Comments from lollylover
|2008-09-02 17:28:58||Make Me Dinner||why waste a reasonably good talent on dross like this?
you have a good vocabulary, so why don't you try putting it to better use than writing crap like this. I'm sure you could be quite successful if you put your mind to it.
|2008-09-02 17:39:50||Little Boy||Clumsy and poorly paced. Try reading more poetry before trying to write it.
A good idea done badly I'm afraid...
|2008-09-02 17:49:45||Love poem for Nikki||poor... disappointingly so...|
|2008-09-03 04:04:19||The CUriosity of Young Girls - Part One||This is FICTION: It's made up, not real, pretend. If you don't like it, don't read it. It really is that simple. There is absolutely no point in posting comments like some of those here. You're wasting your own time.
Regarding the guy's penis: I took the view that, on average, most guys are not that well-endowed. I aim for realism rather than sensationalism in my stories. If I'd said the guy had an eight inch penis, it would have destroyed any 'credibility' the story might have had. I considered that most guys reading this (and my other stories) would be able to relate more easily to a realistic-sized penis than something more outrageous.
Thank you all for your comments... and keep them coming. They are useful for future stories.
|2008-09-08 15:37:27||The CUriosity of Young Girls - Part One||Larry... How far into the story did you get before you decided you wewre reading "the world's most disgusting story"? I'd hazzard a guess that you read most, if not all, of it. That suggests you gained more enjoyment from it that you like to admit to yourself...
I am not about to defend myself or my work. It stands on its own merits (or otherwise). It is entertainment; no more or less.
By the way, it IS physically possible for an average size boy to penetrate a young girl without causing her physical harm, as has been proved with bigger endowed guys and even younger girls than the one in my story.