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Story title |
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| 2010-11-26 08:24:39 |
The General |
Good story. Pity about your appalling grammar. You could at least work out the difference between 'your' and 'you're'. Christ there is just the 'a' missing from the 'are' in 'you're'!
OK almost nobody gets 'lay' and 'lie' correct.
Buy a book on simple English grammar. |
| 2010-11-20 06:19:56 |
Love In Pompeii |
See the benefits of learning Latin! Just one cavil: 'pants' weren't invented in those days. |
| 2010-11-20 06:03:23 |
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suggest you learn to spell and how to write before continuing |
| 2010-11-20 06:03:01 |
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suggest you learn to spell and how to write before continuing |
| 2010-11-12 09:25:36 |
My life with Steph |
This is a great story - correct pace, correct spelling (!) and filled with anticipatory material. I can\'t wait for the next episode - which, I hope will be one of many |
| 2010-11-12 09:24:47 |
My life with Steph |
This is a great story - correct pace, correct spelling (!) and filled with anticipatory material. I can\'t wait for the next episode - which, I hope will be one of many |
| 2010-11-12 09:24:26 |
My life with Steph |
This is a great story - correct pace, correct spelling (!) and filled with anticipatory material. I can\'t wait for the next episode - which, I hope will be one of many |
| 2010-10-03 04:07:17 |
My first experience |
Before writing I suggest that you learn to punctuate (there are other punctuation marks besides the dash), learn to put a question mark after a question and, most importantly use quotation marks. Then learn the difference between 'cant' and 'can't', 'wont' and won't' etc. Otherwise a little tedious as many respondants have mentioned. |
| 2010-06-02 07:34:37 |
It all started on the school bus. |
Such a wonderful change! A literate person writing - perfect English!
Thanks, just keep the chapters flowing |
| 2010-05-20 04:01:24 |
I built my own sextoy |
I begin to wonder if you porn writers have ever had genuine sex. The vginal secretions are just that- secretions produced by the cells lining the vagina. Women do not squirt |
| 2009-11-04 05:44:01 |
Fathers Joy |
A little advice:
Go back to school and learn spelling and grammar.
Learn the limits of a man's ability to ejaculate
Reaad your stries after writing to make the hundreds of corrections needed |