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| 2011-09-09 22:10:58 |
Zara and the Gang |
Truly awesome story. I just love gangbangs and threesomes. You did a tremendous job. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-09-07 21:58:53 |
The Family Business I: Coming Home |
Wow, awesome story. Very well written and extremely hot. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent. Of course I will be looking for more.
Lunalupo
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| 2011-09-06 21:45:08 |
Cornfield Rape |
Wow, great story, and yes I do hope it is continued. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-09-06 20:18:55 |
Trey and his Mommy |
Wow, and wow again, that was an excitingly hot story, I love it. I am hoping you have more to it. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-09-06 13:56:46 |
The Troublemaker |
Wow, that is a great start. I will definitely look for followups. Thanks for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-09-06 13:37:17 |
The Bookworm, The Dog, and Me- Final Chapter |
Wow, this was an amazingly hot story. I could cum just from reading it. I do thoroughly appreciate your sharing such an erotic talent. I will be looking for more from you.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-09-05 23:44:18 |
Debt and its high price |
Are you going to finish the story? |
| 2011-09-05 23:33:29 |
The Bookworm, the Dog, and Me- Part II |
Wow, I love the followup. I could just see them fucking and sucking. Great story and of course another positive rating.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-09-05 23:21:59 |
The Bookworm, the Dog, and Me |
I love your story and gave you a well deserved positive rating. I just wish you would take it further with the boy getting to fuck his sister as well as more dog fucking.
Thanks for sharing your erotic talent |
| 2011-06-27 01:52:07 |
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Yet another great chapter. Thank you again for sharing your erotic talent with us. You are a real pro. |
| 2011-06-27 01:28:57 |
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I loved the story. I just hope you will continue on with it. Of course I gave you a well deserved positive score. |
| 2011-06-27 01:02:05 |
Kathy (white trash whore) part 1 |
I would love to read this story but with virtually no breaks between paragraphs it is too hard to read. |
| 2011-06-10 00:39:35 |
Now We Get Along Just Fine |
Another awesome story Wayne. I just wish you had time to give it more chapters, I really love the way you write. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-06-03 23:57:07 |
Dad and the neighbors |
Great story. I love multiple fucking and this one has it. Hopefully you will cum up with more adventures with this family. Thanks for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-04-15 22:22:32 |
My Neighbors |
Awesome start. Now I am really turned on and ready to read the next installment. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-02-18 22:53:22 |
Property of Devil's Outlaws |
Awesome start. I was anxiously waiting on the bikers' dogs to get to fuck her, hopefully they do in the next section. Thanks for sharing your depraved writing skills, I of course gave you a positive score.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-02-18 22:27:59 |
Charity Starts At Home: Chapter 3 : Gotta Hve Faith |
Wow again. I certainly hope you continue this great story. You are a tremendous writer with a flair for realism and well written sex scenes. Thanks for sharing your awesome talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-02-18 01:19:17 |
Charity Starts At Home : Chapter 2 : Entertaining Guests |
Wow, this is some great porn. Loved every bit of it. Thank you for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2011-01-24 22:55:57 |
My First Threesome |
Wow, awesome threesome. My ex and I used to do lots of three and moresomes. She loved showing off her dancer's figure and fucking several guys. Your story reminded me of those hot times. Thanks for writing and sharing with us. |
| 2011-01-23 23:32:54 |
She walked by Chapter 5-8 |
Truly awesomne story. I can hardly wait to read the next chapters. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent. |
| 2010-12-31 00:00:55 |
My Daughter Cindy |
More, more, more - of course we want more. Daddy needs to fuck her silly and she needs to suck his cock with his hot, slimy seed filling her mouth and swallowed. Of course she could end up not only fucking and sucking daddy, but also sucking mommy's juicy pussy. |
| 2010-12-30 23:58:26 |
My Daughter Cindy |
Of course we want more. This is hopefully only the beginning. She is a little hottie and would have an awesome time fucking her daddy and licking her mom's juicy pussy. Keep it going. Your fans are wanting more, more, more. |
| 2010-09-24 23:37:00 |
The tree fort |
Great start. I am glad you have more chapters, this will be an awesome story. Thank you for sharing your erotic talent, I gave you a well deserved positive rating.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-09-12 18:19:02 |
My Slutty Wife Used as a Dog Slave Bitch part 1 |
Something is screwy with XNXX - I made a constructive comment and it came back as saying that it contained bad words. |
| 2010-09-08 23:53:05 |
Double Trouble? |
Truly love this story. It is so made for going on more, and more, and more. Thank you so much for sharing your awesome talent. Of course I gave you a well deserved positive rating.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-23 22:10:22 |
The Debt Collector - Part3 |
I do not know why this story has not been rated higher. If a reader read the first chapter then continued on they must like it. Giving a low rating on the third chapter just does not make sense. I gave it a well deserved positive rating. Well done!!
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-23 20:39:06 |
The Debt Collector - Part 1 re-posted |
Great start on this story. But you need to use some paragraph breaks, one extremely looooooong paragraph makes for hard reading.
I did give you a positive score though as the story is otherwise well written. Thanks for sharing your erotic talent. |
| 2010-08-21 22:23:15 |
The Homeless Peeper II |
This one is a great addition to Peeper I. It would be awesome if you continued it so that mom and son get to fucking at home. Then of course Tracy's two kids, boy and girl, get in on the action. Thanks again for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-21 22:05:23 |
The Piano Teachers' Pussy |
Awesome story. You really know how to bring the reader into the action. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-18 00:29:08 |
My Slutty Wife Used as a Dog Slave Bitch part 2 |
I was hoping this was going to be a great sex story with the girl being fucked by dogs and guys. The part with Bull I just had to pass over. |
| 2010-08-16 22:21:21 |
A Family Thing part 1 |
Yet another awesome story which has a follow-up. I have been to Carmel By The Sea, one of the most beautiful places on Earth. It will be interesting to see what Olivia has planned. Thanks again for sharing your awesome talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-15 22:48:28 |
What Daddy Needs 2 |
You have continued on with your awesome story. I just hope you will continue with it. I know it was probably not meant to be for this story, but it would be a really hot twist if you brought the brother into the sex. Thanks again for sharing your talent with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-15 22:36:22 |
What Daddy Needs |
Really well written. You have the ability to bring the reader into the story. I really felt for both characters (we do not know about the brother yet) but I also enjoyed the hot sex. Now on to part 2. Thank you so much for sharing your amazingly erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-14 21:28:41 |
Janice |
I did give the story a positive rating as it was well written. However, it is not my type of story as I like for the sexual activity to be real and personal with vivid descriptions of the sexual acts. This story could be remade into a really hot story with multiple chapters. |
| 2010-08-14 21:14:24 |
The Homeless Peeper |
Great read. I would love for you to continue this awesome story. You certainly have made it possible to see into the sexual activity. Thank you for sharing your talent. Of course I gave you a positive rating, well deserved.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-11 23:52:37 |
my brother, my wife and me... |
Great short story. You just need to add the husband to the fucking so they can have a threesome. My ex and I used to do that a lot and it was fantastic. Thank you for sharing your erotic talent with us, of course I gave you a well deserved positive rating.
Lunalupo
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| 2010-08-10 21:56:26 |
The House At The End of the Street |
The story was good as far as it went; however, it appears that the only thing you are interested here is to get people to go to your publisher's web site and buy your book(s). You leave people dangling wanting more. I did give the story a positive rating as it was well done, for as far as it went.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-09 21:56:29 |
Forget Harper Valley PTA |
Awesome story. Would love for it to continue here, with his daughters cumming the next time. Then of course he should start sharing their delights at home not only with himself but with some friends as well. You really know how to make the reader feel like he/she is a part of the action. Thank you for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-09 16:37:45 |
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Awesome story. You are truly a great writer of eroticia. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-08-03 22:03:40 |
Family Brothel 1 |
Great story. Hopefully there will be a detailed description of Henry fucking Jenna. Then of course we need some detailed descriptions of Greg fucking both his mom and his sister. Just saying that he fucked her does not get it. I gave you a well deserved positive rating, wish it could be more.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-07-25 02:33:11 |
Vacation For Two - Thursday |
Of course this is the best one so far. I just hope that after the vacation ends that you will pick up with them finding ways to make love at home. It would really be awesome if the parents had set up hidden cameras in the cabin and came on with motion detectors. That way the parents could see their many and varied erotic couplings and then bring the hot teen and preteen into their bed for some real fun. There are lots of ways for this super story to contine. Thanks again for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-07-25 01:55:37 |
Vacation For Two - Wednesday |
Wow. He really learned on the job. Great story, still loving it and anxious to read what comes next. Thanks again for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-07-24 00:21:46 |
A Shock To The System - Ch. 2 |
Off to read the next chapter..... |
| 2010-07-24 00:07:34 |
A Shock to the System - Ch. 1 |
Great start. I am horney now so I must hurry to the next installment. Thanks for sharing your erotic talent with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-07-14 23:00:59 |
Farm Girl Part 1 (Re-Written) |
Great spin on the old story. Now, how about continuing on with it and change the rest of the old story to fit this one.
Thanks for sharing your erotic talent. Hope to read much more from you.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-07-13 23:07:38 |
my surprising step daughter |
This is a truly great short story, well described, I felt like I was there enjoying the action. Yes, please continue the story, maybe get all three involved and then maybe a friend of his comes to enjoy the goodies too. I love MFM action. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-07-08 01:01:13 |
Fucking my mom |
Awesome. Can hardly wait to read the next chapter. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic writing talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-07-07 18:16:04 |
My daughter's gang bang |
I gave you a positive score but I wish you would have provided a little more background so as to make the story seem more realistic. Maybe you could come up with a prequel and tell how daddy & daughter got started, several sessions while wife is at work, then bring up getting the guys together to cum. I thank you for sharing your eroticia.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-06-27 18:57:35 |
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Wow and wow again. I certainly hope this awesome story continues, not only at the vacation but at home too.
Thanks again for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-06-27 18:46:55 |
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The adventure keeps getting better. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent, I am soooo looking forward to reading more. Hopefully the boys will get to fuck their mom and get to continue with their sister and mom at home. A family that fucks together is a happy family indeed. |
| 2010-06-16 21:29:20 |
Billy's Introduction to a Sex-filled Weekend |
I gave it a positive rating but had to stop reading when the boy was required to suck a cock. I just cannot handle MM or mM. |
| 2010-06-15 21:04:01 |
My Life - I learn from my Aunty |
A little far fetched for a 13 yr old to have an 8" cock. |
| 2010-06-15 19:49:51 |
Jessica Part 3 Tim Joins Us |
This episode with all three involved in the fucking is the best yet. It reminds me so much of the 3 and moresomes that my wife and I used to do. We had talked about doing something and then one day I had the opportunity to bring home a guy for our first threesome. It was awesome. It is oh so hot to get into a hot DP with one guy fucking her tight ass and another fucking her hot, tight pussy. She was a former exotic dancer and she kept her great figure plus her face was just naturally beautiful. We worked on to having more guys. She loved to show off her fabulous body plus she loved to be fucked for extended time periods which was possible with several guys. Hopefully you will be able to bring in his wife to make it a foursome and then maybe some more males.
Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo
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| 2010-06-15 17:19:51 |
Getting my nephew naked |
I am really hoping that part 2 will have her sucking his dick then fucking him. Aunt/nephew stories are great and you are an awesome writer. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-06-15 17:15:41 |
CFNM for my sister's |
Great short story with lots of potential. I would love for the sister, and maybe even her friend, start sucking his dick then fucking him. You are a great writer, just need more detail with some hot action sex. I gave you a positive rating, well deserved.
Please let me know when you have expanded this great story.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-06-15 16:53:28 |
The Bookworm, the Dog, and Me |
This is a really great short story. It could be the start of a much longer, several chapter epic with him getting to repeatedly fuck her as well as the dog. You might even bring in some of his friends to enjoy her. Beasty stories along with guys fucking are a real turnon. Thanks for sharing your erotic talent, please let me know if you expand on this story.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-05-16 22:14:59 |
Party Games |
That has to be the most amazing gangbang I have ever read. Very unusual and well written. You received a well deserved positive from me.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-05-09 21:52:05 |
A Summer with Amber Chapter 2 |
Very hot and erotic story. It was obviously not intended to be a true story but one to tittalate the reader which you have done so well. Thank you for sharing your talent, now on to chapter 3.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-05-08 23:41:44 |
A Summer with Amber Chapter 1 |
Very well written with superb character development and believeable plot. I am anxious to get started on chapter 2.
Of course I gave you a positive rating, well deserved.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-05-03 00:15:54 |
My Sis |
Wow, and wow again. Really great story. There could be a continuation with son fucking mom and getting more privileges with sis. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent. I have given you a positive rating and added this story to my profile.'
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-30 20:01:01 |
don't tell mom the baby sitter gives head (intro) |
I felt that it is a great story. Now, how about continuing with it and develope their relationship so that they not only suck each other off but also get into fucking each other. There is a lot of potential here.
Thanks for sharing your erotic talent. Of course I gave you a well deserved positive rating.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-30 19:43:19 |
Good Vibrations |
Well written story. Now, how about continuing with their further adventures.
Thanks for sharing your erotic talent. You received a well deserved positive rating from me.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-30 02:46:36 |
Vicky |
Great story. I just wish that you continue on with further adventures with all three of them enjoying each other. You might even bring in her husband for a really great fuck session, then possibly bring in more guys to make it even more enticeing.
Thanks for sharing your erotic prose with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-30 02:27:50 |
Homecoming |
End it with going back to Jim's circle of friends fucking her in every way imaginable with extreme detail. It would be great if the guys feelings were also told as well as hers. Minutely detailed fucking scenes are what makes readers really enjoy your stories. You have a very exceptional talent and I gave you a well deserved positive rating. Now I am going to seek out your other stories. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-30 00:13:52 |
Daddy teaches his little girl... |
Great story. This could very well develope into a great long story to include the grand parents fucking the parents as well as the grand daughter. You did an excellent job and I gave you a well deserved positive rating. Thanks for writing and sharing with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-29 23:48:28 |
Long Lost Lovers... |
This could be a good story if you rewrite it and make it like it was happening now, with quotation marks, actual conversation, etc. As it is it is hard to read and enjoy. |
| 2010-04-28 23:57:42 |
Getting Cindy Fucked |
Loved the story. Reminded me of the times my ex and I used to have. We had many 3, 4, and moresomes. She was an exotic dancer with an absolutely beautiful body and face before we were married and she loved to show off her dancer's body as well as fuck. We had many, many awesome times fucking her beautiful body. Thanks for writing and sharing your experiences. Hopefully you will share more with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-24 22:27:53 |
Fringe Benefits |
Great story. Well written with great descriptions of what is happening. The only thing I would change, and this is entirely a personal preference, is that when Dan is fucking that he shoot his hot load of cum deep into the girl's/woman's pussy instead of pulling out to cum in their mouths. I love great blowjobs and love to have the gal suck my cum down her throat, but the pussy is number one. Great job, thanks for sharing and of course a positive for your story.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-24 21:07:45 |
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Started to read it then noticed the extremely long first paragraph. That is a sure sign of someone who does not write well. Sorry, I could not read itl. |
| 2010-04-22 21:46:28 |
A Sleepover With Aunt Stephanie |
This is a truly wonderful story. The background and character development were perfect and the blow by blow description of everything leading up to the actual fucking was the personification of a great story of eroticia. Thank you so much for writing and sharing your talent with us. I just hope that these two characters continue in your future stories.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-15 21:23:58 |
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You did an amazing job for the direction you wanted to go. However, you had this reader and I am sure more wanting her to actually suck the boys off and/or fuck both boys. Keep up the great work, you received a well deserved positive rating from me.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-09 22:25:03 |
My boyfriend and the dog |
Great story. I love stories with dogs fucking girls and this one was even more special with her getting fucked in the ass by the dog while getting fucked in the pussy by her boyfriend. Would love to have this couple in more adventures with more dogs. |
| 2010-04-09 21:51:28 |
wifewhore2 |
Very hot story. Now you need to continue with Sarah getting fucked by more dogs while sucking off her husband. Of course he husband needs to fuck her after the dogs so that he can have sloppy 4ths or 5ths. Love dog stories. |
| 2010-04-09 19:29:22 |
Older Sister Is A Tease |
Great fuck story, I really enjoyed it. The only thing better would have been for him to get to invite some of his friends to fuck her too, that would have been awesome. Thanks for sharing your erotic prose.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-08 22:24:08 |
Snow Day: Stuck at Home with Little Sis |
I just finished reading this on the Forum and decided I should come to the Stories section so I could give you a positive rating - only wish I could do more, this is a fantastic story. Of course being the old lecher that I am, I would like for you to expand this story and bring in the mom so she can enjoy their sexual adventures. I just glanced up to the entry above and it seems that more of your fans want her included. THANKS for writing and sharing your eroticia.
Your Fan,
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-04 22:27:23 |
Amanda starts a new job |
Great start and a big positive rating. I would love for her to have sucked him dry as he was cumming. Great story, I am so happy that you are continuing with it.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-03 21:20:17 |
My Pregnant Neighbor Part 3 |
Awesome story. You told it really well as though you tell it from first hand experience. I have had that same pleasure and your story has brought back those memories. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic prose with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-01 20:06:54 |
Dirty Little Boys, Filthy Big Girls |
I just got to the point where Karen has 38DD breasts and decided the story was not for me. I did not rate it as that would have been unfair since I did not read it.
Sorry.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-03-28 22:19:10 |
A Likely Story Chapter Two |
That was a great story. I am sure you could figure out ways to make it continue. You sure know how to make your readers cum. Thanks for writing and posting = Positive rating of course, again it is well deserved.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-03-28 21:52:45 |
A Likely Story Chapter One |
This is a great story. I just love it when a gal gets fucked by more than one guy. Makes me hard and wanting to cum. I am looking forward to chapter 2.
You got a positive rating from me, well worth it.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-03-27 19:41:58 |
Julie and the Team part 2 |
Your story reminds me of my ex wife and I. When we were stationed overseas we did a lot of 3 and moresomes. There were lots of American GI's just jumping at the bit to get to fuck a good looking broad as most were overseas without their own pussy with them. My ex was a former exotic dancer with a fabulous body and loved to show it off and really got off fucking several guys and I enjoyed sharing her with my buddies. Sooooo, your hot stories have made me think of those times and get really hot. Thanks for writing and sharing with us.
Your Fan,
Lunalupo |
| 2010-03-27 19:31:33 |
Julie and the team part 1 |
Great story you have going here, sooooo glad you wrote and posted it for us. I am leaking juice just thinking about it. Hope you continue to provide us with your awesomely erotic talent.
Max score of course.
Your Fan,
Lunalupo |
| 2010-03-26 14:46:35 |
The Plane Crash |
From reading the prelude and chapter one it is obvious that you need to do some serious proof reading before posting your stories. Simple things like capitalization, run on sentences, etc., make for a low score right off the bat. I am not rating the story as I did not read it all. |
| 2010-03-25 14:43:07 |
Rachel Babysits the Naughty Little Boys |
It is a great treat to get to read such an awesome story by someone such as you - You really know how to set the scene and bring the readers into the story. The only thing I would have done differently would have been to have her savor and swallow the boys loads of cum, it seems such a waste when the cum is not uploaded into a sucking mouth or squeezing pussy. Now, how about bringing in the kids' father and mother into the story. That would be awesome, the father getting to fuck the babysitter and the mother getting fucked by her kids then have the baby sitter eat the mother's pussy while the mother eats the babysitter's pussy. Ummmmmm.
Thanks for writing and sharing. Of course you received a max score from me.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-03-22 22:59:56 |
My Pregnant Neighbor Part 2 |
Yet another great installment. You write so well, you make the reader become a part of the story so that we can actually taste those lucious lactating tits of hers and visualize wanting to fuck her hot and juicy pussy. Of course we are waiting on a new chapter.
Lunalupo |
| 2010-03-22 22:37:46 |
My Pregnant Neighbor |
This was truly an awesome start to what could turn out to be a very hot triad. I would love for you to take it to the next steps and have her want and receive his dick in her pussy then have him and her husband both fuck her. I love MFM fucking and would love it to continue after she has her baby and is lactating so that both her neighbor and her husband can enjoy her lacatating tits and both get to fuck her at the same time. You have lots of possibilities here, thanks for writing such a hot beginning.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-12-10 01:53:02 |
Unfatomable fantasies I - Rape of Amelia and Yen Yi (Part 1) |
Way too many men and way too many grammar errors. |
| 2009-12-06 20:00:03 |
Truth or Dare |
I for one found it to be a very exciting and entertaining story. Would love to see you take it to the next level and have the sister allow you to bring in some of your buddies for threesomes and foursomes and more. I just love stories with several guys fucking one gal at the same time.. Been there, done that, it was awesome.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-12-06 00:11:17 |
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My wife and I did lots of threesomes and the most exciting was the sandwich where the other guy was in her pussy and I in her ass, all of us lying on our sides. Great feeling that is. |
| 2009-12-05 23:56:23 |
Meeting Master - III - The Trip, Day 1 |
Although I gave the story a positive rating, I was really disappointed that she did not get fucked by the General and several dogs. It appeared the story was headed there only to abruptly stop.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-12-05 23:37:19 |
Quickie in the Copy Room |
Great story. Another positive for you. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-12-05 23:30:39 |
A Three-way with my Husband and... the Dog? |
Great beasty story. I gave it a positive rating, although I would like to point out to you that trimming a dog's nails does not make them not hurt - one either has to wear a rather thick shirt or have socks on the dog. Also, the knot actually goes in rather small and rapidly becomes larger once inside the vagina, human or dog. It takes from 15 to 30 minutes for the dog's knot to go down enough to extracait himself from the pussy whithout hurthing either himself or the woman or both. Unless that is he is of a small breed with a small knot or the woman's pussy is exceptionally large. Good things to know if you want to write a realistic story. |
| 2009-12-02 23:13:37 |
My Neighbor's Incest part II |
It is a good story, one just has to overlook the fact that the dog action is not the way a dog does it. It would have been better had the author educated himself in this to make the story better for those of us who actually know. I gave it a positive rating though. Thanks for all your effort in writing and posting.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-11-27 22:08:51 |
Buster, Bec's & Me |
Love the start of the story so far. Now we just need for Buster to fuck Bec, several times of course, with the boy participating too. A threesome with the Bec sitting on the boy with his dick up her ass while Buster fucks her pussy. All three would have a great fucking time. |
| 2009-11-27 21:42:18 |
Daddy's Petite Treat |
Great short story. This one definitely deserves a sequel with many more bouts of hot steamy sex. Thanks for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-11-17 22:01:31 |
He Touches Me |
Awesome, so much depth in so short a time. It makes one truly envious and desiring to be that one.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-19 23:17:55 |
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Great writing. I kinda figured it was going to be the daughter. You have a very tantalizing way of writing. |
| 2009-10-17 00:22:09 |
Lucky dog Ch1: Boyfriend |
Ooops, I see there are at least 3 more parts. Thank you so much, you are really a great writer.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-17 00:20:35 |
Lucky dog Ch1: Boyfriend |
Hopefully there is more to come. Otherwise my positive rating was wasted. |
| 2009-10-16 23:59:03 |
New Daughter, Chapter 1 |
The awesome reviews before me reflect how I feel about this great story. Your writing ability is superb, perfect grammer, entising story line, great character development, and most importantly you bring the reader into the story wanting more at the end of the chapter. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-15 20:35:13 |
Dog Sex |
You need to indicte in the intro that it is a story about fags - otherwise you would not have such low ratings as straights would have never opened it in the first place. |
| 2009-10-12 06:11:49 |
End of the world - Chapter 6 |
I love this story and will read all that he has posted and all that he posts in the future. I have read 3 so far and they are all awesome. Great writer, he brings the reader into the story. Wonderful. You are awesome. Keep writing my friend. |
| 2009-10-12 06:08:13 |
End of the world - Chapter 6 |
Awesome story. Very well written. You bring the readers right into the story. This who story brings legitimacy to incest as it does in the Bible. Indeed the US Constitution is very clear about the church/state relationship, it strictly forbids it. And it is clear certain types of marriage being restricted by some states is strictly illegal. Once challenges work their way thru the court system to the Supreme Court they will be struck down. |
| 2009-10-12 06:02:22 |
End of the world - Chapter 7 |
Well done Awesome story. You bring your readers right into the story. |
| 2009-10-12 06:00:53 |
End of the world - Chapter 8 |
Well done, awesome story. |
| 2009-10-12 05:59:33 |
End of the World - Chapter 1 |
Bump |
| 2009-10-12 02:13:08 |
End of the World - Chapter 2 |
This is a truly awesome series. I will have a problem tonight as I will not know when I should stop reading and go to bed. Thank you so much for writing this tremendus series.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-12 00:51:43 |
End of the World - Chapter 1 |
I love this story. The jerks that provide negative comments should realize they are reading porn, and incest at that. Apparently they were born idiots. Love the start of this awesome series. Thanks for writing and sharing your great talent. |
| 2009-10-09 22:24:48 |
Punishing Rachel, Part One |
I am only half way thru but have to leave for a while. This story is really awesome. I gave you a positive rating for just what I have read so far. Your ability to bring the reader into the story is tremendous. Thank you for writing and sharing with us.
Your Fan,
Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-09 14:45:32 |
Julie, Part 5 |
The validation usually takes from 1 to 4 days. I have no control over that. I suppose it depends on how many stories are being loaded bu the authors. I will try to get parts 8 and 9 uploaded for validating today also. Your positive votes and comments are appreciated. |
| 2009-10-08 21:29:21 |
Julie, Part 5 |
Although I would recommend that you read Part 6 before reading Part 7, it is Part 7 where the bestiality actually occurs for the first time. |
| 2009-10-08 21:27:26 |
Julie, Part 5 |
Parts 6 and 7 have been submitted for validation. As soon as the webmaster has validated them, they will be posted for reading. |
| 2009-10-08 04:04:55 |
A Three-way with my Husband and... the Dog? |
"Lady, I can see that this is pure fiction and you have zero experience in dog's sex." The guy who wrote this is full of shit. The knot is toward the base of a dog's dick and goats were used to find grass under the snow, sheep are too dumb - it is the sheep who have pussies for human fucking, the goat's is too small. Your story was overall very good. Keep writing, knowledgeable readers will enjoy it. You are welcome to PM me if you like.
Lunalupo
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| 2009-10-07 20:53:03 |
Becky's 1st day at work |
Great story. Lots of great fucking. Now we need the beginning. For example, her first ever fucking her uncle and a vivid description of the first gangbang. THEN we need (want) a followup to this one. |
| 2009-10-07 20:40:12 |
Becky's Gangbang Continues |
BTW - I gave you a positive rating on this ..... |
| 2009-10-07 20:39:33 |
Becky's Gangbang Continues |
I would love to read the first part of the story. Could you please post a link to it?
thanks,
Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-07 14:00:59 |
Young Becky |
Bump to read your stories later - so far they are great. Keep em cummmming please. |
| 2009-10-04 04:10:33 |
Unbroken |
This is an awesomely great story, well written - brought the reader right into the action, loved it. And LARRY is definitely a creep.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-04 00:11:19 |
Roxy Baby |
I loved the story and gave it a positive. However, when you said "Although Ill do most things I didnt fancy sticking my cock in the same place that the dog had just been" I wondered why. That would have been awesome. The arse was good also. Now need a story about her biker life - IN DETAIL PLEASE. Lunalupo |
| 2009-10-03 23:22:33 |
Dog day afternoon |
Great story line. I gave you a positive. I too would like to see more description of the female's enjoyment of the sex. See "Uncle's Little Blessing" by The SlutMan at storiesonline.net for a great example of descriptive sex. |
| 2009-09-29 23:25:00 |
Getting Addison Graduated |
Loved the story, you have the talent to become a great writer. But, you need to read your own stories to check for grammar and spelling. For example, "principle" refers to money while "principal" is a person. Microsoft grammar and spell checkers are not always correct. Keep writing and posting. |
| 2009-09-26 20:57:26 |
Jule Loved by Everyone |
Parts 2 and 3 have been posted. Working on part 4. There is a lot of vivid sex in each part as well as the story to tell. |
| 2009-09-22 21:06:46 |
Julie Loved by Everyone, Parft II |
Part 3 will be posted soon. |
| 2009-09-22 21:01:15 |
Jule Loved by Everyone |
Sorry this is too long for you. It is actually an e-novel with a total of 7 parts. Parts one and two already posted. Will post part three soon. |
| 2009-09-21 17:37:55 |
Allan's Story |
I found it to be an enjoyable read. Although it would have been interesting to have had Tommy fuck Alanna after Red had had his turn. Lots of twists and turns this story could have gone. How about doing it again with an alternate ending? Thank you for posting it. You are on my list to read now. Lunalupo |
| 2009-09-13 23:59:11 |
Life with Lani - Pt. 1 |
Great start. There are many ways this story could go. After all, it IS just a fantasy and as adults we should know the difference between fantasy and reality. I encourage you to write more, sex with the girl and her mother. You are a very talented writer. Thanks for sharing your talent.
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| 2009-09-09 01:58:47 |
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Your talent is astounding, I do not believe there is a better author on this whole web site. Please keep up with this awesome story and thank you so much for sharing your talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-09-09 01:03:59 |
Is it so wrong |
Great start - You could make this into a series - I enjoy the way you write and thank you for sharing your talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-09-02 22:47:40 |
Quickie in the Copy Room |
Again, a well written and descriptive story. Thanks for writing and posting it.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-09-02 22:38:30 |
A Three-way with my Husband and... the Dog? |
Awesome story, well written and very descriptive. Thank you for sharing your erotic talent with us.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-08-05 17:40:25 |
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Great story - keep up sharing your awesome erotic talent. |
| 2009-07-20 23:21:52 |
sex story |
In both of your posted stories you start out with the "together" couple doing each other first - I would like to see you start out with them doing others from the get go. Good graphics, liked the story.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-07-20 23:18:30 |
I Soooo Love Swingers Parties |
Good story as far as it went. I would like to see it viewing and experiencing other couples who were at the party. It just seemed that the two couples described were alone when in actuality there seemed to be many others.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-07-13 17:13:15 |
Finding bliss with my sister |
"If you guys like this and want more let me know" - I am sure there are a lot of gals out there who would like this story - erotic prose has appeal to both sexes. And yes, I did like the story and would love for you to continue. Just watch your story lines for reality.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-07-05 19:39:02 |
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I find this a terrific story - not concerned about the possible positions the players are in, just the hot action. Hopefully this and other stories by you will continue.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-07-01 22:18:29 |
Encounter at Denny's 3 |
That was a great story. Would love for it to be continued. |
| 2009-06-30 14:51:53 |
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I agree with daddy_bare: "To bring all the threads together Jessica will eventually have to become involved and then the son. One happy, milky family!"
Lunalupo |
| 2009-06-29 21:52:06 |
Angela and Bruiser |
Great story. I appreciate good writing from someone like you who has an awesome sense of the erotic. Would love to see this story continued.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-06-28 22:19:25 |
Boys and girls together |
I found the story quite entertaining. It is great that you do character development before jumping into the erotic portion. I appreciate your style and am looking forward to reading the next chapters. Thank you for sharing your erotic talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-06-28 17:11:38 |
Michelle's encounter |
It very well may be a good story but I do not read stories where the author does not know how to make paragraphs. I did not rate as I did not read it. |
| 2009-06-28 15:40:41 |
My Neighor's Incest IV |
These chapters just keep getting better. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-06-28 15:17:28 |
My Neighbor's Incest part III |
The story just gets more amazing and better with each chapter. Keep em cuming - you have great talent.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-06-27 23:05:56 |
My Neighor's Incest |
Great story. Really enjoyed this erotic adventure into beastiality. Please do post the next part.
Lunalupo |
| 2009-06-27 00:03:09 |
Allan's Story |
Great story - just wish there was more to it. |
| 2009-06-26 20:18:18 |
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Yet another great chapter. I fully realize that the happenings in your very erotic tale are purely fiction and should never happen in real life. However, just the thoughts brought to the reader make for erotic feelings. Hopefully you will continue to share your awesome talent. |