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Date Story title Comment
2009-06-13 05:38:16 James School, The Beggining This might be a good story but because of the horrible grammar, I didn't last two minutes. Spell check and editor.
2009-08-31 12:09:35 Babysitting Betsy Wetsy The dialogue in this story is atrocious.
2010-06-28 01:17:10 The Amulet part 2 This story doesn't go anywhere. Just one fuck scene after the other. What's the point?
2012-10-24 23:52:56 My homeless stepdaughter Part 1 Don't switch from 1st person to 3rd person mid-story like that, it's jarring. Just stay with 3rd.
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