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Story title |
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| 2012-12-15 20:23:39 |
Marie's Christmas |
The humour in the story was wonderful! Not too much of it to detract from the overall tale - I really did smile when the Queen stomped on Marie's foot!!
Brilliantly written, fabulous tale!!
smc |
| 2012-11-10 15:42:04 |
The Wrong Choice ? |
Well done that man! A rather strange tale - strong on emotion without being too emotional.
Congrats Pandy :) |
| 2012-08-27 17:58:48 |
The Wolves of Paris. |
I loved this story! You managed to bring a wholly mythical creature and plonk it in an amazing period of history!
Well done and the very, very best of luck! |
| 2012-03-13 14:32:13 |
Best Little Whorehouse on XNXX: Virgins In The Whorehouse! |
Terrible story --- terribly good, that is haha!!
And just who on earth is this mild mannered Cathie, the ruddy slut!!
Well done Horse, and good luck in the competition!! |
| 2010-08-09 19:18:53 |
The Ballad of Cornelius Erectus de Roma (part 1) |
Great story!! A lot of good descriptions of the actual sex acts, and - omg!! A plot!!
Thanks to Seemingly Satisfied for linking this story recommendation. Now, I'm going to see if there's a chapter two!!
smcaaphd |
| 2010-04-09 21:13:55 |
Passion |
Only cos I a-muse ewe peanut!! *grin* |
| 2010-04-09 19:54:01 |
Passion |
How terribly spicy and erm naughty but nicey!!
Well done peanut!! |
| 2010-04-09 19:40:41 |
Passion |
How terribly spicy and erm naughty but nicey!!
Well done peanut!! |
| 2009-06-21 10:01:38 |
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Hi!! smcaaphd here - I just wanted to address the question left by Wantsomefun:
The reason I didn't go into detail as to the punishments Birch suffered at the hands of his fellow inmates was because I felt this would have given some sympathy to him from the readers. He was the aggressor, and detailed descriptions would have turned him into a victim, worthy of such sympathy.
When writing the story, I held back a lot on in-depth descriptions on all abuses and tended to merely hint at the abuses he was guilty of and suffered because this was not the point of the story. I didn't want it to become a story about paedophilic acts, nor about prison brutality. We know it happens, we know children are victimised and that those that commit such acts become victims themselves at the hands of others.
To go into such detail would perhaps have given people cause to comment about it being yet another paedo story. And it wasn't. It was more exploring the 'public justice' by people who have acc |
| 2009-06-05 18:33:45 |
TRY IT ON FOR SIZE |
Leslie, I mirror donb's comments - great story (andwriting style), and more chapters please!!
smc |
| 2009-05-06 20:05:12 |
Where Am I? |
Wow!! Moving stuff - you lose the tempo of the verse in parts, but it doesn't detract from the whole thing at all!!
Good work, keep writing!!
smc |
| 2009-04-15 11:11:11 |
Karen |
Oh ejls!! How still waters run deep!! A truly brilliant story, just the right amount of background to make me cross my fingers for a happy ending before Karen even met Matt!!
Thank you sweetie, please keep writing :kisses: |
| 2009-04-15 10:59:07 |
Karen |
Oh ejls!! How still waters run deep!! A truly brilliant story, just the right amount of background to make me cross my fingers for a happy ending before Karen even met Matt!!
Thank you sweetie, please keep writing :kisses: |
| 2009-01-16 11:49:17 |
Bar Snack |
Hmm!! I love a good fantasy!! Thank ewe!! |
| 2009-01-16 11:47:40 |
Their Valentine Surprises |
Fantastic story!! Thank ewe Sahara |