||Wonderful work on this gem of a story. Brilliant as ever.
||Ticonderoga – Episode 3: Awakenings
||Excellent, the fun, chaos and hijinks continues apace.
||Mary's Unexpected Journey
||Excellent as ever, keep up the wonderful work.
||Ticonderoga – Episode 2: Derelict
||Interesting story, next time would you mind giving me a heads up when a new chapter comes out?
||Ticonderoga – Episode 1: Adrift
||Brootforce - excellent story. I had read it in the forum story area and had forgotten you had posted it here in the main site.
An excellent story and well done, I am looking to any further adventure that crazy crew of Ticonderoga undertake if you choose to have them fly among the stars for a second tale
||The Hunters become the hunted part 3
||Wolf Knight you have taken the tired genre of vampires into a whole new realm of writing. Good hunting.
||The Hunters become the hunted part 2
||The saga keeps getting better and better.
||The Hunters become the hunted
||Well done Wolf Master, well done indeed.
||My Best studies ever
||To the bastard seeking underage girls, leave this site and go and rot in hell. May the police find you soon.
||well done. excellent story.
||Winters Dawning: Charity's Holiday to Remember
||To the one seeking underaged girls, may the police find you and swing you from the end of a rope tied around your most private of parts as they drag you down the street to the police station.
Creatures such as you should be destroyed.
||THE MOON STONE, part 3 (THREE)
||You asked for commentary: Overall the story is good and continues with the previous two parts. Personally some of the slang felt out of place with the story context as a whole and some descriptions could be more flushed out.
Other than this its a wonderful tale being told for all of us to read. I wish a direct link to the other two parts could have been put in, but I do understand the limits of the site.
A wonderful job Hardrive.
||Great story - loved it from one end to the other.
||The Yellow Sign.
||excellent story - blends so much into one effort; wonderfully done.
||THE MOON STONE, Part 2
||Great story there; I am looking forward to the adventures continuing as it just gets more and more intriguing with each reading.
||Very good story, not my usual forte or genre for reading on the sight; yet it is still goog for a first one in the site itself. Keep up the work and looking forward to future ones as well.
||SEX FORMULA 69
||Excellent story; I liked it.
||Great story. Excellent work.
||Just to let you know, on the forums 'shameless plugs' thread I have put up a link to your story; one such as the Selkie, so well done and told has to be encouraged in the reading.
Again well done.
||Blast and be bothered; this is the most wonderous and amorious tale of a legend made into a story I have read yet on the sight. Thanks for crafting the tale of the Selkie, its done with skill and grace, and true to the legend of old, in a modern scene.
THIS shows real talent and knowledge.
||The Party - Part 1
||Not bad, it can use some refining though; I see potential within it.
||Normally I do not care for horror genre much; yet this one is well crafted and done, excellent story in all. My hats off to you.
||A BUSINESS PROPOSITION
||I have to say this story soars like few others I have read; my hats off to you in writing of it. Well done indeed!
||Virgin Farm part 1
||Not bad for a beginning and a open tease for the future. Keep up the work. Suggestion - try to develop a bit more on the parts of the five senses, especially when he sees her topless for the first time. You have an excellent foundation that can be developed well.
||A Game of Inches - Part One.
||Excellent story, this is one of the better ones on the sight I have read so far. Keep up the good work and will be checking out part 2 soon.
||My Best Studies Ever Part 3
||I am glad everyone is liking part 3 of the series; especially with the fate of the bike riders. There will be a part four, as of this post it is in the drafting stage. Please keep watch for when it shows.
Thanks to everyone for reading and enjoying Ben's misadventures.
Part four will have a happy, interesting twist to it if I can work it out just right.
||Kind of a brute force story, not my cup of tea - yet it gets to the point right out and the lady dominates. Ignore the critics, it was a good effort.
||Volcanic as ever Angel Eyes; volcanic as ever. Hats off to you.
||My Best Studies Ever part 2
||Okay just so those longing for a part 3 will know, as of this post I have a rough draft alreay in the works. So it will be coming soon.
Glad you have all enjoyed it so much.
||My Best Studies Ever part 2
||To anonymous: are any of these stories characters true? no, they are made up. At least for my own characters; if any are true then I will make specific mention of that fact.
||Incredible story Angel Eyes; another gem in your crown. Keep up the work...for everyone else; the sequel availible in the forum is VOLCANIC in excitement.
||Excellent work as always, brilliant from the start to the finish. Well done Angel Eyes.
||My Best studies ever
||Thanks for the comments, so that everyone knows the second part of the story, with Tabatha and a few others is being worked on right now. It will be out when the CAW 10 competition is done.
||Angel Eyes once again you have outdone yourself; I have read this on the forum as it developed, and we see a master of story at work.
Hats off and look forward to the future stories.
||Virus Surge Part 2
||Well done; this is a great piece of work. Well thought out and crafted.
||Virus Surge Intro
||For the beginning of the series, it is done well with potential for more development. Not bad at all. I look forward to reading the rest.
||A poem; Journey of the message
||Excellent work - one of the better I have seen thus far.
||Once again you have done a excellent job.
|| Learning The Ropes
||I have not seen this video game others mention of so I will judge it as it stands; good work overall.
||Summer Suprise 2
||Potential, it has potential in a third part. Work on flushing out more details and some parts of the spelling.
||Camping Luvie style
||If this is a first story then a good beginning; suggestion is to try and flush out more details. Overall though well done.
||Excellent, very well done. hats off.
||Angel Eyes, my lady friend (my best friend, she is a lesbian as well), loves this story; for me two thumbs up.