| Date |
Story title |
Comment |
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| 2009-09-01 17:06:13 |
Escort Services Chapter three |
thank you fukyy |
| 2009-05-13 05:29:28 |
Karen |
Eils, Great story, well constructed and just about the right pace. You have the same problem as I, with puncuation, but that I can ignore. (Those little semi-colon thingys are a pain in the ass).
I repeat my observation on the forum thread, how come it has such a low average score? It worked for me.
Styxx |
| 2009-02-26 06:06:11 |
Painted Student |
Cunt is just a word, nothing more than that. Once again, I am not a woman hater, line from the story:
And then, she went rigid for a second as her orgasm rippled through her. Her taste was simply sublime, her essence liberally coated my tongue and taste buds as I swallowed her fluids.
Operative word being sublime as in beyond nice, as in pinnacle of taste.
But, I am getting a little tired of having to defend my stories from people who cannot be bothered to actually read and assimilate the content or who take some quasi moral standpoint when they are trawling a site rammed full of erotic literature. I write for my pleasure mostly and many people seem to enjoy the stories, but, if some fuckwit has an issue with that, then so be it, just fuck off and enjoy something else, okay?
Styxx
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| 2009-02-24 02:48:37 |
Painted Student |
Think I need to correct the reader who thinks I hate women... wrong... totally wrong. I can't think of anything finer than a good woman, sadly something you are not.
I do admit to being a Brit, kinda proud of it in fact.
Styxx |
| 2008-12-26 03:20:41 |
Cadbury in Service |
For the information of the reader who says it is totally fake.... well der! This is a fiction site.
For those who voted and let me know they enjoyed the story, my thanks and I am pleased that you had a good time.
Styxx |
| 2008-12-26 03:16:17 |
Suzanne's lesson |
I agree, most men would have ended up balls deep in her body and then spent the rest of their lives regretting it. I would hope I have the self control not to plunder her, but you know hope, it rarely does what it says on the can.
Styxx |
| 2008-10-03 14:16:36 |
Without Love (edited & reposted) |
Fortunately (for me) you are in the minority in your views.
I do have to wonder, why it is you bother to read these free efforts to entertain if you are only faced with mediocrity. I see that you have an extensive list and an average of 83 or so. Congratulations! I bow to your superior intellect, but would not be crass enough to leave a negative comment. Have a nice day! |
| 2008-09-20 18:11:42 |
Wild Child |
The amount of negative vote surprises me a little. Is it that bad? |
| 2008-09-20 18:10:29 |
Rambo |
It was meant to be humor. |
| 2008-09-20 18:09:23 |
Mated with Bruno |
To the reader who didn't read it, shame, you might have enjoyed it. For the other comments, my thanks. Vismund, I am flattered that you would want to work in collaberation, it does not work for me though. |
| 2008-09-20 18:06:37 |
Moon Phases |
two out of three aint bad. Two positive comments and one less so. |
| 2008-09-20 18:04:57 |
Fairy Storey (adult version) |
A bit off the wall I guess. Never mind. |
| 2008-09-20 18:03:48 |
Buffy (longish) |
A bit too extreme??? Comments will help me progress |
| 2008-09-20 18:02:28 |
The trouble with Linda |
Thank you Charbot |
| 2008-09-20 18:01:08 |
Jane's Safari |
Thanks peeps. |
| 2008-09-20 18:00:16 |
Sal's Lover |
I thought this one might have done better. Never mind, I enjoyed writting it. |
| 2008-09-20 17:58:53 |
Trinity |
Nothing to say people? Is it that bad? |
| 2008-09-20 17:57:54 |
Fortunes of war |
Thank you guys, I am pleased you enjoyed the story. |
| 2008-09-20 17:55:47 |
My first time |
Telling it from the dog's perspective wasn't easy, they don't think as we do so I couldn't mind read the subject Lol.
As for the interlectual who thinks I is asshole... eloquently put my friend. |
| 2008-09-20 17:53:33 |
Allan's Story |
Reader, think about it, Tommy was the slack jawed one, sired from Ray, it is Rays seed that's fucked up.
Pleased you enjoyed the story. |
| 2008-09-20 17:51:09 |
My first time 2 |
pleased you enjoyed it. |
| 2008-09-20 17:50:12 |
April (Longish) |
These things do happen.
Cheers guys. |
| 2008-09-20 17:49:14 |
Bless me Father (for I have sinned) |
Is it too long? |
| 2008-09-20 17:48:03 |
Dog day afternoon |
If it seems wordy, it is because I am trying to paint a scene in your head.
Thanks for the comments. |
| 2008-09-20 17:46:05 |
Meeting of minds |
Cheers guys, pleased you enjoyed the story. |
| 2008-09-20 17:45:10 |
Bernard (Male Bestiality) |
Getting screwed by a dog is not for the faint hearted. A dogs cock is sharp, wit a chisel point and is made up of a bone, rather than blood infused muscle tissue such as a man is.
Thanks for the positive comments. |
| 2008-09-20 17:43:03 |
First Experience |
The reader who commented that the story should have had more detail is absolutely right. This was one of my first stories, way back when I started to write. I look at it now and wonder what I was on. |
| 2008-09-20 17:41:04 |
Cadbury in Service |
I write for pleasure, mostly mine, if others enjoy, then that is a bonus. I am not a proffesional write, would be really great to earn a living enjoying myself as I do when I write. The vocabulary is only from the experience of life... and a lot of reading.
Thanks for the positive comments. |
| 2008-09-20 17:37:10 |
Retribution |
So many reads and no comments. Something I said? |
| 2008-09-20 17:35:49 |
The Stray |
My thanks for the positive votes and comments. To the underaged advertiser, take it someplace else please. |
| 2008-09-20 17:32:42 |
Home Alone |
Most of the stories I write are not pure stroke stuff. They usually are stories with sex in them and not just a descriptive passage of a sexual act. So, if the story has some scene setting or even, god forbid, some character building, live with it, you're being entertained.
Obviously, it isn't all things to all people, for those who enjoyed and made positive comments, thank you. For those who didn't, have a nice day! |
| 2008-09-20 17:25:53 |
A day in a life |
Thank you all for the positive comments. |
| 2008-09-20 17:16:58 |
Bi-curious? Not any more |
To the reader who found it boring, why fucking read it then? |
| 2008-09-20 17:12:26 |
Without Love (edited & reposted) |
Good question fbailey, but like any artist, the painting can always be improved. |
| 2008-07-18 10:48:22 |
The Babysitter came too |
I would like to thank you all for the kind comments. Unfortunately, most messages are left as anonymous, so cannot thank you individually. |