||while the writing is of a high school dropout the stories do hold promise .
||The Sergeant's Affair - Chapter 2
||i hope it does continue . would like to see her pussy taken a good pounding .
||are you sure you are only 18 years old ? you have written a very good story . can i expect more to cum ?
||Sara's Awakening Part 1
||IMO you show more promise than a lot of established writers here .
i am looking forward to more stories from you . that is if you decide to do mor writing .
||I Met Her at a Christmas Party / Chapter 2
||very erotic . wife and i are starting enemas and exploring other erotic delights .
||First memory of sex addict
||not bad at all . ready for another story from you .
||Morning in AZ Desert
||i too live in a "high desert" of Northern Az. like to hike nude .
||Amanda's Dad at the Gloryhole
||you had better have a follow up story on this or you will get your nuts crushed. i enjoyed it all to hell !
||mummy whore part 1
||IMO she treated her mother how the mother wanted to be treated . we all have fetishes of our own and should not look down on others about theirs
tame my case for instance . i am the dominant one with my wife but at times i play to be her bitch .
||Panties for Sale? Chapter 8
||i have read all the chapters before making my comment . a very outstanding story . only other comment is that it should be continued with a fleshed out plot . also that i am looking for more stories to come forth ! K?
||A married guys guide to makeing your wife an anal whore PT 2
||my wife loves it up her ass . now she wants to get a dildo and try it in my ass .maybe!
||Team Mother, Part 1
||if she had said that she wants some cock ,then the boys would get rowdy . this way sha has made friends with all the boys . friends that she will rely on in the future to feed her cocks and fill he mouth with cum .
||Natural Born Cocksucker Part 1
||the story says it right . i have met a lot of females who just loveto have a cock in their mouth . they are natural born cocksuckers . and bless each and everyone of them .
||My Two Wives (Part 1) Carol
||If he had any balls at all he should have kicked her as clear up to hr shoulders . a man he ain't !
||your best story yet ! that is how i would expect you to suck my cock .
||A Teenager's Revenge Part 9
||WOW ! good series . IMO , there is no need for Samantha and Kelly to carry any further . i am enjoying all your stories . thank you .
||The Awakening of a Slut: Samantha
||only one etime did i meet a true slut . she was repulsive with her demands , her langage was made for the gutter . there is no joy to be with a true slut . she is not human . she is a thing . a thing to be pitied .
||A Teenager's Revenge Part 1
||first story i read by you . good story and will give review when done reading all of them .
||Bait and Switch Ch. 01
||what a story ! almost dumped a load in my pants .
||it happenedon vacation (and continued at home) pt 5
||story line keeps getting better and better .
||Money is Power (conclusion)
|| i think . no, i don't think you did a good job . i think you did an outstanding job . i read all the chapters and was impressed . can we look forward of maybe continuing with same good story ?
||Naughty School Girl
||excilirating to read a story with some semblence of understanding the English language .
helps too that i got a hardon and will be looking forward for mere good reading .
||Caught You Looking
|| enjoyed your story . you have a knack of involving your readers so that they feel part of it . keep on writing stories . they are hot !!
||Boy+Boy = Ass+Mouth
||something seriously wrong ? should have stayed in school cause he is not ready to enter the world . maybe as McChucksup .
||if you all can write better , then do so ! as for myself i'd like to meet the little ass slut and fuck her in the ass .
||My Sister In Law Beth. Chapter 16-18
||have Jen dump Jeff for Rainee .
||very well written story . i hope you continue to write more stories .
||very well written story . i hope you continue to write more stories .
||Revenge on Katelyn
||typical teenage fantasy . how droll !!
||All because of one F'n party
||not bad for the gist of the story . spelling threw me a few times .
||Briteney , you write some darn good stories .
||ONE WONDERFUL SUNDAY IN SUBURBIA
||get mom knocked up !
||what a novel idea for a rape . is there a sequel coming ? sure hope so .
||MY YOUNGER SISTER BLOWS MY MIND !!
||i am ready for a hot and wet pussy in need of a good fuck .
||MY YOUNGER SISTER BLOWS MY MIND !!
||for sure i would fuck any pussy now . i can just smell a wet and hot cunt .
||A MASTER TO MY MOM, SISTER, AND THE CHEERLEADING TEAM
||a whole bunch of words that don\'t make no sense .
||First Dick I Sucked
|| i liked your story . as you write more you will improve . myself i have never had the chance to get a blow job through a glory hole and would love to have one from you .
||My Sister was always on my mind
||a great story about horny young fuckers .
||i liked the story . very much of what happened to me one time .
||Mom/Son - I can't believe we did it
|| a very good story . for some strange reason i was deeply affected by it . i
||My Sisters Confusion
||a very good story . made me feel that i was part of the story line .
||Jackie's First Anal
||Damn !! that was good ! my wife also loves anal and i oblige her . she loves when i am balls deep in her ass . she likes when my balls slap her cunt .
||A FLASH OF MOM'S FLESH (ch#4 & 5)
||all this fucking going on i'd like to see some sweet young thing get knocked up .
||The Homeless Peeper
||Tracy is my kind of a women . had a women like her that liked to suck cock and call her a cocksucker .
||Island For Three, Chapter 6
||you can be more help for me. keep writing good stories like you have .
||Double Headed Dildo
||my wife and i want to try fucking each other in the ass with a double headed dildo . she loves getting fucked in the ass and i have been wanting to have her fuck me , she said that after that i would be her bitch
||A series of co-incidences, part 2
||i like how you write a story . unlike a lot of stories that if they put in a lot of fuck, suck words they think that makes for a story . i am looking forward for more . K!
||MRS. PRIM 2
||a damn good story . mistakes and all . need more of same .
||Your wife and daughter are whores..............now watch!
||just my opinion , But a lot of dirty words strung together do not make for a good story .
||Fuck Daddy 1
||a good read , fucking both mother and daughter.
||The Deal - Pt. 1
||let the story commence as written . no need for name calling .
||i have always loved little titties on a woman and this story was something i liked .
||Sylvia's Night at Starbucks
||while i have never come across that , not sure how i would react . maybe i might try that out once or twice .
||Kathy Becomes a Human Breeding Slave P.1
|| i am ready for another part . soon i hope . a very good story .
||a good story . i was so involved that i wished i'd had a mother like that .
||When I Met Kyle
||not my cup of tea , but a well written story .
||My daughter Cindy Part # 3
|| a good thing that keeps getting better and better . my first wife used to wake me up with a blow job .
||My Daughter Cindy Part # 1
|| i think chapter#2 is in order .
||My Daughter Cindy
||a promising story .
||FemDom Training Club
||i think that i might be interested in a femdom setup . for a while anyway .
||a beautiful story full of human compasion
||Marilyn's Surprise II
||stories keep getting better and better !
||a superb story . i liked how the story was setup and the conclusion . more ? please !
||now there is a lady after my own heart . i would like her giving me a blow job .
||Bigger isn't always better !!
||this story is good . to make it even better chapter two is needed .
||i did not finish reading the whole story . i must be wired different as it did not appeal to me . not even in fantasy .
||my surprising step daughter
||keep it up . the story . twas good and we are looking forward for more of the little cocksucker .
||the way i see your story is that you were trolling to find like minded pervs to hook up with .
||i hope the fuck this story is not true . if it is true then i hope the SOB burns in hell .
||What mom doesn't know.
||very , very good . iam anticipating more of your stories .
||Abby and her Daughters pt 1
||good ! now on to part two .
||very aptly described .
||How I Got My Job Part 1
||sure wish you were giving me a blow job.you sound like you really like to suck cock . keep up the stories . they are very good .
||The Shipwreck Pt. 1
||let the fucking begin ! i love to read about mother fuckers .
||The Pregnant Coworker
||i have met a few Pattis in my life and have given them support and thus i can relate to the story .more ????
||Watching Little Casey Next Door
||very good story and writing . keep it up (writing ). more ??
||Post Graduate Slut
||HOT !!! more ???
||very erotic reading . hard to believe it is only a story . it is , isn't it ? i would love to have a slut like you to fulfill my dreams .
||A Mother's Disire part 1
|| i enjoyed it and would like to see part 2 .
||Skipper Licked Me, Daddy
||and you are going to hell too for reading this . i liked the story line .
||Debbie Gets Pumped - part-2
||better than part 1??? sicker than part 1. i have known sick , but this goes way beyond sick .
||I answered a Craig's List ad...
||now i can see why my ex wife loves pussy .
||Debbie Gets Pumped (Part I)
||a little more than sick .
||a nice story .
||Granddaughters like to play #4
||i sure would love to fullfil a few willing ladies here who yearn for an older man to satisfy their fantasies . lov to have a young one , but legal .any takers ?
||Perverted Deeds - Part 1
||my first time with daddy
||nice to have a daughter like that . i prefer them older than that though .
||Tony's Dick: A Girl's First Blow Job
||reads like the "all American " fuck . reminds me of many fond blow jobs i had .
||IN MY FRIEND'S HOUSE WITH MY WIFE
||as far as the story goes it was pretty good . what threw me for a loop was that for a 48 year old author the spelling was horrible . all in all i can overlook that as the story plot was good .
||My Beautiful Step Daughter
||a good story . more ??
||The story of me becoming a slut
||enjoyed your story . good plot .
||WOW !! mama knows best as to what the son needs and gives it to him . i am looking forward to readng more . want to see them start a family .
||i love all the author stories . very wel written .
||a very good story by a 18 year old . in the long run the age matters not . th talentis what counts . would like to meet the author of these various tales .
||How I became a slave, part I
||story is not to my liking but for a change of pace it WAS riveting to read . maybe to see what other peoples tastes are .
||Wife's dog one
||the dog fucking is not my cup of tea , but it was well written and i enjoyed it .
|| more to the story than what it reads . a sequel ?
||Caught in the rain
|| loved the story . i can really relate to the situation .
||Accidents Happen pt 1
||very good story . had a sis that i used to play around with when i was around 13 . i had never heard that it was wrong until laer on in my teen years . we sill are pretty close , but no playing around with .
||Becoming My Mothers Lover
||now that is one lucky "mother fucker" . sure it was me in his place .
||My girlfriends mom
||WOW ! more ?l
||Servicing the Client
|| well written and plausible story . i would like to read any and all sequals .
||My ex-wife, part 1
|| a tad from my liking , but then whatever des the trick for them . could have had a bitt moe extensive plot .
||i like !!! reminds me of this lady i have on the side .
||My Wife Cheats
|| sounds like a sweet honey i have on the side . we would be driving and her hubby call her on the cell phone . all the tme she is talking to him i am fingering her . she even lets me know whenhe is out of town and we can get together for some quality time .
||i can relate to the story as it was very much like my childhood . my sister and i did a lot of similiar things . awaiting a further adventure .
||An Old Flame
|| i would kick a slut like her right out on her ass .
||My Girlfriends Daughter
|| i like a good story .this one was easy to believe .
||Camping and Crapping
|| a very plausible , well written story . may we expect further stories ?
||Old Friends, New Lovers
|| i want a nice tight ass to fuck !
||good un !
||I'm Her Brother From Another Mother
||GOOD !!! MORE ????
|| i would love to play a daddy game a women .
||Grown up stepdaughter
||good story . need a followup on this one .
||I Fucked My Mommy
||very good read and entertaining . need more stories like it .
||despite a few nitpickers i liked the story . more ??
||i really liked the story , very well written and totally believable .
||Bed Making Mom Chapter 1
||makes me wish i had a chance to fuck my mother .
||makes me wish i was the motherfucker .
||sister sucks sleeping sibling 1
||Jill must be world class cocksucker . great story !! more ??
||A Slut's Confession
||what a surprise ! a great story . i am requesting another one .
||Banged by Buster
||WOW !! a proper usage of the word BITCH !
||very good story . i liked the ending .
||my gf little sister
||fifth grade , maybe !!
||a superb followup on previous story . please continue .
|| a well witten story . i am hoping for a further continuation .
||The Black Bull, The Hotwife and Cuckold
||just a story ?? IMO stories are born in writers minds and minds reflect hidden desires . this story has a ring of truth in it along with fantasy .
||Adultry with "Red"
||for all it's faults i did enjoy it . reminded me of few of my escapades . do continue .