Comments from daddy_bare
|2008-06-11 21:38:10||Siblings With Privileges (re written)||Nicely done. A little subbing (No, no *that* kind of subbing, I mean sub-editing or proofreading) would have picked up the few minor spelling and punctuation errors.|
|2008-06-13 11:09:01||The Hot Tub with Friends||I know this is not Eng-Lit 101, but any story that begins with the eye-rolling cliché of using cum to mean come ... that's as far as I get.|
|2009-03-12 19:59:17||Our New Neighbors - Ch04: Maxine's Liberation||You are a writer who knows what your readers want -- and gives it to them in spades!
This is becoming a classic of the genre. I am one of the thousands who are eagerly waiting on every new chapter.
|2009-03-25 00:33:01||Family encounters of the sexual kind: the story of an anonymous girl||More ... you have to continue the story.|
|2009-03-30 06:13:23||Daddy Gets Candy||Excellent, but it doesn't end, it just stops. You KNOW it needs to be continued.|