| Date |
Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-07-01 01:33:57 |
My interesting summer |
Why do you switch between 1st person and 3rd person? I can't be bothered reading something so badly written. -ve vote |
| 2012-07-01 01:26:50 |
My wifes arrest Chapter 1 |
please use a spell checker. "leggs" "marijuna" etc |
| 2012-04-26 03:48:53 |
Dirty wife Rachael |
gentiles are non jews, pubs are places to drink beer. I couldn't be bothered reading any further. |
| 2010-07-07 04:20:10 |
Vacation at the beach |
waste for waist? right for write? Spell checker does not pick up these errors! |
| 2010-06-17 01:58:33 |
Last fling |
At the start Sian was his fiancee and Tania turned into Sian/Siam. Very lazy editing! |
| 2010-05-01 00:57:53 |
Phone call |
It's just not English. |
| 2009-06-23 00:08:17 |
Best Friends Prego Wife Pt 1 |
Good start but too short
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| 2009-04-17 01:18:36 |
Carol and Lyn, episode 14 |
These are great stories, but why are you posting them again? |
| 2009-04-11 00:20:01 |
Bisexual Biology Teacher |
Doesn't make any sense. |
| 2009-02-12 02:29:56 |
Sam & Alicia 2 |
'gaol' is the Australian English and English English spelling for American English 'jail'. |
| 2008-11-17 23:35:01 |
A night to remember |
Different! I lie different. |
| 2008-11-10 22:41:37 |
Summer Camp Diaries 1 |
I cannot read this. It is all upper case. |
| 2008-11-10 22:20:05 |
There was no other way |
Finished too soon. |