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| 2010-12-19 17:38:51 |
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oh please stop whinning would you and oh man you can use big words, your story still SUCKS !!!! |
| 2010-12-17 22:07:07 |
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i was being nice with my comment but since you got your panties in such a bunch with your e-mail to me all i can say is u need profesional help i truly think you should close your stories to comments if your going to blow up and be an ass about it when someone makes a comment not liking your story have a nice day nut case and oh your story still sucks !!!! |
| 2010-12-16 20:03:57 |
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this story left alot to be desired
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| 2010-12-10 00:48:02 |
Drunken Surprise |
you sick demented bastard i hope someone finds you out for the person you truely are and adjust your behavior |
| 2010-12-10 00:47:55 |
Drunken Surprise |
you sick demented bastard i hope someone finds you out for the person you truely are and adjust your behavior |
| 2010-12-10 00:40:21 |
My little girls ass |
This story sounds like 2 robots haveing sex the part that he says( i'll go back to molesting you) come on get real this story needs alotta improvement |
| 2010-12-07 22:58:47 |
Satisfying my Brothers |
learn sentence structure and how to spell was hard to read because of all the errors |
| 2010-12-07 22:51:08 |
Snakes |
stupidest story i have ever had the misfortune of reading |
| 2010-12-07 22:46:32 |
Snakes |
This is by far the stupidest story i have ever read on this site please never write another story this stupid if you consider this erotica please you are severely twisted and most of all makes no sense at all gwafi |
| 2010-11-25 17:26:09 |
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this has to be the stupidist story i have ever had the misfortune of reading also a 13 yr girl is not prepubecent moron god if ur going to write a story get ur facts straight |
| 2010-11-25 17:25:52 |
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this has to be the stupidist story i have ever had the misfortune of reading also a 13 yr girl is not prepubecent moron god if ur going to write a story get ur facts straight |
| 2010-11-06 22:56:50 |
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You truly are a moron and rapeing a 3 yr old u need to be hung up by your privates and have gasoline poured on you and lit with a match and your burnt corpse left as an example to other sick pedophiles like yourself do us all some justice and get a gun and shoot yourself in the head so you can\'t write anymore sick garbage like this story ! |
| 2010-11-06 22:56:38 |
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You truly are a moron and rapeing a 3 yr old u need to be hung up by your privates and have gasoline poured on you and lit with a match and your burnt corpse left as an example to other sick pedophiles like yourself do us all some justice and get a gun and shoot yourself in the head so you can\'t write anymore sick garbage like this story ! |
| 2009-06-23 16:36:54 |
my first time |
ever heard of paragraghs geesh learn sentence structure |
| 2008-05-11 11:53:16 |
family love |
your story truly rates as a 1 if i could give a zero i would !!!! |
| 2008-05-11 11:49:52 |
Freaky Mother Daughter Fuck |
well this story truly sucked !!!! |
| 2008-04-29 11:06:35 |
terminator the sarah connor chronicles johns adventures |
this story suck's why did you stop it and not finish it moron it was to short and just not worth trying to read it just sucked |