||Good Time in A Shower
||It was too easy. Lol. 90% of the allure of gay sex stories is "omg iz he gay too? it's so risque to have homosexual relations with a guy! we must keep it a secret!!" Having all the school's guys be bi (highly improbably in this day and age) and also having Andrew just casually crash the main character's public-shower-masturbation party made the story slightly absurd.
However, for a little while there you did have this cool alternate-reality homoerotic-type situation going on, like your main character was this really hot casanova type who all the guys lusted after. Maybe you should explore that.
And needless to say, the actual sex was a tad bit rushed. Coulda stopped after Andrew gave the mc head.
||The Way They Always Did
||Hi guys, thank-you so much for the positive feedback. It is greatly appreciated. I just felt I should respond to a couple of you this time, however.
First, yeah I realize 8th graders aren't that naïve. Haha, he didn't mean to write him that way, it sort of just happened. I needed that innocence for the effect I guess, even though it's a little unrealistic.
Also, I did choose to write a girl into this. I like to write about girls, too, so I'm sorry if you can't handle some heterosexual action here and there. Obviously there are some people here that liked it, so that's really all that matters.
One last thing--what does "shitly rough" mean? :-P
||my love, chris
||Unrealistic: the ultimate downfall of all sex stories. Think about it, would a guy really just come out and be all "I've been in love with you for the longest time ooooh"? Right.
||Love and life (Chapter 1)
||I like where this is going, but I'm not a fan of abridged storylines. There's really no need to split it up if you've already written it. Saves me the trouble of taking my hand off my cock to click around for part 2.
||3 Gay Guys 1 Sleepover Part 1
||way to semi-steal the title of my story and defile it with this garbage.
||My Brother's Smile
||Reading these comments, you see how ugly it is when people try to push their beliefs on others.
But anyway, yeah this story was hot. I love reading and writing about brothers that love each other this way. That blatant, unconditional love...why shouldn't it manifest itself in a sexual way?
Fuck the haters. This was a good story.
||Zack and John
||I had a babysitter when I was 13 too. He was actually only like 15, and it was one of my neighborhood friends' older brothers. I went so far out of my way to seduce him every time he came over, from wearing briefs around the house to leaving the door open when I took a bath. I even asked him if he would come wash me, but he just sorta came in, gave me some soap and left. I jacked off a lot to that guy, but I guess he was just too straight or like had self-control lol.
||Two Friends and I
||and then i was totes leik, omg, cuz he leik wuz naked and i wuz all dude u has i nice cock ftw
I could have text-messaged a better-written story.
||THE BUTT PLUG
||Lol, you have sufficiently abused the triple-exclamation point. And the "!?!"
||THE GUILT OF LIKING IT.
||Oh, milker, you always come back with something crazy every time.
Just one question: do you just throw your little motto out in everyday conversation? And do you end every other sentence with "PEACE...MILKER"? It's just sort of amusing to think about ;)
||Oh my God! I hope you wouldn't really do that! I hope you wouldn't even THINK that! There is a line between being open-minded and being sick-minded. Dude, you crossed that line!
You basically took all the things that turn me off and threw it into a story: fat narrators, people named guy, 4-inch dicks, 6 yo girls, old people (not to mention murder, chewing flesh, fucking bodily organs, and cooking body parts!)
Bad. If you are serious here, I just hope I never meet you. I'd be fucking scared, and would probably call the cops before you could stick parts of my body in your pockets...icky.
||My gay life (part 1)
||lol, isn't that the awesome thing about gay relationships? you can be all "i love you" one minute then go play playstation ;)
||LOL, every man has a little submissive side they need to explore. God knows I do ;)
||A New Game
||Ah, 6? To young for me, sorry. Not even because it's not hot (not that I think it is) is just sort of impractical? I wonder why this one of the most read gay stories on the site.
||Sex With my cousin
||"oooooooooooo... abbbbaaaaaaaa .. inkaaaaaaaaa gatttiga pisikuuuu"
what the FUCK?
||i don't care if you're 10, the power rangers and naruto just make it funnier!
||Virgins are losers
||"wow you're just like squirtle!"
best line ever.
and hey there haters, this is obviously a joke. laugh. ha ha.
||lol if a teenage boy controlled the world, this is basically how things would go. this is hilarious!
||Jared's Slutty Sister
||"SWALLOW MY CHILDREN!!"
rofl. nuff said.
||ooooh my god!! you are totes the best writer on xnxx. ive decided. perfect balance of romance, word choice, risqué, and sexual passion. although, like someone commented in another one of your stories, you do like to randomly cut to 69, dont you? i dont care. so hot.
||okay im not actually finished reading yet but that sailboat metaphor was THE best "oh im only 15 and i dont really know if im gay yet but im about to have a gay sex experience about two paragraphs" explanation i have EVER seen in any story on the entire site. ok, back to reading
||BREAKING THE HABIT
||i'm not a 50 yr old man. im a boy who wants other boys. thats not pedophile-y, just gay ;)
||haha omg i dont know whether to start jacking off or start crying! those are the most adorable 12-year-olds ever. wish i was that close to someone at that age. amazing story!
||Little Jimmy Gets
||dude, jimmy getz > "jimmy" gatz > james gatz > jay gatsby from The Great Gatsby?
or am I just an american lit nerd?