Comments from 4qthhh
|2012-05-10 16:16:33||Bobbie in the Summer of 1967||Excellent. I hope there is a sequel. Pregnancy would be a bummer, but OC's were just beginning to be used in young girls to regulate bad periods, so it is possible her mother took her to a doctor to get them.
After that happened, the sky is the limit. A twosome or a threesome would be fun.
Anal could be worked in. The kids were the last of the enema generation so an enema before anal could add an interesting twist to the story.
Carry on. You write very well.
|2012-05-10 21:34:47||Lost Virginity||Absolutely blown away. A phenominal tendeer, loving story. I had tears many times. I don't think it possible you could ever top this one.|
|2013-03-16 11:09:17||All because of one F'n party: Change in the Tide||Great series. Could not stop reading it.
You commented that this chapter was second to the last. It's been almost 4 months since this was posted. Please, please, please do the last chapter. What does she do to James? Does she ever get back with Andrew?
|2013-04-22 15:14:41||Sharing Jack's Bed: Part 4||Found your work by a fortunate link. Finished reading another author and checked on his "favorites list" snd this series showed up. Decided to read it and holy WOW. You are a phenominal anad accomplissshed author. one of the very best I have run across, I am going to bookmark this link. Keep up the good work and I am going to start reading the rest of your offerings. If they are half as good as this series I will be totally satisfied.|
|2013-06-26 11:11:22||Home alone with Alyssa, part 1||Excellent!
Keep writing. Ignore the negative comments. When you are creating a new story or a chapter just keep on letting your inspiration go where it will. Good authors have someone to edit their work, either free or paid. When you hit the creative streak, don't stop and fus about typos, etc. Just keep on going. You can eventually come back and fix the few mistakes. I read fairly fast, so any little mistakes are barely noticed. Just keep on creating.