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| 2012-12-19 22:21:19 |
THE LIGHTEST TOUCH |
Wow!!! Lovely Lesley and Sweet Claire - what a pair and what an incredibly hot story. Thanks. |
| 2012-10-22 15:56:14 |
LAURA: A Little Girls Story |
As usual; great story Jack. |
| 2012-09-02 16:04:50 |
SWEET SISTER SUSIE (Edited & RePosted) |
Just as good or maybe better than the original. |
| 2012-06-20 20:55:55 |
BIG SIS; Second Mom, First Crush, Best Pussy |
Now, this is more like you. Love it. |
| 2012-03-28 15:57:34 |
Submission At Its Best |
Not exactly my cup of whatever, but I thought it was very well written. I think you have a future here. |
| 2012-02-29 23:07:45 |
Best Little Whorehouse on XNXX: Virgins In The Whorehouse! |
First, I was happy to have won the poker game, then saddened by not being the one to deflower Jamie. But to wind up with Miss Ellie - wow! Just wow!
At least as good as the first, but probably better. Who cares about the competition? |
| 2012-02-27 22:42:21 |
Tales of a Secret Sex Writer, Chapter 9 |
Another great story from you. By the way; it is a lot easier reading it here than on the forum.
Sure glad to have you back writing. |
| 2012-02-08 19:37:26 |
Little Sisters; The Best Pretty Please Pussies |
Another very good, very hot story from you. Never fails. Thanks. |
| 2012-01-25 23:00:01 |
A Kind Stranger (The Whole Story) |
I am so very pleased that you finally finished this wonderful love story. I love all of your stories, but this one generates many more tears than my tissue box can handle. Thank you so very much for this story. |
| 2012-01-15 22:39:04 |
MY COLONOSCOPY (Humor) |
In the immortal words of the texters "LMFAO". I had my latest colonoscopy last friday, but I was surrounded by very nice looking young ladies. When told to roll onto my left side, I told one of them "Don't laugh at my butt". She told me that all butts look the same and the Dr. said "No they don't". Voice of experience. Glad it's only once every five years. |
| 2011-11-20 13:27:22 |
Young Indy Jones & the Gift of Wet Pussies |
As always, Jack, a great story well told. I swear some of those names are familiar.
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| 2011-09-13 15:31:39 |
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It's good to see this story back. Hope it can stay. |
| 2011-08-26 17:30:05 |
Naughty & Nice Little Daughter-in-Law |
I just knew I could count on you. Thanks for a really good read. |
| 2011-08-23 12:43:52 |
The Pin |
As always; a great story. Some of the finest HUMANS I have ever known were Seals. I think that because I've known them, my life has been enriched. |
| 2011-07-08 13:00:14 |
SCENE ON A GOLF COURSE |
Finally getting around to reading your latest 3. So far I'm loving your writing. Very hot scene in the woods - now on to the office. |
| 2011-06-27 15:49:23 |
Penny, May I Rescue you from Hell? |
Quite a departure from your usual, but good and entertaining. As always, a positive thumbs-up from me. |
| 2011-06-20 16:41:49 |
Sugar and Spice |
Love what you did with it. Very good effort. |
| 2011-06-16 17:10:57 |
Loving Lisas Pretty Pink Pussy Petals |
Well, you did it again. Another really good sister-loving story. The only bad part was putting down the horse. |
| 2011-06-12 21:44:43 |
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As lovely and arousing as always. You have been missed, lovely Lesley. |
| 2011-05-26 23:38:00 |
(More) Sins of my Country Girl Sis & Me |
My new, very favorite phrase, "the delicate butterfly wings of her inner pussylips". What a lovely picture that paints.
The only real problem I have is that Maple syrup is much more delicate tasting than molassis.
Great story, Jack. Always love to find a new story from you. |
| 2011-05-03 21:37:41 |
The Fat Slob Next Door |
You have been missed. Welcome back and I hope you stick around for a long time. |
| 2011-04-28 12:41:19 |
Down on the Farm |
As always, very moving and loving. Thanks so much for your efforts.
donb9033 |
| 2011-04-11 00:17:30 |
Sins of my Country Girl Sis & Me |
Up to your usual standards. Great story, wonderful sex. Thanks Jack, and welcome back. |
| 2011-03-09 00:22:31 |
Peace |
Not as distant as I would wish. Left my comments on the other version of this. |
| 2011-03-09 00:19:09 |
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So sad - so peaceful. Dread the ending. |
| 2011-03-07 14:47:34 |
Last Chance....Chapter 3 |
You've turned me into an emotional wreck from reading this story. I am so very glad that I am not one of those people. I know it sounds selfish, but that's me. Great writing. |
| 2011-03-04 12:56:02 |
Last Chance....Chapter 2 |
Wow! Lots of emotions right now. You are very talented. |
| 2011-03-02 18:44:05 |
Last Chance....Chapter 1 |
A thoroughly wonderful and moving story. Steve, I just knew you could do it. |
| 2011-02-14 00:47:50 |
It Started |
My eyes are blurry because of this unexpected moisture. |
| 2011-01-14 21:04:03 |
A Kind Stranger 3 |
I really love this story and it never fails to bring tears to my eyes. However; I must disagree with you on one minor little thing: I loved (and still love) 'The Awakening of Katie'. A very romantic and appealing story. You are a very gifted writer of stories that appeal to our emotions. Thank you. |
| 2011-01-05 11:42:35 |
Mobys Big Dick & the Little Girl Who Loves It |
Good story, Jack. I almost missed it and am very glad I noticed it. |
| 2010-12-21 15:20:45 |
SCENE AT A TENNIS LESSON |
As always, a very hot, very well written story. You have been missed. Welcome back Jayney. |
| 2010-09-26 22:39:59 |
Let's Make A Deal |
Now, by god, this is a hot story. Reading a story without developing the affection/knowledge of the characters has become sort of a turn-off for me, but this story was very, very good and hot as hell. Thanks. donb9033 |
| 2010-09-18 21:26:28 |
Workers Playtime. |
Wish I had a boss like that, but never happened. Good story. |
| 2010-08-30 01:10:40 |
Camping With My Girls Ch 18 |
As always, great episode. You are so very good. Please continue as long as you like - I'll continue to read. |
| 2010-08-25 20:18:52 |
Miss Jayneys Mile High Boy Toy |
JT, even your fans can't spell very well. I do love Jayne and I love this story. Just like all of your stories, it's just hot as hell. donb9033 |
| 2010-08-04 14:37:03 |
King Dong |
Awesome story. I've come to expect excellence in your stories and have yet to be disappointed. Hot, sexy, and funny. Thanks. donb9033 |
| 2010-08-04 00:08:41 |
Bunny and the Slopes |
Just like I always expect from you - hot as hell. donb9033 |
| 2010-08-03 23:17:21 |
Suzanne 1 |
I sincerely hope this story is to be continued. Good start and need some more. donb9033 |
| 2010-07-18 23:13:36 |
Vacation For Two - Sunday |
I hate to tell you this, but I am really starting to enjoy this story. I had an older brother and we were the same way with each other (except for the cuddling). You have passed the test: I just can't wait for the next chapter (day). Thanks, DC, for the great entertainment. donb9033 |
| 2010-07-17 21:44:26 |
Sam & Alicia 8 |
Very worthy continuation of a great story. Thank you for the great entertainment. donb9033 |
| 2010-07-17 21:13:28 |
Second Honeymoon |
You two have done it again. What a wonderfully, lovely, hilarious story. Sort of deja vu all over again. I just loved it and laughed almost all the way through. After reading your story about the rabbit, I expected something wonderful from you and you did not disappoint. Thank you, donb9033 |
| 2010-07-03 16:51:45 |
Mr. Wilson's Lessons |
Where in the hell have you been and why haven't I found you until now? Following the recommendation from ejls that I should read this lovely story is one of the best things I've ever done. Wonderful, sexy, lovely, sexy, romantic, sexy, funny, sexy, did I mention sexy? Wow! Just wow! donb9033 |
| 2010-06-13 13:53:29 |
First Saturdays - edited and cleaned up |
What an incredible story of life. It really moved me. This is the first of your stories I've read, but it will not be the last. All the way through the story I was remembering my youth and wishing I had a baby-sitter like that. Thank you for the wonderful time. |
| 2010-06-13 12:46:42 |
Daddy Loves His Daughter 1 |
I've just finished reading all of your stories, from the earliest to this one and am very pleased with the great improvement in the quality of writing. Of course the subject is hot as hell and a source of dreams, but your earlier stories had problems; not so much with grammar as with construction and formatting. They were pretty difficult to read. I did give all of them a positive rating because I think you have real potential. This story has proven that. Very well written story although the 'ignorance' of the 13 year old girl was a little hard to believe. Great story, though and looking forward to the continuation. Thanks for the entertainment. |
| 2010-06-11 21:45:25 |
A Cabin in the Woods |
Great story. I loved the hunting and interaction with the anti-assholes. You have never disappointed me with your writing. |
| 2010-06-11 20:39:17 |
A Kind Stranger part 1 & 2 |
What a thoroughly wonderful continuation to a lovely story. When I read the first part, long ago, I cried - now you've done it again. Thank you so very much for a very moving story. |
| 2010-05-30 22:07:06 |
Now it's my turn |
Thank you for your lovely comments. They are so much appreciated. |
| 2010-05-28 15:46:25 |
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I was going to say that this was 'simply enchanting' but, while enchanting, there is nothing simple about it. What a well thought-out and constructed story. I do hope you continue.
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| 2010-05-25 21:37:03 |
HIGH SCHOOL REUNION TAKE ONE: THE FORMER STUDENT |
Very nice and hot beginning to what seems to be a really hot story. Looking forward to the rest. |
| 2010-05-23 22:22:43 |
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Absolutely, thoroughly, magnificantly wonderful. What a wonderful imagination. Please continue. donb9033 |
| 2010-05-14 21:38:04 |
Good Little 3rd Grade Girl |
Just as good here as it was on the Forum and I don't have to look for both parts. Congrats on your anniversary. Keep going for several more years - at least until I'm finished reading.
donb9033 |
| 2010-05-13 13:34:24 |
SISTER SURPRISE |
Oh, my dear lovely Lesley, what a wonderfully tender, loving, erotic story. I told you that this story was destined to be one of my favorites and it is. Thank you so much for the great read. donb9033 |
| 2010-05-11 14:34:47 |
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I just finished reading, for the first time, this entire series. I absolutely loved it. What a (what do I call it?) 'fuck fest'. A thoroughly wonderful read. donb9033 |
| 2010-05-09 22:10:12 |
Loving My Sister |
I thought I had read all of your stories when you posted them on the forum, but I never saw this one. It is a beautiful story, very well told and the typos are minimal. You never fail to please me. Thank you. donb9033 |
| 2010-05-05 22:24:24 |
A Very Difficult Daughter - Chap 2 - "It's your body Sally" |
Thoroughly enchanting, lovely story, but I had hope you would finish the story. Please hurry, for me. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-30 15:31:53 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 14 |
Just in case my comments on the forum don't convey my message, keep writing - I love your stories. |
| 2010-04-29 21:02:57 |
A Brother's Revenge |
You were right - I didn't like it nearly as much as your other stories. It reads more like fbailey #614 from down under. Very hot, lots and lots of hot sex, but I don't really know why. I know why you did it, but I really hope you don't do it anymore. I would rather read A Very Difficult Daughter #2. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-29 18:39:40 |
Solitude Interrupted |
I have to tell you, Ole, if the yadda, yadda planet is populated with waifs like that, I am going to the store to buy a ticket.
I know you has a vivid imagination, but, to coin a phrase never used before "HOLY SHIT". What a story.
Personally, I give up, you win, your imagination is so twisted that I will never catch up. Great job. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-29 14:55:52 |
A Different Kind of Love |
What a wonderfully romantic love story. I found out when you wrote 'For the Love of Holly' that you were a gifted love story writer, but you have really exceeded my expectations.
I have long thought that you are a kind, gracious, and caring person, but now I know. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-29 13:25:20 |
Love at Second Sight |
Beautiful love and life story. I guess there is a reason that you are one of my very favorite authors. |
| 2010-04-28 20:21:52 |
Angelinas Seduction and Brads Naked Surrender |
What a great story. Such a change from normal, but really excellent. I would have given you a positive rating, but I was notified that I had voted too many times today.
Loved this story.
What that Chief needed was a shot of old Dr. Donb's white-root injection. Hope she enjoyed it. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-27 18:18:14 |
Little Girl Lost |
So glad you finally started posting your stories on this site instead of only on the Forum.
You appear to be a gifted story-teller and I am enjoying these stories immensely. Please keep writing. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-27 15:10:23 |
Promises broken |
Just finished reading this wonderful story for the third time and am really angry you didn't tell me earlier that I should read it. I could have been enjoying it all along. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-27 01:26:05 |
The Rabbit Died - Chapter 3 |
I warned you that I would be reading these chapters more than once - well, I just completed my second read and I can report that I enjoyed this story as much this time as I did the first.
Thank you both so very much for the wonderfully romantic story that does indeed give us 'mature' folk hope.
I wish you both years of love and lust in the hope that you will provide us, your very loyal readers, years of this lovely entertainment.
Thank you so very much. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-24 23:49:48 |
Summertime at Grandpa Dicks- Chap 4 |
A tremendously exciting series and I can hardly wait for the next episode. I honestly do not understand the less than magnificent ratings of your stories. I guess some people don't understand that this is a port site and that if they chance to read a story, the chances are excellent that it will be porn. Your porn is top-shelf. Thanks for the pleasant dreams. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-18 10:37:00 |
Camping With My Girls Ch 17 |
After reading this story and it's predesessor again, the only reason I can determine for the low rating is that some are getting sort of tired of the same story. I most certainly do not, repeat - NOT, include myself in that category. What a super hot story. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-14 23:07:42 |
A Very Difficult Daughter |
Hey Mark, just finished reading this thoroughly wonderful (lovely) story for the 15th time. It's not that I don't have anything better to do, in fact I just got my firewood in for next winter, and it's not that I don't have any other stories to read, it is simply that when I find a story that moves me, intelectually and emotionally, I find myself returning to it over and over. 'Kate' by ejls, 'Allison and the Primdales' by Daddycums are stories that fit that bill as is this one.
I am hoping and waiting for a sequel. I was afraid of your possible inclusion of Sally into the equation, but the way you treated the 'To Save My Daddy's Live' series, I know you can to anything tastefully.
As you know, I love your writing. Peace to you. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-13 17:09:49 |
The Homecoming Ch 4-6 |
What an incredibly sexy sister. Wow! I just wish I had a sister like that. Your writing is really among the very best on this site and I always watch the new stories list to check for new stories from you. Very talented. Thanks for the lovely entertainment. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-12 23:25:06 |
Camping With My Girls Ch 14-15 |
It just keeps getting hotter and hotter. These chapters of this extremely hot story are all very well thought out and very, very well written. Keep it up. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-12 22:44:54 |
Camping With My Girls Ch 12-13 |
I happened on to your stories sort of by chance, but am very glad I did. I hope you keep writing these very nice, very hot stories with the sex being not just about sex, but so very nice and tender. Holy crap and even 'WOW'! donb9033 |
| 2010-04-09 23:12:30 |
Turnabout With Sister |
During the past several months, I have come to love your stories on the Forum. I have given this story a positive rating even though the subject matter is not really to my liking, even though the sister really got what was coming to her.
I do sincerely hope you continue writing and entertaining us on this site. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-07 21:05:38 |
Ellen Teaches Young Tech Boy a Lesson |
The tag for my addie cleared and was replaced by 'READER'. I thought that had been corrected. Mine is the first comment post. Love the story. donb9033 |
| 2010-04-07 18:33:03 |
Snow Day: Stuck at Home with Little Sis |
It's about time you got this on the stories site. I keep having to look around, try to remember how the search works, then finally find it before I can enjoy it again. Wonderful story. |
| 2010-04-06 20:28:51 |
Just one girl..... |
Jaynee - as I told you when you posted this on the forum, the story is marvelous, but you really need to work on your format. Nice, neat, concise paragraphs with double spacing between them keeps the story from looking, as one of my friends puts it, "a wall of text". It really does make it easier to read and I know it would make me really anxious to read your next story. Whatever you do, don't stop writing as I think you have a nice talent. |
| 2010-04-06 10:30:26 |
Summertime at Grandpa Dicks- Ch 3 |
As always, very well written. The perfect mix of tenderness and down and dirty sex. |
| 2010-04-06 09:57:45 |
Ellen Teaches Young Tech Boy a Lesson |
I notice that you had finally posted this on the stories site and just had to stop by and vote and comment. Loved it on the forum and love it here. Thanks again for your kindness to ejls. |
| 2010-04-04 15:38:45 |
Camping With My Girls Ch 10-11 |
And just to think, I almost missed this episode. Great story, please continue. |
| 2010-04-01 15:50:03 |
Lisa II |
No matter what anyone says about your stories, they always have one thing in common: they are incredibly hot. Wow, just Wow!! |
| 2010-03-31 23:20:01 |
My Little Sis Is So Cute! |
Glad you are finally getting around to posting these great stories on the story site. I love them more every time I read them. Thank you, my friend, for the hours of wonderful entertainment you have provided me and all the other horny old guys out here. donb9033 |
| 2010-03-31 00:23:19 |
The Rabbit Died - Chapter 3 |
A thoroughly wonderful story that proves, once again, and in a lovely way, that there is life after 50. Loved the story and thank you so much for letting me know it was on the way. I will indeed be reading this story again - something I reserve for my favorites. Thank you. donb9033 |
| 2010-03-30 16:54:12 |
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I am extremely glad that my friend JackassTales recommended that I read this story. I had a smile on my face the whole time I was reading it - normally that only happens when I'm reading his stories. You have a major hit on your hands and I will keep an eye out for more stories like this from you. |
| 2010-03-29 10:47:11 |
The Rabbit Died - Chapter 2 |
I just finished reading once again part 1 and 2 in preparation for the release of part 3. I am very glad I did. I just knew that there was indeed life after 50. Very lovely, sensitive, sexy, and hot. Really looking forward to part 3. |
| 2010-03-29 01:38:24 |
The Rabbit Died - Chapter 1 |
I honestly had forgotten how incredibly well written and superheated this story was. In a phrase: shit, that's hot. Reminds me of some of ejls's stories about us older folks. Thanks to you for reminding me that love (and lust) can be so much fun. |
| 2010-03-27 17:10:09 |
The Vertical Smile - part 2 |
Thank you all for your comments. They mean more than you can know. |
| 2010-03-27 13:37:05 |
Backyard Princess, Chapter 5 |
Just finished reading the story again (on that other web site) and feel as enchanted as ever. If I am ever able to finish reading chapter 5 without tears in my eyes, I will know that I am truly finished as a human. You have, my friend, a lovely talent. |
| 2010-03-27 09:43:03 |
Backyard Princess, Chapter 5 |
DC, since I first read this story on the forum, I have been, in a word, enchanted. What a lively and lovely imagination. This makes the third time to read the story and I still love it. Thank you. |
| 2010-03-27 08:40:20 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 13 |
Busy little beaver. Ben has energy. |
| 2010-03-26 23:32:56 |
WHAT TURNS ME ON |
Now we see what the trolls can and will do to a lovely story. |
| 2010-03-26 09:15:25 |
WHAT TURNS ME ON |
Wonderfully, delightfully, erotically descriptive. Made my mouth water. So allowing you to post this was a birthday gift for you? I think it is a birthday gift to us all. So very hot. Thank you. Don |
| 2010-03-25 13:24:40 |
Her Vertical Smile |
I'm sorry about sentencing the parents to death, but I could find no other way for the twins to wind up alone. I did try to minimize the amount of discussion of it. I also needed something traumatic to get Vickie into bed with Vince. Sorry if I offended. |
| 2010-03-25 10:11:33 |
Rachel Babysits the Naughty Little Boys |
Just as good when read the 3rd time. donb9033 |
| 2010-03-24 23:33:45 |
The Vertical Smile - part 2 |
More coming - be patient. donb9033 |
| 2010-03-24 19:18:32 |
The Vertical Smile - part 2 |
I am truly humbled. I had no idea this poor writing would be so well received. My friends, sure - but others? Wow, just wow! donb9033 |
| 2010-03-23 22:31:38 |
Camping With My Girls Ch 8-9 |
The picture you painted of these two lovely young girls experimenting together for the first (like this) time will stay with me. Very vivid picture presented in a very nice manner. Thank you. |
| 2010-03-23 22:14:38 |
Her Vertical Smile |
Part 2 is in for validation now. I, personally think it is better and I am already thinking hard about the conclusion. I must tell you all again how much of a fulfilling event it is to me to write a poor little story and have it received so well. Thank you all. |
| 2010-03-23 21:14:25 |
Camping With My Girls Part 7 |
You just keep getting better and better. I really love these two series. Please keep it up (as you are keeping mine up). |
| 2010-03-23 11:42:43 |
Camping With My Girls Ch 5-6 |
This just keeps getting better and better. Even with the young one you write about it with great sensitivity. Thanks for the lovely read. |
| 2010-03-23 01:36:56 |
Camping with My Girls Ch 3-4 |
Holy shit! I've come this far for the second time and I still love this story. You are very good at writing stories specifically designed to turn me on. Thank you for so much glorious entertainment.. |
| 2010-03-23 00:29:36 |
Wendys Party |
Sweetie, it's a very, very hot story, but you should check out some other stories on this site to look at format. Short paragraphs with a double space between them really makes a story much easier to read.
I know this is your first story here and hope you don't give up. It appears that you have promise. Thanks for the entertainment. |
| 2010-03-22 15:04:35 |
The Opportunity |
Even though there was no warning about the water sports, I thought the story was very hot the first time I read it and even hotter this time. Great job. |
| 2010-03-21 19:47:06 |
Suzie |
What a very lucky little boy! Great story. |
| 2010-03-21 14:03:45 |
Nora - The Third and Final Chapter |
Posting this comment to check if things are working. Love the story the first time I read it and really loved it the 2nd time. |
| 2010-03-20 13:45:02 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 12 |
Now that I finally post a comment I can tell you how much I enjoy this series. Thanks for all your efforts to keep us entertained. |
| 2010-03-20 00:14:31 |
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Please finish the story. I have been so moved by this story and will never forget it, but I do so need completion. What a lovely story. |
| 2010-03-19 23:15:16 |
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I must tell you again; I have never been able to read past this chapter without breaking down. What a sensitive, loving, moving experience. You are truly gifted and I sincerely hope you finish the series. |
| 2010-03-11 10:44:11 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 11 |
Ditto Pat. |
| 2010-03-11 10:33:44 |
Nora - The Third and Final Chapter |
This has been one of the most moving and wonderfully written stories I've read on this site. Perfectly wonderful story from a perfectly wonderful woman. Thank you, dear lady, for all the hours of wonderful entertainment you have provided for us all. |
| 2009-12-09 12:38:52 |
SEDUCED AT THE GYM |
This story is obviously one that I will read more than once. Great story Lesley. |
| 2009-12-06 10:47:49 |
Kate |
I couldn't have said it better myself. ditto. donb9033 |
| 2009-12-06 01:08:57 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 8 |
Always love your stories and this chapter is as good as ever. Thanks for the continuing entertainment. donb9033 |
| 2009-11-30 15:26:06 |
A Very Difficult Daughter |
MT, the highest compliment I can pay to an author is when I find myself going back over and over to re-read his/her stories. You need to know that I have just finished reading this story for the sixth time and stilll love it. Thank you for the hours of lovely (I like your use of that word) entertainment. donb9033 |
| 2009-11-25 15:40:57 |
Noel |
Difficult to overcome the first two votes being negative even with all the positives. Hard to work the way back to a good number. I told you that you would love the story. donb9033 |
| 2009-11-23 16:12:18 |
Sam to Samantha |
Hot plot, sort of poor writing. Lots of grammatical and spelling errors. They detracted somewhat from the story, but, like I said, the story was hot. I hope you keep trying. |
| 2009-11-22 19:24:06 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 7 |
Already commented when you posted this on the Forum, but I still like it. Very good read. Plot and sex - what'll you think of next? |
| 2009-11-18 14:34:16 |
The Unauthorized Sex Story of Jack Schitt |
Hey, JT, it looks like some of your readers had their funny-bone surgically removed. I still like it though. donb9033 |
| 2009-11-17 20:39:32 |
The Unauthorized Sex Story of Jack Schitt |
I used to think that I didn't noe schitt, but now I'm not sure. Laughed harder even than when I read DCs story about the chair. Great story JT. Donb9033 |
| 2009-10-10 00:25:57 |
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How in the world can a woman write a story like this. I would only expect something like this from a very twisted man. With all of that said, I thought the story was very well written and executed, but disturbing as hell. I sort of foresaw the victum was to be his daughter, but did not expect how raw it would be. Especially in view of the writer. If you write a sequel, I will probably read it, but I personally do not encourage you to do so. Write something not quite so disturbing and I will be your eternal fan. Thanks for the mental exercise. Donb9033 |
| 2009-10-07 20:20:37 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 4 |
Nice little bit of action and adventure to top off the sex of Chapter 3. Good read. |
| 2009-10-02 18:17:48 |
Ben 10 and the Second Summer Chapter 3 |
One of your best. Just sitting here waiting for the next episode. donb9033 |
| 2009-09-26 13:46:32 |
Dreams |
Very hot dream, Nikki, and your writing skills are improving. Still need some attention on spelling, though. Loved the story. donb9033 |
| 2009-09-24 00:29:37 |
Lisa @ 5 with Bob & Mommy. |
You sure make some enemies with these stories, don't you? I am awed by you ability to make a story about something I abhor something so damn hot. donb9033 |
| 2009-07-05 02:16:27 |
While Mom and Dad Were Gone |
Very sweet story. Yo9033u show lots of promise and talent. The story is pretty well written and you structure is good. The only thing I think you need to work on is content - flesh out the story. Good try and I am looking forward to a continuation. donb |
| 2009-07-04 13:53:43 |
Subtle Seduction |
I hope you are not going to quit writing. I would love to see more stories by you in this vein. Great story, well written, and the spelling was good. The only complaint I have (very minor) is the paragraphs being this long makes it a little difficult to read on the computer. I told you it was minor. Please keep writing. donb9033 |
| 2009-07-02 14:35:18 |
Allison and the Primdales, Part 1 Chapter 30 |
Just finished reading the first 30 chapters and am totally enthralled. Great series, even the chapters that contain little or no sex keep my attention. I, also, can't wait for part 2. donb9033 |
| 2009-06-22 23:29:32 |
Shelter From the Cold |
It was posted on the Forum - that's where. |
| 2009-06-22 23:06:59 |
Shelter From the Cold |
Where have I read this before? |
| 2009-05-14 17:25:13 |
Who's Your Daddy? (A Daughter's Love) |
I think you can take any criticism you get. You seem to be pretty healthy and sure of yourself. It comes through in your writing. |
| 2009-05-14 10:56:22 |
Who's Your Daddy? (A Daughter's Love) |
Amazing with all the down-right nasty comments, this story is the number one rated story for the last 30 days. Congrats. I just read it again and still love it. Donb9033 |
| 2009-04-29 00:57:30 |
Who's Your Daddy? (A Daughter's Love) |
For reader from 4/28/09 15:29 - eat it. You only have negative comments for every story on this site. If you don't like them - don't read them. Go somewhere else. If you need a suggestion as to where you should go; let me know. I have some ideas. In the mean time, stuff it. |
| 2008-09-04 00:37:59 |
Jason's Little Family: The Beginning Chapter 6 |
Like I said on the forum, you are the Julia Childs of this site (and I don't mean because you spy for the OSS) - you cook. Great series. |
| 2008-05-15 02:06:41 |
Ben 10 and the new alien chapter 5 |
You bet ur assss that ur splng sux. Try using a dictionary or a school to get a clue. Anyway - good story. Thanks for the continuing efforts. A lot of us really enjoy all of your stories. |
| 2008-05-14 18:01:59 |
Horny Loving Brother Chapter 28 |
Welcome back. I've been looking for stories from my favorite writers for several days, all to no avail until today. Good continuation. Thanks. |
| 2008-05-09 14:06:37 |
Father Terrence |
Very good story. Fully equal to your other stories. A sequel would be a very good thing. |
| 2008-05-04 02:32:45 |
The Awakening of Katie II |
Even if some words were spelled incorrectly, the story was superb. Do not take George in Cincy's constructive criticism the wrong way. Keep writing. Proof reading will help a lot, but above all, keep writing. |
| 2008-05-01 13:33:48 |
The Awakening of Katie II |
Thanks for posting part II so soon. The entire story was really entertaining and worth the time to read. Keep writing. |
| 2008-04-30 18:14:00 |
Ben 10 and the New Alien Chapter 10 |
Great series. Very entertaining. I thoroughly enjoy all of your stories. Keep it cumming. |
| 2008-04-30 13:29:56 |
The Awakening of Katie |
What a great story - please hurry with part 2. I don't know if you realize it yet, but you have just joined the list of my favorite authors. Keep it up. |