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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2008-11-09 09:56:03 |
controlling the town |
4/10 |
| 2008-11-09 09:38:28 |
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In answer to the the question about the girls' name: if you'd read the first page of the story (instead of skipping to the sex parts!), it's explained there. 'Sassy' is an abbreviated version of the girl's full name, Saskia: a nickname, if you like. |
| 2008-11-09 09:35:46 |
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Part Five is in progress... Apologies it's taking so long... |
| 2008-10-06 14:34:25 |
The CUriosity of Young Girls - Part One |
A note to the last comment:
You COMPLETELY invalidated any credibility you may have had. - and blew any chance of having your comments taken seriously - by including a personal 'dig' at me. You haven't even got the balls to include your name, so why should anyone give any thought or consideration to the ,what might have been, interesting points you raised? |
| 2008-09-18 14:12:08 |
To My Hearts Desire |
Wow BR! after reading this it made me wish I had a friend like you to write me sexy and passionate letters like yours... I thought it was brilliant.
Please, write another one... |
| 2008-09-12 18:19:51 |
The Things Girls Say! Part Two - Telling Tracey |
Thank you so much for your comments!
Part Three is in progress and should be posted soon (I'm working on several projects at the moment, so please be patient) |
| 2008-09-10 12:23:03 |
The CUriosity of Young Girls - Part One |
Thaks, Hollowman, for your comments.
You're right: I did 'leap' quickly, but only for the sake of literary expediency. The story would have been twice as long as it already is had I progessed the story as it needed. My feeling was that it would have become bogged down unneccessairy had I done so, hence the leap... I hope it didn't spoil your (or any other reader's) enjoyment of the story too much... |
| 2008-09-08 15:37:27 |
The CUriosity of Young Girls - Part One |
Larry... How far into the story did you get before you decided you wewre reading "the world's most disgusting story"? I'd hazzard a guess that you read most, if not all, of it. That suggests you gained more enjoyment from it that you like to admit to yourself...
I am not about to defend myself or my work. It stands on its own merits (or otherwise). It is entertainment; no more or less.
By the way, it IS physically possible for an average size boy to penetrate a young girl without causing her physical harm, as has been proved with bigger endowed guys and even younger girls than the one in my story. |
| 2008-09-03 04:04:19 |
The CUriosity of Young Girls - Part One |
This is FICTION: It's made up, not real, pretend. If you don't like it, don't read it. It really is that simple. There is absolutely no point in posting comments like some of those here. You're wasting your own time.
Regarding the guy's penis: I took the view that, on average, most guys are not that well-endowed. I aim for realism rather than sensationalism in my stories. If I'd said the guy had an eight inch penis, it would have destroyed any 'credibility' the story might have had. I considered that most guys reading this (and my other stories) would be able to relate more easily to a realistic-sized penis than something more outrageous.
Thank you all for your comments... and keep them coming. They are useful for future stories. |
| 2008-09-02 17:49:45 |
Love poem for Nikki |
poor... disappointingly so...
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| 2008-09-02 17:39:50 |
Little Boy |
Clumsy and poorly paced. Try reading more poetry before trying to write it.
A good idea done badly I'm afraid... |
| 2008-09-02 17:28:58 |
Make Me Dinner |
why waste a reasonably good talent on dross like this?
you have a good vocabulary, so why don't you try putting it to better use than writing crap like this. I'm sure you could be quite successful if you put your mind to it. |