . |
| 2008-11-30 14:43:28 |
My Wife Cheats |
sounds like a sweet honey i have on the side . we would be driving and her hubby call her on the cell phone . all the tme she is talking to him i am fingering her . she even lets me know whenhe is out of town and we can get together for some quality time . |
| 2008-11-27 19:10:51 |
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i can relate to the story as it was very much like my childhood . my sister and i did a lot of similiar things . awaiting a further adventure . |
| 2008-11-25 21:36:09 |
An Old Flame |
i would kick a slut like her right out on her ass . |
| 2008-11-17 22:04:26 |
My Girlfriends Daughter |
i like a good story .this one was easy to believe . |
| 2008-11-12 23:00:59 |
Camping and Crapping |
a very plausible , well written story . may we expect further stories ? |
| 2008-11-08 08:37:50 |
Old Friends, New Lovers |
i want a nice tight ass to fuck ! |
| 2008-11-06 19:45:46 |
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good un ! |
| 2008-11-05 20:58:10 |
I'm Her Brother From Another Mother |
GOOD !!! MORE ???? |
| 2008-11-04 15:06:43 |
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i would love to play a daddy game a women . |
| 2008-11-04 09:08:58 |
Grown up stepdaughter |
good story . need a followup on this one . |
| 2008-10-30 21:34:12 |
I Fucked My Mommy |
very good read and entertaining . need more stories like it . |
| 2008-10-29 16:30:43 |
huge tits |
despite a few nitpickers i liked the story . more ?? |
| 2008-10-27 16:29:25 |
Rhoda |
i really liked the story , very well written and totally believable . |
| 2008-10-21 19:01:56 |
Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 |
makes me wish i had a chance to fuck my mother . |
| 2008-10-17 07:03:08 |
Mommy's Needs |
makes me wish i was the motherfucker . |
| 2008-10-16 11:34:00 |
sister sucks sleeping sibling 1 |
Jill must be world class cocksucker . great story !! more ?? |
| 2008-10-13 22:52:29 |
A Slut's Confession |
what a surprise ! a great story . i am requesting another one . |
| 2008-10-13 14:25:41 |
Banged by Buster |
WOW !! a proper usage of the word BITCH ! |
| 2008-10-10 19:28:49 |
SANS PANTIES |
very good story . i liked the ending . |
| 2008-10-10 16:42:49 |
my gf little sister |
fifth grade , maybe !! |
| 2008-10-05 15:30:23 |
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a superb followup on previous story . please continue . |
| 2008-10-05 12:26:50 |
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a well witten story . i am hoping for a further continuation . |
| 2008-10-03 17:15:29 |
The Black Bull, The Hotwife and Cuckold |
just a story ?? IMO stories are born in writers minds and minds reflect hidden desires . this story has a ring of truth in it along with fantasy . |
| 2008-10-03 01:15:28 |
Adultry with "Red" |
for all it's faults i did enjoy it . reminded me of few of my escapades . do continue . |