Comments from Ghost Writer
|2009-03-06 13:35:00||Mom agrees to help pt.2||yungbeast18, no, I am not a professor. I am, however, someone who enjoys reading a story. I can't enjoy a story I can't read or follow. Its like you trying to enjoy a story you're trying to read but written in Mesopotamian or something. If you can't understand the squiggly lines and stuff that you're looking at, you can't very well enjoy the story.
Searching massive blocks of text for "cock," "pussy," "fuck," "oh yeah," and other similar words and phrases not more than five letters long isn't my idea of an enjoyable experience. Unlike some, I'm not one that gets my rocks off seeing "dirty words" among a mile and a half of indecipherable text.
If you don't like the comments, just read the story and don't scroll down this far, shit.
|2009-05-29 04:23:08||Injured Cousin||A very well written and entertaining story. Far from the usual rush of "Cock, pussy, fuck, fuck, cum" that pervades many of these stories.|
|2009-05-29 05:41:15||New Daughter, Chapter 8||After reading all eight parts, I once more have to say its a very well written and entertaining, as well as engaging, story. Your style of writing is more like what I like to read, rather than the "ass, cunt, pussy, cock, fuck, fuck, cum, jizz" crowd that don't care how badly a story is grammatically, or spelling wise as long as they can make out those words. For me, stories like this, with an actual story, with decent grammar and spelling (meaning most of it is correct with the occasional mistake, instead of the proper spelling or grammar being the occasional happenstance) are far more appealing and arousing than those that the only words you can make out are "ass, fuck, fuck, cunt, pussy, dick, cock, cum, etc"|
|2009-05-29 15:55:19||Injured Cousin||A very well written and entertaining story. Far from the usual rush of "Cock, pussy, fuck, fuck, cum" that pervades many of these stories.|
|2009-05-29 16:50:15||Young Whore||I really liked the story. It had proper spelling, punctuation, grammar and usage, for starters. I like to be able to understand what I'm reading, and not see lines of gibberish with the occasional, "ass, fuck, cock, pussy, cunt, cum, etc" thrown in. Secondly, the story had an actual plot, and I liked the use of flashbacks. You learned a lot about the character that way. Very well written and very enjoyable|